Illusions - Comments

I have tears from laughing so hard. No big deal she just caught some giant fucking her roommate in her kitchen. I'd clean every surface in that kitchen. I'd also never be able to look at it the same. That room was a slut. The Rhea/Jord dynamic may make it interesting...and by interesting I mean funny in that Loren just might catch them in some other compromising positions.

Subscribed and ready for the next update.

i love this!!
lol they got caught.... awkward!
can not wait for more!

Firstly, sorry for being a silent reader. To make up for my silence I shall post lots of feedback for you ))) However, I can’t believe that you only have one comment on this story. Talk about awkward.

Now lets get onto feedback. Three chapters in and I can easily see myself falling in love with this story. Although it uses the popular assistant/player plot line, you have managed to make it your own. You elude to the fact Loren may have some feelings towards Sidney, but I am glad for the most part that their relationship isn’t all sunshine and daisies.
I also like the appearance of Tanger, it allows the reader to toy with the idea of a possible Loren/Tanger relationship further in the story. Overall, its engaging, extremely well written and keeps me wanting more.

Keep up your good work!

this is really great, i'm so glad to finally read an amazing sidney story! i hope that you update again soon!