Illusions - Comments

I would love to read a sequel. It just seems that they both started to figure out who they were and what they wanted. And while Loren is moving on to another chapter in her life, it just seems that the previous one hadnt been completed. There was so much left unsaid.

I hope you think about a sequel.

I love your writing and I really like this and I hope you continue it in a sequel!

Wow, what an ending. Man you must do a sequel!

I can't seem to read chapter 12. It redirects me to chapter 10...

This is awesome :)

damn, way to rip their chest out of their hearts and mine too! :(
I hope this all gets worked out somehow!
my opinion on a sequel: if we get a happy end, we don't need one, if there's no happy end, you damn well better do one, girl, cause if Loren remains as screwed over as she is right now, there will be hell to pay! ;)
<3

Wow.

I'm torn as to what I want her to do. I can see it going both ways.

This chapter!! this freaking Chapter!
I can't even! I just am an emotional wreck for both of them!
god i hope they end up together!
as to where to send her..... I say Chicago ;)

So let me just say something: I don't watch Hockey.
I don't know these teams, how they look, who they are, etc. but I loved this.
This was amazing! The way you write is really beautiful and I love your writing style as well as your description. I hope there's a sequel, I'd love to see them together again in the future or anything really, I love the Loren and Sidney pairing, their kind of like oil and water but I still love the chemistry - that was undeniable.
Please update soon! :D

Oh know! How sad, can't wait for the next chapter!!

This chapter was very well written - the emotions were incredibly raw. My heart broke for both of them. I really hope this is not the end for these two. They seem to have a real connection that I really wish they could explore. Sid even said at one point that he thought Loren could be the one.

Call me a sap, but I want a happy ending for them.

Great update! I can't wait to read what happens next.

you should totally have her leave and then flash foward to them running into each other again somewhere.can't wait for the next chapter

great chapter! i want to know who offered her a job!!!!!!

great chapter cant wait for more

that was crazy. what is going to happen? can't wait to find out. please update again soon

I just found and read this story and I LOVE it!

Wow! I didn't expect that. I mean I expected a punnishment of some sort, but not Mario actually firing her. I was hoping she would explain and be put on a probationary period or something.

I understand where they are both coming from. Mario doesn't want the organization to be looked at as "Come work for me and then hook up with a player w/o consequence." But I see where Sid is coming from. He needs someone that is there for him both personally and professionally. Someone that won't hound him about his return.

If Mario doesn't offer her job back, Sidney better do so, even if he has to pay for her personally. I can't wait.

Can you do a Luke or Brayden Schenn story next, please? Or a Tampa Bay Lightning one, perferably Steve Downie?

Did any of those stories I had listed on my profile help you out in finding new reading material? Let me know, because if not, like I said I have more stories I'm reading.

I can't tell you how emotional that chapter just made me. Ugh, I feel like I'm about to go cry! haha

I can't tell you how upset I was with Sid... This seriously just made me tear up and everything. I wanted to go throw a tantrum.

I love your story! I don't think I've ever commented on it before, but I do love it! It's so well written. I alway get excited when I see there's a new chapter out because I know I won't be disappointed. Maybe terribly upset (right now), but not disappointed. I'm ready to see what Sid does next. Because he better do something or I'll probably go cry in frustration and rip my hair out.

Keep it up! =)

I can't believe they actually fired her. This chapter was by far the best thing ever!
I love how Sid finally (sorta) admitted his feelings about her and how bad he needs her.
Amazing update:)
Can't wait for more!