Illusions - Comments

I really love this story, and the latest chapter is amazing! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.

I really love this story, and the latest chapter is amazing! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.

They fired her!! I can't even!!
And Sid! I hope he fights for her too! or Talks to the media all on his own and save her reputation....

As for new stories..... I really want to read a good Dan Carcillo story! and whit his suspension/injury it could be a good story line.... also who Doesn't Love the Blackhawks!

I can believe that Mario actually fired Loren - I feel so badly for her. I just hate it when people like Rhea get away with crap like that and they really dont bear any responsibility.

I just hope Sidney does not sit back and let this happen. I hope he realizes that Loren is the girl for him and that he is willing to fight to make that happen. Obviously Mario sees how much Sid cares - and maybe that scares him as well.

The emotion in this chapter is amazing - the anger, the hurt, the betrayal - it all rings so true on many levels. Please continue on. I really enjoy reading your work!

can I just say "I knew it"
at times it was so obvious, really
but then it wasn't and I was like: wait what?
and now this :(
FIGHT FOR HER SIDNEY!

great chapter, looking forward to more as soon as you can!

I love this story so so much. And I appolgize for not commenting on either this story or your Max story as much as I should.

I can't wait to see how the next update goes. I'm really looking forawrd to it and seeing how management and the whole organization deal with this situation tha has been handed to them.. How Sidney responds to what has been handed to Loren and how will he respond towards Kris?

As for sugesstions of new reading material, I have a list of my favorite writters and some stories that I'm reading on my profile. Feel free to check them out. Especially Sam's stories. They are amazing! If none of those players do anything for you, I have other stories I'mr eading that I can suggest as well, I just don't want to clog up my profile. :)

I really like your SC:87 story I think your. Next story should be about the Winter Classic I know that it is like here but I think that would be a cool idea

It made sense to me, and I loved it. man that girl is a bitch! I like the fact that you added in that nobody in her family will be in the NHL again. That made me feel a bit better knowing that rhea wasn't going to get anything out of this besides ruining her ex best friends life, and honestly we don't know if she really did yet. I hope they don't fire her even though in real life that is probably exactly what would happen as soon as she walks through the door. please update this like now.

I must admit that in my last comment I could definitely see that the campbells were going to be trouble - I just hope Loren and Sid can weather the storm. Loren hasnt done anything wrong but it is all perception - I hope all her good work is taken into account.

I agree, julietfalls is one of the best out there - a few others not already mentioned are marchintothesea, blueeyes24 and one of my all time favs, Nics stories.

WOW I didn't expect that
devil's advocate for real!
I hope it's the "slap on the wrist" option but I don't think it is :S
that just friggin blows :( everyone was starting to become friends and now it's all ruined and it's not even her fault :S

as for reading material: julietfalls writes AMAZING stories and you can also read mine if you want ;)

I stumbled upon this story and I’m so glad that I did. Love it.

oh snap! so much Dram coming up!!
I agree with julietfalls and hockey bliss have amazing stories also PensRock has great Staal ones! and if you like Ben Smith there's a really good one you should check out! its called Hard Before the Easy

O: ! oh i feel so bad for her!!
&&& i would recommend blissink's stories if you haven't already read them, but there's also stories by millertime that are really good! (:

Wow, definitely wasn't expecting that! And anything by julietfalls is amazing!

I feel like there's going to be some major drama soon. Love it!!

Very intense and amazing writing style. love it

Love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh god. Can't wait for moooore. :)

I love the fact that Sid seems to have decided to himself that Loren is the girl for him - he has just neglected to let her in on this fact. Maybe sometime soon.

But I cant help but think that the Campbell family could cause Loren and Sid some big problems.

I hope I am wrong, though.

Loving this story!

oh snap!
DRAMA DRAMA!!