The Rules of Life - Comments

Dude... that's fucked up. Matt's fucking her mom?! EW.

Omg!! Matt is with her mother!!!!! Her mum must be what...38? Gross! With a 26 year old! That's a bigger difference! >:[ update soon!! I wanna know more and find out what Matt has to say to this...
Maybe he found her mother, and decided to solve all the problems :) or it could be something else /:l
Just update woman!!!!!!!!

I'm loving this story!! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

"Of course, I could wear a potato sack and Travis would probably shit rainbows and sunshine."
Lovely, hah. :)

But, oh shit! Matt can't be getting with her mom! Gah! Update again soon, please!

OH MY GOD
IS HE DATING HER MOM?!
HE'S FUCKING DATING HER MOM OH MY GOD I'M GONNA SHIT MY PANTS OH SHITFUCK WHAT IS GOING ON[size]
please excuse me while I flip a bitch and shit rainbows and butterflies and freak out and HE'S DATING HER MOM HOLY SHIT.

and this line: Of course, I could wear a potato sack and Travis would probably shit rainbows and sunshine.

I am crying.
You, m'dear, have a way with words and humour and shit and JUST UGH. great, now look at me. you brought out the inner sailor. ANYWHO.
god damn, this chapter was amazing. please update soon. c:
after looking at the character page for a while, I've finally decided Travis is fucking hot.

Wait! What if it's just someone who looks like her mom?
And your description of hallucinating was spot on, my sister's boyfriend use to flip shit cause when he smoked he always saw a kangaroo lol
i love you, ok bye

I continue with my support of Team Lesbian
Ahhhh why couldn't she have just stayed safe as the DD D: nooo
Wait wait whoa she found her mom??
Her hallucinating & finding her mom was the base for the story? Intresting.
Anywho, Matt needs to show up & save her butt again like Superman to Lois Lane

...Wow.

I was not expecting that at all, whatsoever.

This cliffhanger has left me so mad, but in a good way. lol
Although, I do feel a little skeptic since she is hallucinating and that may just be a woman who looks like her mother. But I don't know.

If it is her mother, I've totally lost all respect for her.

Okay.. Breathe.. My mind is going a mile a minute. That chapter just let me so - ALKDFJAL, ya know? haha

Hey there.

This story is fantastic thus far. I'm definitely excited to be reading more, but there are a few things that I noticed that could use a little fixing up.

When you address someone in prose, they have to have commas before their name. This happens sometimes, it's not really consistent. Within the first few chapters, I've noticed just a few.

The other thing that I noticed was "Principle" should be "Principal." >> I do this all the time so I definitely understand, haha.

Other than that, I'm thoroughly enjoying this. You're a fantastic writer, and the whole story is really quirky and enjoyable. I'm excited to see where it goes and will definitely be reading more.

Great job and happy writing!

xxx Bee

I. Did. Not. See. That. Coming.
O_O
haha I like the twist.

Ohmagaww! I forgot how much I loved this story. Crazycrazycrazy! I've never done drugs, but from what my brother says and that - you were pretty bang on (he thrashed around in a bush for half an hour saying he was inside of a clock and gears were moving him around). Excited to read the next chapterrr :)

WHY DOES TRAVIS HAVE TO BE SUCH A NICE JERK!

URGH!!!

Oh my god
I just read this entire thing today cause its addicting and I somehow ended up hugging a pillow
Yes, its that good
I dont know what to think
You NEED to update
I'm losing it
I don't know if you guys created teams
So I love Team Travis
But Team Matt is sweet
And I love them both so I'm all in it for Team Lesbian
Now I'm off to go read Dreamcatcher and Bang because you said so
Okay bye :)

Omg! I love this!! <3 and I love Matt (Chris Evans!! <3) but I'm a little confused about his personal life /:l girlfriend or no girlfriend?
If I was in her place I would be sooooooo confused '~'
Update update update update update!!! :D

So, I normally stay away from anything that has teacher/student romance in it but....hot damn, I LOVE this story!!
I say screw Travis and hellooo sexy teacher Matt! =P

Awesome job XD
Can't wait for another update!

lAuRa

this chapter tho
IT WAS SO AMAZING. I CAN'T EVEN.
that was a beautiful chapter, m'dear c':
please update soon!

Hmm, seems like Kinley is getting a bit more affectionate concerning Travis. Kissing his injury, eh?

April's dead meat. I'll kill her FOR Kinley! >:l

Happy chappy 25! =]