Keep the Lights On - Comments

plzzzzzzzzzzz dont make us wait forever. love

Love it!

yeay!!! Love them together!! This was a great update, well worth the wait but please please PLEASE don't make us wait that long again for an update... :) I think it's Craig calling her and he is going to drop a bomb on her just because she is now happy and starting to feel better about herself, or maybe a drunken Jordan trying to call and apologize again but will probably screw things ever more up because he is drunk... I don't know - only way to find out is if you would update quickly!! :)

Love them together! Can't wait for more! <3

Oh my god James and Ari are so cute together. I loved every bit of this.

This is great! If this is a filler chapter, then it's one of the best filler chapters I have ever read because I was totally engaged the whole time. Honestly, I think James is a total sweetheart with her, and if they don't get a happy ending... I will rebel xD
I think Jordan is on the right track of being honest. I think he feels bad, but he doesn't feel totally sincere. I think he will have a total apology to her by the end. Maybe that's wishful thinking cause I love the guy haha.
And if they don't confess their love for each other soon, someone better smack them both lol.

Loved the update! It made me smile!

update soon!

I love it. Cant wait for the next update.<3

Great great story!! I love the way James is with Ari!! Hope their relationship grows better and better!! Can't wait for more!!

Unfffff as long as there's more of James Neal lying shirtless in bed, the answer is correct. Or even less clothing. Sorry I'm not sorry.

Great update it made me feel a lot better after last night's game! I bet it's either Craig or one of her parents calling her GAAHHH can't wait for the next update

Totally cheered me up! I came home from work at midnight to find that my Pens had lost again. :'( OF COURSE Ari is making the right choice by being with James! I really hope one day I can find someone like that who fully accepts every piece of me and loves me as much as James does Ari. Fuck everyone else. They belong together.

Great update! This definitely cheered me up a bit after the game, which was heartbreaking. I think that Vero is right in that their relationship will be challenging when people find out. I'm glad that Ariana stood up for herself with Jordan and didn't accept his apology, I don't really think he was apologizing for the right thing either. I'm pretty sure that either Ariana or James are going to confess their love soon. They both want to, it's just a matter of who is the bravest. Can't wait for the next update!

Love this new perspective of Neal, most write him as a dog, here he is all heart.... Love your take. Great writing. Update soon

This is great! Keep it up!

All caught up now!
Finally, they kiss! Loved it!
Can't wait for more! <3

You are fantastic. Great story, I just found it. Love it!!!

Found this story an hour ago and now I literally want to die from how good it is.

HOLY HELL UPDATE SOON BEFORE I DIE. THIS STORY IS SO FREAKING GOOD IT MAKES ME WANT TO CRY. SO MANY FEELS HOLY HELL