June 8th, 2012 at 11:44pm
I've instantly liked Lark, and how she sounds strong in her demeanor and not acting feeble with the way the others treated her when they first met her.
I like the premise of this and the world you've created -- I think you have an interesting stoyu set up here :)
I'll just have to state for the record, that I'm commenting, for the "Comment Swap".
I find the red back ground distressing.
The story continue, much in the same mood, as far as I can see.
It's tantalizing, pulling me in, I'm at a loss, as to what to say, is there something missing, or is it the story that just fail to pull me all the way in?