This is one of the best stories I've been reading so far. I just back into this site and was relieved when I found this story. I really like it and the storyline is great.I sat down and red all 32 chapters straight! haha Hurry up and write more. I NEED IT
Kinley cheated and that wasn't right, but Travis is 10x worse since he was blatantly saying he was loyal and then was caught in a lie. What a prick. I feel so bad for Kinley.
As for Matt, I like how he says, "She loved me and I loved you." He never says he loves Alex. Take that, bitch mom!
OH MY GOD I'M GONNA CRY KINLEY'S EXPELLED SHE SAVED MATT OMFG I love my daughter. Dear Kinley sweetheart baby honey sugar insert endearing, superficial names here, (does that even make sense?) you saved my almost boyfriend's ass today and I'll love you forever. love, Mom.
p.s. I left you ten bucks on the table for lunch! y'know, in case you need it. don't tell your dad, but I stole it from his walled! ::wink wink:
ANYWAYS. oh my god. this chapter has me blubbering like a fool. ALSKDCH;sdjfcl;KEkjwdl;WKEFJ; lsdkfj I'M SERIOUSLY GOING TO CRY. thank GOD it's not the end, though. I really hope omfg I was about to say "Finnick and Kelsey find their ways back to each other" but then I remembered this story was about Mr. Hardacker and Kinley. LOL. but seriously, I'm really hoping Mr. Hardacker and Kinley find their way back to each other. THERE WILL ALWAYS BE OTHER MEN FOR ME TO CREEP ON. please update soon? c:
I sincerely LOVE this story, so please, pretty please repost it. It's one of the best things I've read on here, though I think tweaking it might make it better. Who knows? But, sincerely, I think you've done a wonderful job.
Aw no, I hope travis and her work things out. I think that unless you make some major plot changes that there's not much point re-posting. Though you could for fresh feedback from new readers :)
HOLY FUCK, I JUST REALIZED I'M HER MOM oh god I'm such an asshole I'm sorry, Kinley bbqrl, but your teacher is too attractive I just can't not jump his bones every time I see him! Love, your mom Alex. p.s. I don't think you want to know what happened at the parent teacher conference, but we'll have that discussion when we get home, anyways.
ANYWHOOOOOOOOOOOOO. oh my god. oh my god. I don't even know what I just read. it was THAT intensely amazing. I FREAKING HATE SOPHIA but I have this really soft spot for Dash, shh! don't tell Matt c; AND I FEEL SO BAD FOR TRAVIS and I wanna punch April in the nipples and corn dog her vagina till her nonexistent unborn baby is bleeding out of her nose and yeah PLEASE UPDATE SOON holy poop. I still am not able to process what I just read. yeah.
Definitely repost if after you go through it! I think it's absolutely fantastic to begin with, but if you feel like that's what you have to do, go for it. But definitely post it again! That was an intense chapter, geez. Dumb April.
Sophia, you bitch... I got annoyed and left mibba when they broke down and deleted both my new profile and my new story... but I'm back! and what a pickmeup to find a new chapter of this:)
I just realized I haven't commented in the past three chapters. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME. holy poop. so much is going down right now, I can't even. I'm glad she and her dad made up, though (: she needs someone in her life who won't leave. AND SOPHIA, THAT ASLDFJH;lwfkrjfl;JWL;FlkwejFWEL;KJF;lk I knew there was something off with her. I wonder if Dash was involved with that. maybe. probably. awh, that makes me sad, I kinda like Dash. :c ANYWAYS LOLOL GETTING OFF TRACK please update soon? those were three amazing stories.
Yay! I'm so glad she made up with her Dad. I'm also glad that she isn't going to be friends with Sophia or Dash or Travis anymore. But I still want her to be with Matt... her mom can screw off. I don't want it to end so soon!