Superman - Comments

I have fallen in love with this story! It's so cute to read. It's so touching, I am really glad you recommanded me this story dear =]

Oh my gosh, THIS IS SO CUTE. <3
The first chapter made me scratch my head a bit, but
after reading the next ones, you had me squee'ing
over how cute this is. Stories with best friends who become
love interests don't really keep my attention, but this is different.
I love where this story is going, keep it up!! :)

Aww this is cute and a bit different, which is always nice. I'm looking forward to reading more :)

"You're my Lois Lane, Zoe."

Omigod. I just downright died when I read that. That's so romantically, cutely whatever-ma-thingie. Just omg.

I don't have much to say except that this story was absolutely amazing. It's so cute. And I don't even like reading stories that involve best friends and crushes. I have a guy friend and I just find stories like those so weird.

Anyway, I really cannot wait to find out more about this. Jasmine, really? What the heck? And I wonder what the deal is with John. I'm going to subscribe. I really, really need to know what happens next.

THIS MUST BE SO HEARTBREAKING!

My self-esteem would just go down the drain- not that I have any at all anyway.

I really really like this. I'm assuming he doesn't want his brother barging in? But John is such a charmer, I can't blame Lance. I thought it was cute how dressed up she got, feeling all giggly. The pains of being a girl!

This was another great chapter, although I was a bit confused when you introduced Jasmine.

I think I would add that Lance left, or where exactly John was pointing at. Just my two cents. But keep up the good work and keep these updates coming :D

I swear, this is cuttte! (:

Hm... so I'm getting the feeling that this may, very possibly, be based off of a true story?
If so... aww... :') Aha. But either way, awww... XD This is just so cute. :D
Great job with the updates! :) Aha, I love how the main character got jealous. And then 'Superman' told her not to worry about it. :')
Amazing, amazing. Update soon! :D

Keep updating! I'm still loving it!
I can't wait to see what happened and why she is writing him these letters.

Sorry this is a bit late, I fell asleep! But I didn't forget ;)

Chapter one:
I like the letter format of this story. I really like the melancholy feeling I get when I'm reading this. It's a definite clue that something went wrong somewhere down the road.

Chapter Two:
The first/second chapter was very cute. Puppy love, but maybe more? I like their whole childhood relationship. It's so cute and makes me gush lol.

Chapter Four:
"But just being a best friend? That made my heart ache for the first time/" - THIS LINE! It makes me gush/overload with happiness, sadness. I'm weird like that lol.

Chapter Five:
It's cool that she was from the Philippines. I hardly ever see the Philippines being mentioned so I got so excited :D Especially when I recognized some of the words like, "para" and "barangay" - although I recognized the latter, I didn't know exactly what it was.

Over all, this was a very nice, short read. Their relationship is very cute, very puppy like, but I can sense it developing into more. I like the way you intertwine heartache and comedy, making this both a light hearted read and a bit of a tragedy. I'm going to subscribe to this!

I love this so far; it's really cute. I felt like i was there in her room or wherever she was, while she was writing to him.
I love the Superman, Lois Lane thing. It's so sweet. More more moooore!

I'm so sorry that I didn't do the comment swap thing :3 I was supposed to read and comment like two days ago but things got in the way :3 So here goes!
I think the layout is absolutely gorgeous. The little kid in the banner is so freaking adorable.
The summary is well, interesting to say the least, I love how you're trying to tell the readers something without giving too much away :3
The story. My gawd. I didn't find any mistakes or ANYTHING. I thought from the first chapter that this was going to be about Superman and Lois Lane, like literally. But the relationship between the two best friends has to do with the letters, doesn't it? I'm guessing Zoe is Lois Lane and the guy is Superman from the first chapter? I don't know, I'm confused, so I'm, subbing to see what happens :D

I have to admit it's cute :) Also I like the letter format, it just seems to tell the story in a more unique way. Short, but to the point I guess? I like it a lot, I'll be looking forward to reading more of it.

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I'm subscribed to this story and just read the update. I must say, this is a very touching subject and I adore it with all my heart. The layout is gorgeous as I had said before and I still can't get over the first-second chapter where he said "You're My Louis Lane."

I think that's what lead me in subscribing this. It's awfully beautiful and I can't wait for you to update more.

SUPAHHMAN~!

I kinda think he's a little too powerful, but I adore him nonetheless xD

Layout is awfully cute, and the way you set this all up was really kinda awesomely cool! The letters is something that I personally haven't seen before. And the story itself is so cute. "You're my Louis Lane"

KYAAHH XD

Most definitely going to subscribe. This is wonderful :)

Awww, this is freakin cute!

I love the way you wrote the chapters, how it was in letter form, and how it told the story from the view it did. They were short, but they were perfect. I loved the banner, and the layout, too. All in all, this was super good. Great job(:

The first chapter was hard to read. It seemed like you added way too much of the same thing, just formatted differently, but after I got into the second chapter, I fell in love. This is the most cutest thing I've read in forever

I am totally subscribing.

Okay. This is adorable. :3

I love the whole idea of it. And how personal it all sounds. I like the way you wrote it, it all flows very nicely. I think I saw one or two little grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing big at all.

Also, I love Superman, and DC comics in general. So of course this story is wonderful.

Great job!

Aw, okay, I get that it's more of a personal story now. XD But I like that you're doing that. It makes it more real and personal, which a lot of us can relate to. :)
Great job with the new updates! I really liked the second one... so cute! And the third one was cute at the end too. :D
Can't wait for more! :D

So, my heart melted a little. Even though it was the cheesiness lol
You can never go wrong with that!

Either way, I like how the chapters a short and to the point. You provide enough information about what's happening, but it isn't over bearing. I still love this story, SO UPDATE SOON.

I love superman! Even with this letter.. I'm already wanting more! Pluhease updat ASAP.
I'm subscribing, btw!