What We Left Unsaid - Comments

Awesome as usual. Don't be sorry for taking so long. Update when you want and don't let others tell you when to update. Make sure it's how you want it before you update it. If we have to wait as long again it doesn't matter because we know you have had to be busy :)
Can wait for more though :)

Love it, welcome back sweetie, anyhoo Ava's family life is a trip five siblings all boys two of them r dead, one ran away, one is mated, and one is living his life and but keepin an eye on his pack and thn there is Ava who was raped but don't consider herself a victim becuz it was consensual,just insane I'm just glad tht she bit Zacky back and tht she got to be with someone who isnt Alaric becuz Alaric sounds like a big asshole compared to Zacky's assholeness, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i know zacky's suppose to be a dick head but i feel like i'd happily agree to anything he wanted and i'm pretty sure it'd be consensual lol.

Just all that family drama though like wow that's just seriously crazy.

Psh, it's like I tell everyone who apologizes for 'taking too long' to update. It's your god damn story, you update when you fucking feel like it. :) Write for the love of the story, none of us are paying you for the entertainment you're providing. I mean, I would love to get frequent updates, but if life gets in the way then you take care of that and don't apologize to anyone for it.
I'm still hoping Zacky gets more of a beat down for raping her (even if she doesn't consider herself a victim), but at least we know Ava can take care of herself. I'm still really glad she marked him right back. :)

I think my computer's broke... I missed three chapters. :'( So, I'm just gonna make this count for all three of then because I'm in the mood to type and ramble on about random things.

I was really surprised when I heard Ava's suggestion. I really thought she had that annoying sister relationship with him, but I guess not anymore. But after thinking about it, I think she had hidden feelings for Zack all along since she even thought of the idea in the first place.

Zacky raping Ava was a VERY big no no to me. If he was drunk, you'd think he's be more gently and try to be romantic, but I guess he's a mean drunk... Oh well. At least Ava wasn't to badly hurt by Zacky's doings.

I really liked chapter 8, even though I'm still mad at Zacky for what he did to Ava. Though I loved how the guys were pretty much playing 20 questions trying to see who he had picked. Johnny was the cutest in it. <3 I love that little short guy. Brian kinda over reacted in my opinion. If he liked Ava, then he should of gotten to her before Zack, the earlier bird catches the worm. Though I do feel for him since Ava was supposedly close to him in all... I'm thinking that Matt is going to talk to Ava about three things. 1. About how to be a new beta female since she is now Zack's mate and they are a mated beta pair an all. 2. He's going to see if she was forced into the position by Zack against her will. 3. He's going to see if it really was her suggestion in the beginning an really didn't mean to upset Brian.

So yeah... Those are all of my thought's on the chapter's that I had some how missed reading an had just caught up on. Please update with the next chapter soon, I'm in love with this story and I can't wait to see how Ava's and Zack's relationship develops as well as how Brian will react to having his crush be with another man.

Pretty please with sugar and cherries on top, update soon! <3

Upload soon please! So good =)

This story is absolutely my favorite right now. I can't wait to see what happens. I really hope that you update soon, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting. You're a brilliant author. I love how tense and volatile things are between Zack and Ava, and between Zack and Brian, now. So intense!!!

Very interesting. I really like your take on werewolves and the whole story in general. Here's hoping Ava can somehow turn him into a halfway like-able character. I look forward to seeing how this plays out. Please continue!!!!!!!!

Moreeeee!!!!!

I really love this story, I love that Ava has no qualms about putting Zacky in his place. I can't wait to read more so I hope you update soon x

I feel sorry for Brian. But good luck to Zack and Ava. I think Matt will either talk to her about her and Zack or what happened before she came to see the guys :)

Amazing as usual

Can wait for more :)

Damn it, Zack did not get nearly enough of a beating to suit me. I hope Ava gives him major hell.
I feel kinda bad for Brian. I guess Ava didn't realize that Brian actually wanted to be her mate, it wasn't just their parents pushing for it?

Poor Brian I feel bad for him, I'm still pissed off at u Zacky raped marked her regardless if it was her idea u should have just done an easier route or just let Brian be Beta tht is what Matt should have done just let Brian be Beta instead of Zacky becuz this drama wouldn't have happened I'm sure tht Ava wouldn't mind being Brian's mate becuz they get along, her and Zacky not so much, man I kno Matt's pissed even tho Ava practically saved Matt's pack, I wonder what Matt is goin to talk to Ava about, the rape marking, her allowing Zacky to mark her or her pack leaders practically selling her to Alaric idk, love the story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

awww, now i'm sad for Brian :c

seriously zacky, "mark,raping" what the fuck is your probmlem?! i've never said this about him before but, what a douche baggy dickhead.

Well, I wasn't expecting that! Bravo!

This son of a bitch just raped marked her what the hell Zacky seriously dude seriously and I don't care if she just sat there and didn't do a thing u fucking raped her I shall kill u can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This son of a bitch just raped marked her what the hell Zacky seriously dude seriously and I don't care if she just sat there and didn't do a thing u fucking raped her I shall kill u can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

It was awesome as usual :)

Zack's being a total ass but it just makes the whole situation more interesting

I gotta agree with SevenfoldGirl_ in that the guys need to find out about what's going on with her so they can beat his ass for being a jerk. :) I also think its interesting that she asked him, rather than asking Brian. Or just running away. I can't wait to see what Zacky does when he calms down and thinks it over.

i honestly love this story and i really hope you keep going with it love c: