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Aww... but that's not what Zoe wants though. :( Ugh, boys can be so naive and clueless sometimes, I swear. Can he not tell when he's breaking her heart? :(
Great job with the update though. Can't wait for more! :)

Family? D: Well, let me think, does he mean like brother and sister? Because that's no bueno. But ue could mean like husband and wife family, right (it may be a long shot, but bear with me here)?! Because husband and wife are technically family then... Right?!

WHY, LANCE, WHY MUST YOU BE ALL BOY-LIKE WITH YOUR ACTIONS AND WORDS?!

"you're like family to me."
SERIOUSLY?
SERIOUS-FREAKIN-LY?!
It's official. Lance is an idiot. lol. Okay maybe a cute idiot but whatever. grrr ....

(on a side note, this feels like something that happened to a friend of mine. Except that the friend was a guy and that he was in Lance's place instead of Zoe's. I should make him read this, shouldn't I? lol).

Dun dun dun!

Loved the updates! Aww... poor Zoe.
I don't think he's good for her. He just seems like a player and just keeps playing around with her feelings while she's falling and he's... not. :/
I really hope he changes.
Great job with the updates! Can't wait for more! :D

:O Please tell me you're going to continue this? PLEASE?
I can't tell you how much I relate to this story.
Though each post was short, it was sweet and to the point. And, and - I just loved it.

v Ah fudge. Mibba is freaking double posting on me! Dx

"I don't want to chase after someone that won't be mine."
:(
No. I wanted to cry after I read that line. Just ...
Lance - you doofus. GET OVER YOURSELF, FALL IN LOVE WITH ZOE, MARRY HER AND HAVE A MILLION BABIES WITH HER! OKAY? OKAY.

"I don't want to chase after someone that won't be mine."
:(
No. I wanted to cry after I read that line. Just ...
Lance - you doofus. GET OVER YOURSELF, FALL IN LOVE WITH ZOE, MARRY HER AND HAVE A MILLION BABIES WITH HER! OKAY? OKAY.

Ugh. Lance. He was so sweet until right there. At first, I thought he was just maybe confused. Now, I think he's just a man whore. Excuse me if that's offensive. I don't feel like Zoe should go after him not after that chapter when she said she, "and I don't want to chase after something that won't be mine."

Her chasing after him after that would be kind of hypercritical. I think that she should wait/ignore him until he comes and sees her. She could give him the icy shoulder until it starts a fight, where she ends up confessing. Yay, for drama. :3

Ugh. Lance. He was so sweet until right there. At first, I thought he was just maybe confused. Now, I think he's just a man whore. Excuse me if that's offensive. I don't feel like Zoe should go after him not after that chapter when she said she, "and I don't want to chase after something that won't be mine."

Her chasing after him after that would be kind of hypercritical. I think that she should wait/ignore him until he comes and sees her. She could give him the icy shoulder until it starts a fight, where she ends up confessing. Yay, for drama. :3

Wow this is amazing, so many memories are rising from my empty brain. This is great and I really like how your writing is serious and meaningful instead of the kind of writing for entertainment. You don't see that much anymore. :)

Let alone the last few words show how mature Zoe is. Seems like love doesn't blind all the people, huh? Kind of hard to handle to have your crush hitting on your friends. If Lance doesn't like her he should stop do those particular things like a kiss on the cheek. Those action will just lead to misunderstanding and hope being crushed; then again: Lance doesn't know, right? :/
Either way wouldn't it be better for Zoe to just come straight out with it? I know easier said than done but if she won't do it those "what if's" will always linger in her mind.

Just started reading this thanks to the rec from Nanook. :) I love this all. I just love it. Read it all already. So, what do you mean Lance has been asking Hannah and Bea through text? Asking them out, asking them if she liked him...? TELL ME! I MUST KNOW! :) And you're writing a sequel? You mean it's over?! If that's the end, you NEED a sequel. Just do it. For me. Please. :hopeful:

Other than the fact that I just possibly read the last chapter when I wanted more, this is a wonderful story. My favorite part was when Lance kisses... you (?) in the photo booth. Beyond adorable. <3 I wish sweet things like that would happen to me. Lance is a confusing dude though. Talk about some mixed signals. Or, possibly just a bad girl-dar. :) I WANT MORE.

Loved the updates! Great job with them. :)
I got the urge to listen to 'Crush' by David Archuleta by the end of chapter 12, just because your words in reminded me of that song, so I did. :D
Aha. Anyway... wondering what's going to happen next... :o
Can't wait for more! :D

What happened?! D:

WHAT DID LANCE TELL HANNAH AND BEA?!!!!

NEED TO KNOW.

I'm. Addicted. (:

Wanna know why I love this story so much le awkward friend?
Apart from the pure awesomeness that is made of
You actually put in some of your own language into the dialogue.
And it happens so naturally, that we don't even notice. In fact,
it actually seems weirder and unnatural if it was done any other way.
But the story is still just too sweet.
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Gosh, this is really good. The way you write, you take the reader to somewhere new: you don't make them read, you make them understand, and that's something a lot of people here haven't figured out how to do, and it's so pretty and bittersweet and I'm only on chapter 6 but I had to get this out now, because you deserve a comment. Hell, you deserve all the comments.