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  • temporarylove

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    I like this. It's interesting and complex and very different. Can't wait for more. I wanna see Jordan flip shit. :) hahaha.

    Keep on, keeping on.
    December 18th, 2011 at 06:40am
  • Katie.Kit.Kat

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    I can not stand Rhea. At. All. She makes me so angry.

    I love this story, by the way! You've developed the characters so well. I always enjoy seeing you've updated!
    December 18th, 2011 at 03:28am
  • Dashing Doll

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    Thank god! I was waiting for when she was gonna kick that girl out! Rhea just had bad news written all over her!
    Haha loved the update:)
    December 10th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • bublbabie

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    WOW! is it wrong that I was hoping she would kick her out? I could feel this coming for a while now. please update this again immediately. I have to know what is going to happen next. What is Rhea going to do to try and make her regret kicking her out?
    December 10th, 2011 at 12:04am
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    That was intense. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    December 9th, 2011 at 01:21am
  • xbeccabee

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    Fabulous! Can't wait for more. :)
    December 9th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    oh snap
    got some drama coming!
    December 8th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • ch33rali101

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    Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved all the action!
    December 8th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • samlo

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    Awesome update. I loved how long this one was. Update soon, please?
    December 8th, 2011 at 07:19pm
  • almaniac

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    Can I just say that I love the way you portray Letang? So precious. Oh and keep up the good work! :D
    December 7th, 2011 at 09:34am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ahhh they're getting along!!
    love love loved the update!!
    November 17th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • soupy

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    Just found this story today - I am really loving it!

    I like the banter between the two of them - but I also like that things are thawing between them. I like that they are both socially awkward and they are misinterpreting the signals the other is sending. Hopefully they will slowly start to figure things out.
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:24am
  • almaniac

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    This story is fantastic, please update soon. (:
    November 14th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • natashax29xx

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    i love this story, please update it soon and i would love it if you wrote a kris letang story! (:
    November 14th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • xbeccabee

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    This is literally the best story ever.

    And I freaking love the layout.
    November 11th, 2011 at 04:21pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    so glad she put Sid in his place!
    and is there gonna be a bit of a love triangle with Kris ;)
    love love loved the update!!!
    November 11th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • fairytalesandfakes

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    Can you do the Kris letang story and when you make a new story can you change the story so that the writing is darker and the background is lighter. It makes the story a lot easier to read.
    November 6th, 2011 at 07:16pm
  • samlo

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    Loved the update. So excited for the next. I love how you added in Jordan making Sidney uncomfortable. I loved seeing his jealous side. It almost makes him seem human.

    As for your next story I as much as I like Kris Letang I love Max Talbot more. Whenever I'm given a choice and Max is an option, 9 times out of 10 I'm going to pick Max. Unless it's a Lightning player. ;)
    November 6th, 2011 at 04:58am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    Ohhh Sid was so jelly!
    And he so loves her, hahaha his last statement about the breakfast!
    Love love loved it!!
    November 4th, 2011 at 06:56pm
  • samlo

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    Loved the update, please keep Rhea and Jordan in this story. :)
    November 2nd, 2011 at 07:48am
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