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  • PenguinATTACK

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    This is really interesting. I love McKinley, she's such an interesting character. And i really like Travis too, despite being a jerk at times, i can totally see them together. Keep it up :)
    February 7th, 2012 at 05:02pm
  • vices

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    GOD DAMMIT. never mind. sorry, I'm spamming up your comments :c
    February 6th, 2012 at 07:18am
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    damn, the picture didn't work ):
    HERE:

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    February 6th, 2012 at 07:18am
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    devil cat
    oh my goodness.
    please excuse me while I die, LOL.

    and Travis better not pull any moves on her. I'LL GIVE HIM A NOOGIE THROUGH THE SCREEN, I SWEAR I WILL.
    awh, y'see? my Mr. Hardacker pushed her away 'cause he's dating me c: LOL I WISH. but I can dream.

    AND OMG
    YOUR A/N
    kjashdlkfH;SDLFJsdklfjhsjkdfhlaksjdfhn;SDJKFL;sdkf
    oh goodness.
    Image

    and this one's for you:

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    it gets me every time.

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON c:
    February 6th, 2012 at 07:18am
  • eight letters late.

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    OMFG MY INTERNET CUT OUT AND I COULDN'T READ THIS RIGHT AWAY AND I WAS LIKE FUCK THE WOOOOOORLD.

    AND THE AFTERMATH OF THAT KISS WAS SO MUCH BETTER IN MY MIND.
    MR. H IS SO DUMB. WHY WOULD HE TURN HIMSELF IN? YOU ARE NOT NOBLE. YOU ARE STUPID. But I'm glad you didn't make it like, ohh, no big deal. Because people are so touchy about teacher/student relationships nowadays, especially when the teacher is a guy.

    Travis was worried about her omg that is so cute I can'tevenomfgtheyshoulddate.
    He kissed her on the cheek omfgthatissocute
    whatacutie
    hesolikeshertheyshouldtotallyfallinlove

    Where is Mr. H?
    Where did he goooooooo?
    He better not be fired OR I WILL BE VERY ANGRY.
    February 6th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • whoathere

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    WTF MR.H?!?!
    He SO liked it. He needs to fess up.
    Poor Travis is getting pulled into things..but it's kinda his fault sooo..
    I hated him but now I kind of like him. Woo!
    But yeah, lovely update. Another soon please:)
    February 6th, 2012 at 05:27am
  • vices

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    this story is so beautiful, ugh.
    asdhcalkdhlcvkajshdlkfhalksdjfhlaehyfklajsdhcklj
    PLEASE.
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
    and can I marry Mr. Hardacker? Please? c:
    February 6th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • wild thang.

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    Holy kabobs she KISSED HER MATH TEACHER
    February 5th, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • eight letters late.

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    OH AND THANKS FOR PUTTING ME IN YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTE, BOO.
    SORRY FOR THE CAPS IDK WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME TODAY.
    February 5th, 2012 at 08:06pm
  • eight letters late.

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    OMFG
    WHAT JUST HAPPENED.
    SHE JUST KISSED HIM.
    WHY DID YOU JUST LEAVE IT THERE.
    WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME.
    YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE. IS HE GOING TO KISS HER BACK AND ARE THEY GOING TO HAVE HOT PASSIONATE SEX IN THE BACK OF HIS HONDA? PROBABLY NOT BUT IT COULD HAPPEN.
    I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE KISSED HER MATH TEACHER. WHO DOES THAT. REALLY.
    OMFG.
    POST THE NEXT CHAPTER.
    RIGHT NOW.
    I KNOW YOU HAVE IT.
    I KNOWWWWWWWW.
    UPDAAAAAATE.
    February 5th, 2012 at 08:01pm
  • themyscira

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    :O No words for that ending.
    Oh gosh. UPDATE ASAP!
    February 5th, 2012 at 03:45pm
  • whoathere

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    like ^ she said!
    tomorrow
    would
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    amazing.
    mooooore:D
    February 5th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • eight letters late.

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    MR. H YOU LITTLE CREEPER.
    He is obviously obsessed with Kinley and can't stay away from her.
    Travis is totes in love with her but is confused because he's used to thinking with his boner instead of with his heart. <3
    LOVED IT AS USUAL.
    MAKE THE UPDATES LONGER PLEASE.
    ALSO, PLEASE UPDATE LIKE TOMORROW.
    THAT WOULD BE GREAT.
    K.
    February 4th, 2012 at 04:27am
  • indigo.

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    Oh no. Travis sounds like a nice guy now. A nice guy that I actually feel bad for. That's terrible. Kinley should hear him out. And you should update. :)
    February 3rd, 2012 at 01:08pm
  • Baby-I-like-it97

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    MORE!!!! :D
    February 3rd, 2012 at 02:41am
  • wild thang.

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    Hey I think that you should read this story: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2430386/1/Opposite_Ends_of_The_Spectrum
    It's not on mibba, it's not fictionpress but it's kinda like the Rules of Life and I think you might enjoy it :)
    February 2nd, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • wild thang.

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    hai.
    VERY GOOD UPDATE. As usual. So, the date went well? Nope, not really. But it was still funny. :)
    Thanks for the shoutout! It made me feel all special inside <3
    February 2nd, 2012 at 09:40pm
  • eight letters late.

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    OKay, Travis is a butt and he deserves to be with that bitch April. Dash actually seems kind of sweet, but you never know with those privileged popular kids. I love how Mr. H man-handles Kinley like, omfg bitch do you ever behave. LoVe tHiS StOrY.

    I DON'T ARE ABOUT YOUR STUPID EXAMS. WRITE MORE OF THIS.
    January 31st, 2012 at 06:33am
  • whoathere

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    This is great! Good luck with your exams! :)
    January 31st, 2012 at 01:51am
  • indigo.

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    So, I've decided that I like this story - a lot.

    I know that I should offer a much better comment than this, but I really cannot. There are a few typos that I notice, spaces where an 'a' or 'the' is missing but honestly, it doesn't matter. You have a good way with words. Great work.
    January 30th, 2012 at 12:08pm
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