What We Left Unsaid - Comments

That's so adorable!! :) I absolutely love this. I cannot wait until your next update. Though, I will cause I have to. I hope you update soon anyways. Good luck on your finals!

Love this chapter. Sorry for not commenting last time. :(

Damn Zee's gonna have a lot of fun on the future :)
Loved it as usual :)
Cant wait for more

ONCE A WEEK OR MORE UPDATES? I need those.
I need more of this story.
I am enjoying watching Zacky have to deal with this all.
I can't wait for the next update.
More soon?

Ooh, goody, more ways for Ava to make Zacky suffer
Although I imagine the first time she goes into heat will be...interesting, to say the least. Wonder how much destruction they'll leave in their wake?

Love it, oh man Zacky is gettin urges to bite Ava but I'm pretty sure she isn't goin to help at all, it's goin to be interesting I hope the guys bring the popcorn is trouble is comin soon can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Man, poor Brian. And technically, wasn't he supposed to be looking for a mate, too? Not just Zacky? I guess she just didn't want to make Brian commit to a relationship that she thought neither of them wanted? Whereas it doesn't matter if Zacky spends the rest of his life essentially alone and miserable. At least not to her. :)
I'm glad the rest of the guys discovered the mating mark Ava left on him. I think the humiliation and eternal taunting will be enough to assuage my bloodlust (at least until the next dumb ass thing he does). Hope he doesn't try to retaliate against her for it. :/

As for ideas or inspiration I think tht in the most clichest way of cliches is to actually have Zacky and Ava be friendly and coupley towards each other or have them do tht when the council people get to pack whenever tht is so yeah

First of all..... Zacky's the bitch in the relationship holy moly didnt see tht coming and two aww poor Brian he really does care for Ava and it does matter but thn again her argument was bulletproof and on point yes she picked the douchebag as a mate but he needed a mate and so did she u at least she gave u permission to beat Zacky's face in if he does anything disrespectful can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awwwi feel bad for Brian though.
He's gonna have to sit there and watch all this happen in front of him and it's just like, Of course it matters to him! Why can't she just get that.

So wait, does that mean zacky's gonna be the bitch in heat? lol

I can't wait for more. ii wish i could help but i have no ideas but i hope you get some ideas though c:

More more more I love it!

So I found this today and I couldn't stop reading. I haven't really read stories like this but this one is just simply amazing. I love the story tidbits of the past and the way Ava and Zacky pretty much hate each other, but they're mates now! That's quite interesting. I'm excited to see where you take this.

I didn't had the time for reading, but I finally found a quiet minute and now I'm hooked again and need more! I like everything about it, how Matt tries to see through it all, the agression between Zacky and her, even Brian mocking about the situation. It isn't something predictable, and so I can't wait for a new chapter :)

Nope, my bloodlust is still not quite assuaged. I can't wait until the guys see the mark she left on him, though :)

i love this story, really. it keeps me so entertained. What they call "fighting" i say foreplay lol. I'm not sure so please correct me, i love new info lol, When one of them submits, they bite one another to have proof of the submission?

I'm guessing she left a mark on him too without either of them realizing it?

Keep up the amazing writing love c:

Amazing as usual :) Looking forward to more :)

Just read the whole story & i have to say this is rather interesting. I wonder if they'll turn out to start liking each other..?

Love it, y was she smirking? Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Well Ava's family sounds terribly charming. Hmmmmm I really like her actually, and I'm very particular about heroines. There's no getting around it, the girl's balls! Welcome back and I'm looking forward to more!

Two of my predictions so far came true. O: eeek! :D I really loved the chapter, I thought it was really interesting. I especially liked to learn about Ava's linage, it was really cool to know how she was originally in a very strong linage. To bad her old pack was to crappy to know how amazing she was, she was obviously way to smart for them. :3 I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon. :)