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  • hockeychick37

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    finally! lol....update soon!
    May 6th, 2013 at 12:48pm
  • hollieh8988

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    YAY IT FINALLY HAPPENED! :)
    May 6th, 2013 at 05:55am
  • sg6116

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    I'm so glad they finally kissed!
    May 6th, 2013 at 04:19am
  • Leslie.

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    STOP IT OMFGGAJAIOAKBQOWIIOA

    I SQUEALED

    OMFG

    PLEAKSLAOAJWJEKEB.

    IM SO HAPPY
    May 5th, 2013 at 11:30pm
  • kateerose12345

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    YAY IT FINALLY HAPPENED!!! I loved this update and I can't wait for the Neal's to go to Pittsburgh for the playoffs!
    May 5th, 2013 at 03:42pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Ok, im all caught up!! and YAY!! they had their moment!! Im so in love with this story. That was seriously the best build up to that kiss. God, I think I melted into my chair it was so perfect. I cant wait for more of this!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
    May 4th, 2013 at 08:31pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Im a bit behind on this story, but I just read chapter 15 and holy crap!!! I LOVE James Neal..I seriously almost did a victory fist pump when he punched Craig in the face! I mean, im not one to condone violence, lol, but he really deserved it, and James Deserves an award for being such an amazing human being. He does love Ariana, Its pretty evident in his actions. I just hope she allows him to love her, she deserves it, despite all of the horrible shit she thinks of herself. Loved This!! Now im going to read the next chapter:D
    May 4th, 2013 at 07:36pm
  • Catharine.

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    Oh pleasepleaseplease keep them together! Ari deserves happiness more than anyone, and so does James! This chapter was absolutely beautiful and made me cry. I can only hope that one day I can find a guy as kind and caring as your James is. :'D BRAVO! So glad you updated.
    May 4th, 2013 at 12:34pm
  • Catharine.

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    Oh pleasepleaseplease keep them together! Ari deserves happiness more than anyone, and so does James! This chapter was absolutely beautiful and made me cry. I can only hope that one day I can find a guy as kind and caring as your James is. :'D BRAVO! So glad you updated.
    May 4th, 2013 at 12:34pm
  • dreamerforever

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    They kissed! I'm so happy for them!
    May 4th, 2013 at 06:48am
  • leecasper17

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    IF YOU DON'T PICK UP THE NEXT CHAPTER RIGHR WHERE YOU LEFT THIS ONE I WILL BE SO MAD. I've been waiting for this moment forever! Omg this whole chapter was so beautiful! Please don't make us wait that long for an update again. :)
    May 4th, 2013 at 06:02am
  • weheartpuck

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    I'm crying tears of Joy right now. AGHHHHHH this is amazing. I heart you and your amazing writing abilities. Best James Neal story on Mibba hands down
    May 4th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • katiexlee

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    I'm so glad they finally kissed!! This chapter was amazing. I can't wait to see what happens when James' family comes to town.
    May 3rd, 2013 at 09:57pm
  • SteelcityorNothing

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    Best chapter yet dkajskandkq please hurry
    May 3rd, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • van Riemsdyk

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    i'm so glad it finally happened! I think this is one of my favorite chapters!!
    May 3rd, 2013 at 07:36pm
  • megseypoo4

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    Absolutely worth the wait! I totally love this story!!! Ahh! So excited to see how the rest goes!
    May 3rd, 2013 at 07:08pm
  • Dallas.

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    This was most definitely worth the wait!
    I can't decide if it's heartwarming or heartbreaking to see Ariana have those glimpses of happiness. You do such an amazing job of writing her emotions, that I can't help but start to really understand how and why she feels the way she does.
    May 3rd, 2013 at 06:34pm
  • FleuryVersteeg

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    Perfection! That's all I have to say.
    May 3rd, 2013 at 06:33pm
  • pogo5176

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    Yes!!! this chapter was amazing. I can kind of see Nick being like that in real life. Love how you wrote the scene in the rain and how the kiss happen...can't wait for the next one
    May 3rd, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • kartal1984

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    awwww that was awesome!!! Definitely worth the wait - the kiss was perfect, update soon please I want to know what kind of craziness will happen when his family is in town lol Can't wait
    May 3rd, 2013 at 04:46pm