The Mess I Made - Comments

Yeah he's in pet heaven now :) I remember when my fish died. I was devastated haha. But he was sick too and there wasn't really anything we could do, but now he's with the fishies in the sky. I like to make jokes about him too haha.

So on to the story...what an unexpected change of events. Wow. xD This. Is. Going. To be. Complicated! Gahh!! This is mindfuckery lol! I sort of felt that Cam had feelings for Skye...and now things have become incredibly awkward between them. Eep. And the tension builds...

Hey Its Ali!: I know XD he's coming though I promise! & Thank you! I forgot she had parents for a while and I seriously just remembered a few days ago. My bad :p oh well.
& Squirtle actually died Monday afternoon :/ my poor baby..so you know how in the beginning of the chapter it's just Skye typing how she felt? That was more me than it was her because I was thinking about him. I know he's just a turtle but he was like my baby! I had him for like 12 years...but at least he's no longer hurting.

Steven's just kinda trolling in the background of thr story. He's there, but we don't know too much about him yet, except for the fact that he exist xD I really liked this filler. Mainly because of Skye going to see her parents again. I thought it took a lot of guts for her to do that, and I'm also glad that her dad welcomed her with open arms <3

Btw: How's Squirtle doing? <3

ALLSTARLOVE333: Yeah, you're right. I'm just tired of the bad days. That's all I've had for the past 3 days or so.
& Thank you! In the original story I pretty much forgot all about her parents and it seemed like she was only focused on getting Zach back oops XD oh well I rewrote it for a reason right?

Well without bad days there are no good ones so it's simply give and take and taking life with the grain of salt I learned that they hard way :p

Alright well that chapter was a filler but I needed one if you ask me! I mean I think that isn't a loose end that should be unloose I mean they are her parents after all so good job with that :)

ALLSTARLOVE333: Yay thank youu :) WOOOOOOOOO I'm guessing your team Skye/Zach? Oh geez that couple name would be terrible...Sach...Zachlynne....just kidding. Ewie haha fjkfjskdfj
& Eh it's getting a little better! I still have to finish cleaning :/ and school tomorrow which I'm not ready to get back to. Bad days shouldn't even exist....blah

Well happy my weird psychanalzing helped!

Dude it was a filler but it was good

When Zach turned his head when she tried to kiss him I literally dropped my phone onto my lap and shot my hands into the air legit while saying YES anyway yay progress has been made and maybe the smile didn't reach his eyes but he still tried to smile back which says a lot!

I hope ur day got better I know bad days are terrible... I had about. Year more or less filled completely with bad days :/

Hey Its Ali!: He's getting a little bit better :/ but who knows fjdjfksf. I'm sorry that your day wasn't very good! There's always tomorrow.
&Thank you! I can't stand writing fillers but it had to be done. Got to love Mikey right :p and HEH IN YOUR FACE KATHERINE. I hate her so so much...but not as much as her brother Steven. I haven't written anything for him yet. He's a troll. XD

Haha turkeys. I hope Squirtle will be okay. Today sucked for me as well. I ramble a lot as well too. Lol. But I liked the chapter. Fillers are helpful chapters, so it kind of supported the story a bit more :) I really liked when Mikey was asking people to lift up their feet at Starbucks xD and when Zacb didn't let Katherine kiss him. If I were Skye, I'd silently laugh to myself haha. :)

Hey Its Ali!: Yes that's very true...sometimes I feel like mine are just barely there. I don't really have any big inner demons. If anything it's about the people around me...I just feel normal or my mom likes to say "constant". I never change. I stay exactly the same all the time. (I'm rambling here but you get the point...hopefully XD) YAY FOR SQUABBLING I LIKE THAT WORD...makes me think of turkeys :3

Cheese is fun...and so are caps haha. I do hope Zach is loosening up a bit...I think he sorta is. That's my prediction. But I think the characters are relatable because everyone's got their inner demons...not everyone has a perfect life. I think everyone has at least one traumatic event in their lives. And you're welcome. I don't think the characters are over the top at all. And I just want to say that I absolutely love Skyelynn and Zach's comebacks when they're squabbling lol. I can't believe I just used the word 'squabbling' haha. xD

ALLSTARLOVE333: When you said you like cheesy because it's yummy it reminded me of the first tweet I got back from them ffhsdjfh so weird haha. I really really don't mind the whole psychoanalyzing thing. The thank you is for reading and in a way you helped me understand Zach better! I was just kind of writing on impulse...whatever came to mind I would write it. I never really thought of him going to Starbucks because he wanted her to find him until you said it XD

I like cheesy... cheese is yummy!

and PLEASE tell me he is coming around! PLEASE! GAH PLEASE!

sorry about psychoanalyzed Zach... I have a terrible habit of doing that... especially when I read... the normally don't say them out loud tho... ops sorry! :P
happy I got the psychoanalyzed right :D

and what is the thank you for???

I gues we were all looking for Zach O.o we are lucky we found him O.lO

Hey Its Ali!: That's okay I'm forever alone too XD While I'm writing it I'm just like WHY ARE YOU NOT MINE!?

& Making them seem real is hard for me especially since I've made each of them have such huge problems. I always feel like it's a little too over the top to be relateable but you saying that makes me want to happy dance :P

THIS CHAPTER. SO CUTE. Cheese is the best kind of story. xD And you're welcome. I love how you come up with these adorable memories...I think the only negative thing is that it reminds me of how I'm forever alone lol. :)

I agree that I thought that Zach subconsciously wanted this to happen as well. ZACH IS STILL IN LOVE WITH SKYE AND NOTHING HURTS. At least, that's what I predict. I could be wrong since it is, well, your story haha. And I really like your psychoanalyizing. The fact that the characters are real enough to touch is what makes this story so entertaining and engaging. You can relate to them and you can really know their personality. The profiles are really accurate xD

ALLSTARLOVE333: :o seriously? WOOO! Funny thing is I had no idea what this chapter was going to be about until I started writing it. For days I had no idea where Zach was. It was like I was searching for him just like everyone else was. You just completely psychoanalyzed Zach. That's exactly how he is gdgjdgj that was just perfect. Gah thank you so much :)

alright so that is my fav chapter so far because well I LOVE how he asked her it's chessey and I love it, and Zach's stupid... in a way it's their place, who else would find you there.... so yeah he was subconciuosly wanting her ti find him (sorry I just did some AP Psych stuff...) and he is blind yeah she made mistakes, and yeah they were bad, but here is the thing girls often have angles so comforting him had an angle to it she knows he would trust her if she was there... sometimes being there isn't real... also yeah she made mistakes, bad ones, but she is trying to fix it. People change, you can't change them but they can change themselves, she has changed herself. Let her show you. Also He loves her he knows it, you don't choose who you love, but they are perfect for you, that's why you love them. I mean if he went through some more not sky related hell Kateline wouldn't be there Sky would.... he is blind by hurt, but hurt goes with him, love doesn't and that is why he is stupid... sorry this is a long comment/rant, but I blame my mood... I sorry :P

Hey Its Ali!: I love drama XD I watch soap operas, Degrassi, One Tree Hill, etc. I just watched this crazy One Tree Hill episode where everything was going down so that might be the way this is getting even more crazy haha and I don't take it wrong at all! I'd love to be a writer for it. My mom's always saying I should XD
& Thank you so much :D

Zach is blind, I say, blind! Lol this is really dramatic, but it's good. I think one day you could be writing episodes for shows like Degrassi haha. All their characters have the strangest little flaws as well haha. I hope you don't take that wrong or anything....

But gosh this is amazing. All the rising action really makes for some suspenseful stuff! Great work! :D

ALLSTARLOVE333: Zach has no idea whatsoever! He's with Katherine only because she was there for him when Skye wasn't. Only Michael, Skye, and of course Steven know about what happened. Thank you for reading<3