Illusions - Comments

So I've probably missed the boat on this story. I just found this one, while you're well into your sequel, but I just wanted to tell you how wonderful I think this story is. I'm only on about chapter four, but I can honestly say that this story is so well written. A lot of stories, especially Crosby ones, are written for the hell of it and don't have a lot of structure to them. I really like reading this story, and I can't wait to read more and get onto your sequel! I'm resisting the urge to read the rest of the comments here- I need to find out if they end up together. They hate each other, and I totally want them to fall in love.

I just finished this story and loved it. Can't wait to read the sequel!

I am so sad this is over, I really loved it. I hope you do a sequel but I understand if you don't.

I really hope you do a sequel, I love this story!.

I can't! this was just! all my feels!
I really thought Sid would still find her at the end of the game! but that would have been to cliche wouldn't it? But i was freaking out as i read this! (in a good way of course) I can't believe this is over!
There better be a sequel!! they have to be together!!

sequeeeeelllllllllllll

Please write a sequel for illusions

Absolutely loved this story!! You did a great job! I know I would love a sequel :-)

I loved this story. I definitely think you should write a sequel, but it's up to you. I'm curious to see what happens to Loren and Sid.

I loved this story so much. That's alot coming from me. Especially since I normally don't read stories about Sid. I'm just not a huge fan of his, or the Penguins. On top of that all the Sid stories are the absolute same, cliche crappy fluff. [I love the fluff, but I like realistic stories more. Stories that don't always have the happy endings. That's just not real. Save that shit for Disney.]

I thought it was an amazing journey you took us on. I loved the end. I would love a sequel. But at the same time, if you decide not to do so, I understand. It was a good way to end the story.

If you do write a sequel, I would love to see where Loren's next adventure takes her and where it leaves Sid.

Now that this part of this story is done, can you update Max please?

Can't believe it's over.
Definitely want a sequel though, so many unanswered questions! haha

Count away. Definitely want a sequel. Loved this story and hope for more

Oh my god... the ending. That was amazing. You need to write a sequel.

oh gosh, you just have to do a sequel!!!!! i was really intrigued by the way you ended it :)

Sequel please! I loved reading this story and I really hope it continues :)

Waaah! It's over. Ugh. Normally I don't like sequels because I find most author's tend to screw it up, however, I feel like this one deserves one because honestly those two need to end up together or something. Also, you're right too many unanswered questions. kcxfjvak;shdfkjasnj

So yeah...until next time.

I absolutely loved this story, I really hope you decide to write a sequel!

I absolutely loved this story, I really hope you decide to write a sequel!

The story was great, I really like it; still, I need a sequel to bring the characters some sort of 'closure' (and a happy ending, please!)... a lovely story.

I hope you do a sequel because this story was great!