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  • Bubbleloveworld

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    Strong not wrong
    January 24th, 2012 at 04:36am
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    I love this sooo much, I can tell that gerad is holding back with his feelings but I know it's because he still harbors wrong feelings for scarlett
    January 24th, 2012 at 04:36am
  • Going with the tide

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    Hey gal, where'd you go? Dr Who was great wasn't it! The ending, I was like... awwww!! He can cry happy :) hows u? looking forward to the next installment of this, on school break so hanging on you girl :) take care and god bless xx
    December 31st, 2011 at 05:05am
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Scary dreams, maybe seeing as Gee (love him and his creativeness) made the kick-ass character she'll see herself as that and take down those god awful dreams. This is the time for making sweets!! And eating them too! :) I've had so many cookies in the last couple weeks it's so not me haha. It was SUSPENSEFUL!! Woot! Can't wait for more! :)
    December 16th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • HarryPotterFreakie

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    Scarlet needs a superhero name now...I shall think on it.
    December 16th, 2011 at 12:08am
  • Aimbo

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    Wonderful chapter Lyz! I loved it. I was actually scared for Scarlet, as she was having the dream. It's nice she got some Gee-time :D From light to dark, the transition was incredible.

    Oh my MikeyRayFrankingGee! Isn't Gee lovely? They all are though :D

    Im glad my update dance got the Lyzsi stamp of approval :D Good luck with your painting Lys :D

    We'll have to Skype sometime soon :D We haven't spoken in a while.

    Merry Almost Christmas :D
    December 15th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • katiecharlie123

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    awwh i love the picture great chapter xx

    merry christmas xx
    December 15th, 2011 at 12:57pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    rachemical - It was L.A. and I wanted to write my tattoo in...I couldn't help it (although mine was done here in Solihull; but I can daydream it was by Kat hehe). Darker chapters intrigue me, because sometimes too much light-heartedness turn this into a fantasy-type thing; rather than a story with a real moral stance and message to tell. At least, that's what the brain part of me says :P Enjoy the shiny new update!

    ImFromMars - I googled 'long beach' and wiki gave me a list of 'noteable residents' I saw Syn's name, and couldn't help it :P I'm trying to get my updating more regular, so I can get on with writing other stuff as well with the increased motivation. I don't want this to be one of those stories never finished, and during the block it felt like that :/ But luckily - I'VE SAVED IT! :D :D Btw, everytime I see you say how happy you are with the updates, it makes me grin just as wide (if not more)!!

    katiecharlie123 - I'm glad you were waiting for High Voltage to appear...it makes it seem more logical I did that ^_^ The 'abbreviated' scene will be settled in due time, I promise ^_^

    Going with the tide - I was on a roll, I couldn't control! *dances at the happy rhyme there* I love that you're still firmly team Gerard, even though I let you down with the choice she made. Maybe I should write an alternate version where she chooses Gee...? ;-P I still haven't watched much of Torchwood...I should borrow my mom's boxset! I'm not sure whether they'd like a copy of GMaRtB or IFD...I reckon they'd freak out over certain bits involving them. It's weird on some extent to write happily married men as single, and hanging out with two random brit-gurls - especially since I love their wives and how happy they make them in real life so much! *Reality Vs. Fiction is hard!* Nice name change btw, goes with the next chapter kinda... ^_^

    HarryPotterFreakie - I wish it was my day too. The Way's would be lucky to have you ;-D

    Kiss_Me_Cryptic - I actually can't even remember the last time I went to a beach...I think I'm trying to dreg up ancient memories :P Tattoos are awesome, and I totally get that some people don't like her too much...I kinda worried that'd scare people off; but I'm glad you liked it in the story :] I want sweets...and a beach party...and randomly, I want beer too :P Hope ya like the *long* new update ^_^

    xlookalivesunshinex - SHAZZY!!! Have you read all three of the updates I did since coming back the other day, or just two...? They all kinda have tiiiiiny clues to future stuff/plots etc I know how hard it is...especially since my memory of my writing sucks, so I read it back at 4 in the morning before I post and laugh so loud, it sounds like I'm possessed! ^_^ You wait 'til you see some of the other nicknames I've got coming... *plan laugh* I loves you toooo!! You don't need my talent, you have flippin' UBER-EPIC talent of your own!!! :D :D

    Aimbo - I updated three times in all, if you've read 6, 7, and 8 ^_^ I knew you were going to your brother's thing; but I was sat here twiddling my thumbs going 'I hope Australia/Amy likes it!' I'm trying to get back to an update schedule, so that my brain picks up and I write for the other stories too - mainly our co-write :] I like your update dance...it is approved ^_^ Mikey is lovely to write for, and I mean that in a non-patronising way :] Barbeques FTW!!

    coolchessplayer - You don't need to apologise at all my dear, I'm just glad you've liked the last 3 updates ^_^ I hope you like Chapter Nine...it starts out pretty rough and heavy.

    This comment thread is by FAR the best on the site *I'm bias, I know.* You're all keeping me going, and making my December pretty damn awesome too! :D <3
    December 15th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • Going with the tide

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    Hey, just to let you know, it's still me. First I was Miss A, then I Miss You, now Going with the tide. I get bored of usernames lol :) x
    December 14th, 2011 at 02:06pm
  • coolchessplayer

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    THIS IS BUBBLELOVE WORLD GGGGGRRRRRRR!!!!!! My sister always leaves her account logged on!!
    December 13th, 2011 at 02:42am
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    i thouroughly apologize for not commenting on the last to chapters but L.A seems like its going to be a challenging time for their friendship and that cassies thing has got me a bit worried.but chaper eight i love the tatto idea and i think the whole bbq idea is great its definatly going to be intereasting!
    December 13th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • Aimbo

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    Oh and Mikey is adorable :D

    Beach barbeque! Yay!
    December 12th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • Aimbo

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    I swear, I was away for three days due to my brothers ballet concert from hell, and you've updated...TWICE! You're back in buisness! I adored both of those chapters. How can you make a storyvamazingly funny, crazily depressing, lovely in general and cute, with such depth?!?! I don't know how you do it Lyz!

    My update dance - jumping around, Moshing, screaming/chanting UPDATE!

    You write Innocence For Days. Lol.

    Im sneaking on so, gtg.

    I'm really happy queen bitch has stopped bugging you :D
    December 12th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    Lyzsi...I honestly cannot stress how much I love this story. Kat Von D!!! and Syn Gates!!! xD
    But seriously, those last two chapters were amazing, and so freakin' funny! I'm up reading it at half 11, and do you have any idea how hard it is reading about trees and Hugh Grant and people-with-the-name-of-a-sausage and not laugh your ass off? xD
    I love you Lyzsi :'D GIVE ME YOUR TALENT!!
    <3 xxxxx
    December 12th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Yes I figured you loved brewing suspense Lol, the beach idea sounds amazing I haven't been to a beach in two years, Tattoos! I loved the Kat Von D part (don't particular like her) I just like tattoos :), and the secret of the little party on the beach lol, I've done that with my friend once though it was with all sweets, Can't wait for the next update! The Suspense is killing me! haha
    December 11th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • HarryPotterFreakie

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    I wish this way my day today...except I would have taken advantage of Mikey and Gerard Way.
    December 11th, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • Going with the tide

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    Yay! 3 updates in 3 days! You're spoiling me girl! Love this chapter, still things heating up at last :) I feel really sorry for Gerard, think that Scarlet should really be with him lol BF not so much into dr who, but really likes Torchwood, so that's a compromise I can live with lol no, not nicknames, during GMaRtB I was always begging teachers to let me on their computers so I could check mibba and I think I'm going to start having to do that again for IfD :) I think you shoud really print GMaRtB off and send it to the my chem guys, I think they'd love it :) keep it up girl x
    December 11th, 2011 at 03:48pm
  • katiecharlie123

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    yay in la was waiting for high voltage to make an appearance haha awesome tattoo
    trusting you on the 'abbriviated' scene haha
    keep writing xx
    December 11th, 2011 at 11:39am
  • ImFromMars

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    You should see my face right now. My grin is like thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis big! I mean, walking 'round in L.A. with Mikey and Frank? SQUEAL! I'm jealous of Scarlet, I wanna be doing that too. And just FYI if I walked around and the house of Syn Gates was pointed out to me, I would not be able to contain myself. I'd probably run over there and attack his house or something else that'd label me as a 'crazy fan' (more than I already am, that is).

    And seriously. WOW. So fucking epic I can't even- jdkdnfdndfn SHE GOT TATTOED BY KAT VON D!!!!!! How freaking epic isn't that?! Just Waaaaah dbdbjekfnf! Lucky freaking person!

    I'm so, so glad that you didn't wait five weeks to update ;) all I had to do was to sleep for a little while and when I woke up; voila! Awesomesausy-epicness on a VERY high level, if you ask me.
    Though, I have to say if there's darker stuff coming up, I can't wait for them either. I just wanna read your stuff and I'll be happy! ;D<3
    December 11th, 2011 at 09:01am
  • rachemical

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    Omgeezy, they took Scarlet to Kat Von D's shop!!!!
    She's so lucky :D
    And uh-oh "more darker chapters"? o.o
    *patiently waiting for chapter 9* :D
    December 11th, 2011 at 07:51am