What We Left Unsaid - Comments

Awesome XD I love how Matt and Ava ended up talking it out. Cant wait for more XD

Man shit went down and damn Zacky u never kno how to shut the fuck up like damn, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

With such a long chapter I have to make sure I don't forget something I wanted to say.

First of all: This was sooooooo much better than the last one and I absolutly loved it! So with that out of the way...

Brian, I really do like him in this story. Even with his feelings hurt he's still a good friend and does anything to protect her. I'm not quiet sure if this is a pack thing or just his feelings for her, but it's cute so I hope he won't suffer long.

The return of her brother brought back the action I missed. There's something not right with him offering the second chance, but I'm not quiet sure about his motives (oh and before I forget, there's a second chance for the jaw thing? Either I'm stupid, or you didn't put a clue there). Theres so much to stay and I can't get anything on the line.

I was curious if Zack would have stepped up for his mate. I mean even if he's not fond of her, she's his mate and doesn't his instincts tell him to protect her? So I'm looking forward to more action to see if I'm right. But with a council member there this shouldn't be a problem. I'm also looking forward to see more of the pack *caugh*Johnny*caugh*. Hope you update soon :D

With such a long chapter I have to make sure I don't forget something I wanted to say.

First of all: This was sooooooo much better than the last one and I absolutly loved it! So with that out of the way...

Brian, I really do like him in this story. Even with his feelings hurt he's still a good friend and does anything to protect her. I'm not quiet sure if this is a pack thing or just his feelings for her, but it's cute so I hope he won't suffer long.

The return of her brother brought back the action I missed. There's something not right with him offering the second chance, but I'm not quiet sure about his motives (oh and before I forget, there's a second chance for the jaw thing? Either I'm stupid, or you didn't put a clue there). Theres so much to stay and I can't get anything on the line.

I was curious if Zack would have stepped up for his mate. I mean even if he's not fond of her, she's his mate and doesn't his instincts tell him to protect her? So I'm looking forward to more action to see if I'm right. But with a council member there this shouldn't be a problem. I'm also looking forward to see more of the pack *caugh*Johnny*caugh*. Hope you update soon :D

Awesome as always :P I had to laugh when Zack opened his mouth to her brother. Cant wait for more :D

OMG, zacky really he just coudn't let it go could he! I hope ava rips him a new one!!!! she almost pulled it off and got her brother to back off now all hell is going to break loose, they are so lucky the council showed up when they did! I cant wait to see how ava is when she's in heat tho that has me sitting on the edge to see how those two are going to handle that! she needs to get him back good for this!! and what is up with the whole jaw thing what is she hiding! i understand matts point of view but whats ava hiding! GAH!

First I just want t say that I love this story! I however sometimes find it hard to follow sometimes. You always manage to clear the confusion off but sometime I wish I knew what was going on. Like when Brian and Ava were talking about Zach I was really confused. I also didn't understand the end. Was there some else there besides the pack and Ava's brother? Anyways I love this story and was excited to see a new update. Please update soon.

In LOVE with this story seriously It's just the best thing i've read in a while! i love zack and ava and how they interact with one another! you know deep down they love eachother otherwise they wouldnt go at it as much as they do they both just don't know it yet! AH! update soon please please please!!

I am in love with this story, not to mention your writing. Zack and ava's relationship is incredibly entertaining, but I feel kinda bad for Ava at the way Kat is treating her :/. Matt is adorable but obviously very intimidating when he wants to be, and I love Johnny, Brian, and the Berry's characters!! Well, now that I'm done rambling, I can't wait until the next update!! :D

I like the last few lines the most. :3 I don't really know why. XD But damn, there is one lovy dovey couple in this story. XD The more they argue, the more they must some how care for each other. XD This chapter was pretty good, please update soon!!!! <3

Awesome as always. cant wait for more. I love the tension between Zack and Ava :)

Yay, another update :D I have to admit it's kind of difficult to get into the story when you haven't read anything in a while (it's just that, don't wanna insult you, I know how it is with the writing. It comes or it doesn't and in this case it won't come back in a while)
sooo, the story. Not your best chapter, to be honest, but I still liked it. I like the tension between the two of them and that everybody notices it somehow. I'm a bit confused why Kat doesn't her to help (it was Kat right?) .
Now that I had an update I want moooore! I wanna know what becomes of Zack and Ava and what happens with the packs and all that shit :)

Oh and I liked the german response :P

Oh Ava, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Grrrr...It's been a while and I'm dying to know what is going to happen with Zacky and Ava! Please update soon.

I'm guilty ... I just read the last three chapters. ( and I'm sorry for any typos, but my mobile always changes back from english to German)
But I really liked the chapters and I promise I'll read sooner when you upload next. It was clear from the outside that it had been Matt and Kat but I liked to see it from this view. Must have looked too cute the guys on the couch and to imagine zacky also there :)
I like that zackys inner wolf wants her again and I hope you won't take it too long to show anything between them. I missed this story and hope you'll upload soon again. I just woke up and hadn't had coffee so sorry for the review but I didn't want to forget to review :)

Matt's whipped. :/ That's all I got from the last chapter. :3 An I'm kicking myself for not realizing that you had been updating your story!

I'm in love with this story. <3

Im just waiting for the drama when Zacky realizes what deep shit they are in :) Loved the four latest chapters (didnt have time to read them before) and I can't wait for the next update. love your writing and this story =D

Love it, I thought it was Zacky and Ava but I dismissed tht thought immediately lol anyhoo Matt and Kat r so fucking adorable and the way Ava and the other pack members were sleeping on the couch was cute its like bundles of puppies can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

awwww, i love Kat and Matt so much. they seem so cute.
I honestly can't wait until zacky stops going with his pride. I'm excited to see how everything turns out c:

Awwwww that's so cute. I love the way that Ava, Brian, Matt and Jason Berry and Johnny were all laying together. Awesome as always :) Cant wait for more :)