The Mess I Made - Comments

Ah it was good a curve ball... I'm interested and how can Zach date her knowing what her bro did? Really and then keep her around to torture mike jackass ops I mean cough jackass cough lol anyway afraid I dont have much to say... I woke up and read so I assume that's why... I hope mike will move on eventually I'm sure that's what Nikki would want... Well I assume...

Hey Its Ali: DSJDJDJD THANK YOU! :)))

CHEESE AND NARGLES IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER. This was so adorable omg. Aghhh. The cuteness and drama of it is enough to make my head explode! Lol xD

YAY thank you so much!!! I was so worried about this chapter because I wanted to write it better than I did the first time. They may be together or they may not be ;) we'll see! I'm not entirely sure that Skye will be the one telling the story like it is in this one so who knows! Nope she has no idea! Only two people know what else happened that night :p

Gah that chapter is PERFECT! I LOVE IT! and oo sequel! PLEASE tell me they are at least together in the sequel (they= Zach and sky) and yeah feel completely free to take me up on my offer only if u need it of course! But this is one of my fab chapters better than the original and WHOA WHOA WAIT! something happens she doesnt know! O.o

ALLSTARLOVE33: Thank you! I'll probbly take you up on that offer! For the most part I know where it's going so I should be okay for the next two chapters at least. I'm not going to stop I promise :p I'm trying to update every other day which is hard some days but I push through it.
Hey Its Ali!: Yes exactly! Zach kind of goes up and down with how he feels about the whole thing...sometimes you can see that he's trying to forgive her but just can't do it yet like during the part where he's saying that he would've helped if she gave him the chance but it comes and goes. & Yes! Skye had a panic attack. It was kind of hard to go into detail about it since I've never had one. I've only fainted so I kind of based it off that in a way.
Thank you for reading & I hope you're friends okay now!

Ooh, sharp twist! Zach's being all hard on Skye. It makes me sad. I personally feel that Zach is still going through some sort of depression himself because he's shut down Skye. Katherine...that bitch. Haha. And Skye had some sort of panic attack, I guess? That happened to my friend yesterday lol. I'm all excited about Cameron's secret now lol...hmmm... :)

"but somewhere along the mess I made we fell in love" best line EVER! if u need help with ideas I know it helps me when I talk things out with someone even if it is a crazy idea so I'm always here if u need ideas or just to talk about the story to get something I'm here to help just DON'T STOP!

ALLSTARLOVE333 Yay Thank you! :D Sad thing is once I get to the point where I have to write new stuff I'm going to be freaking out D: I have to figure out exactly what I'm going to do. I'm glad & that's awesome! I've always wanted to go a last show on any tour because it's always so different and exciting.
Hey Its Ali!: Thank you! I'm so glad it made you laugh :p and woooo! Skye isn't just a bitch anymore and neither is Zach...for now that is ;)

It's really no trouble at all! This is an amazing story! And I loved the whole small talk thing. It actually made me laugh because of how adorable it was. I loved this chapter as well! I feel like pushing Skyelynn on like "You can do it Skye! Look away from the drinks! Focus on the greater good!" I'm silently rooting for her in my head. xD

Gah!!! I'm so excited for this story! Always was but now I'm more excited!!! :D and I should hopefully be going to their last show on the tour :D GAH I'm excited for he story and the tour... Excitement is all I feel at this point :D

Hey Its Ali: I just want to go into the story and hug them both. Zach's a little butt much so~ :p and ah geez good thing I made her name with a K then right? XD THANK YOU FOR READING AND COMMENTING <3333
You both are the reason why I am pushing myself to continue updating :)

AWWWW!!!! The whole Mikey and Cameron sympathy is great!!! Amazing!!! I want to bitch-slap Katherine across the face, and I feel ashamed of myself because Catherine with a C is middle name haha. Man. This, mixed with everything I've been doing to day means I'll be am emotional wreck by morning! xD

ALLSTARLOVE333: Ah I love Mikey :) he's amazing(along with the other boys of course) AND you saying that I make your day makes my day XD thank you so so much!

No worries I get you and GO MIKE! giving her a hug! I love this an I'm dying for more :) :) GAH I see u update and it makes my day :)

Hey Its Ali!: Seriously!? :o man gkldfgkdfg at least next week is pretty much my easy week!
& Thank you! I know those girls gfjkgjdfklg it's sad because I've come across girls like that at every concert I've ever been to. It doesn't matter what band it is there are always people like that.
ALLSTARLOVE333: Thank you! I almost didn't even write it because I was getting so mad but I had to push myself haha if I don't continue updating regularly it's EXTREMELY hard to get back into it. I just had to walk away for an hour or so.
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YEah I need a break from school as well! :P but the chapter was good worth the day and some :P can't WAIT for the nest update!

Haha. I feel so awesome right now, don't mind me. I didn't have school all week and then we have Thanksgiving break coming around :)

Anyway, I have more sympathy for Skye. And I loved her whole anecdote to those girls about Michael being the beat. It really helped restrain me from punching a fictional character haha. :) Great chapter!

No problem! :) I know some guys who don't turn their back on anything, but its still sad to see others who cower in front of an obstacle. :/

ALLSTARLOVE333: Seriously thank you so much for the suggestion! It was perfect :)
Hey Its Ali: Really!? Awesome :) & yeah so do I :/ all of the guys I know are exactly the same it's such a shame!
Thank you guys so much for reading<3