Fixed in the Shadows - Comments

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So I thought that your story is really good. Well written and organized, also your characters are well described something that I can’t do with mine. I always have trouble on this. Keep up the great writing and also if you have any writing tips I would appreciate it.

This is a really interesting idea for a story. The transitions are a bit bumpy, as the last commenter said. I think this would actually work better as a comic book. Lol. The transitions or lack thereof actually make it seem like you're going from panel to panel almost. I really love comic books and it seems like you'd be really good at writing comic books professionally. :)

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Eek! A Avenger's fan fiction! I too have one of my own and I'm close to finishing it. I really like this, although the prologue seems to be jumping from one place to another, I think you should make the transitions a bit more smoother, right now it's pretty rough but I think this has a lot of potential. This should have a lot more comments, I wonder why it doesn't. Keep it up hon.

Hello there. :) I was brouht here from comment swap and I'm just not into this kind of fan fiction story but I still checked the summary and the first chapters though. You described everything well enough and your characters are well brought up. That was different and interesting if I have to say. Keep up the great work and share your imagination with your fans. XD

I just adore this story, it is so fantastic!
I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Please update soon, I loved it!! (:

Omg this is where it all builds up! Dying to see what's gonna happen!

Read it all just now and absolutely loved it. (: update soon!

Super stoked dying to see if they'll find him!

Amazing as ever! Oh man he's back!

This is the second Avengers fan fiction I read, this one is well written and flows nicely. I’m not too privy with the character backgrounds on some of them but I’ve seen all the hero comic book movies. This one flows real well and gives a lot of detail. You did an excellent job with grammar and spelling, the description and flow of pace the story holds. Great job, keep up the great writing!

I can't say I'm a fan of avengers, but I can't say I'm not. Because I've never seen it or read anything to do with it, regardless I thought this was written very well and there was no mistakes. It was also very flowing:) good job!

From comment swap. I liked the idea at first, I'm not one for liking swaps with a show or movie that's completely different than the one being written. But this is good, just not my taste in story. I do love the avengers aspect of it though 8D

Looks like I wrote too little!!! Sorry about that! Alright than I like that you have your characters information filled out and that she does sound like a Smart ass!! Keep going for it you got mad writing skills!!!

Comment swap brought me here!!! Anyways im not big on the Avengers!! the story sounds good I like the characters and so far I haven't seen an error with spelling

Ooh they had a relationship? Sounds interesting can't wait for more!

Awesome!

Comment swap sent me here. :b

I don't really like the avengers, honestly. But the first paragraph caught my attention. Hm.

It seems like it's going just a bit too fast. But that could be just the way I'm reading it. It probably is though.

I like how she's so knowledgeable about the whole thing. And she seems like a smartass. I may just grow to like this. :)

Your grammar is fantastic and I like the detail you've put into everything.

The only thing I'm not a fan of is the fact that it's in present tense. I'm just not used to it. But it's nothing bad on your part. :)

Good job though :b

I know it's a double comment, but for some reason I can't do comment swap again until I comment on this. Phooey.

Comment swap sent me here(; I don't know much about the avengers, but your story is awesome! Your characters are very well described. The story overall is sweet and easy to read. I didnt notice any grammar mistakes, so congrats. Your story is the first one Iread with no mistakes.
Keep writing, it's fucking interesting.
Recommended btw :D