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  • Zaffhi

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    I don't know much about Supernatural, but I do like the Avengers. So I think it's a pretty good crossover! I got this through the comment swap, by the way. =)
    July 20th, 2012 at 10:33am
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    I got this through comment swap, and I only read the first two chapters. I haven't yet seen the Avengers (or Iron Man or Captain America), but I did enjoy reading this. I really like your narration, and Skylar seems like a really cool character. I like how you've characterized her. I love that she's kind of excited to be working with the Avengers, and that you described her as a fangirl type. I really hope this story goes well, because you're definitely a talented writer. Cute
    July 20th, 2012 at 07:37am
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    Awesome crossover! Can't wait for more :D
    July 19th, 2012 at 09:43pm
  • Gold Dust Woman

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    I'm from comment swap. I've never seen The Avengers, but I plan on watching it. This story is well written and has very few grammatical errors. That makes the story a lot better, and easier to read. I plan to continue reading this story because it's good. Continue writing and updating. Recommended! :)
    July 18th, 2012 at 02:04pm
  • Yzma

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    I was estatic when comment swap lead me to an Avengers story! I love the banner, but the layout is a little too much for me to handle. [Don't take it personally though, it's just my opinion. :P] I really like how you write your characters and you write their emotions wonderful! I only noticed a few grammatical errors, but nothing too major. I hope you continue with the story! Recommended. :D

    -Lindsey. <3
    July 17th, 2012 at 03:23pm
  • l0stinNeverland

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    I LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next Chapter, you did well describing the Characters and I thought the story was very sentimental and sweet, this also made me want to watch the Avengers all over again, I'm a huge fan of Marvel(which you could probably figure out from all of my fanfictions :P) You did well and I found no spelling or grammar mistakes which made me love it so much more, so well done and carry on!
    July 17th, 2012 at 02:46pm
  • babooshka

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    Uhm, comment swap made me come back to this story, for some odd reason so I decided I would add on to my last comment. All the characters are well written, and you do good with showing emotion, but keeping use interested with adding in suspense, and keeping us reading, making us go on to the next chapter. I have a feeling that by the way this story is written, people who read this that haven't watched the Avengers yet, well your story will make them want to go watch it! :D
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:30pm
  • babooshka

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    I really like the layout, and the banner. It's nice. I watched half Avengers before falling asleep (not because it was boring, but because it was like 5 am and I was dead tired ;P), but I really like the story so far. You're good at writing, and good at creating suspense. The first chapter really had me waiting for more. Keep it up. :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:25pm
  • The-Joker

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    this layout is crazzy; I love it!! although I am from comment swap and I have never read the avemgers or watched the movie; so it was a little confusing after reading the first chapter But either way you write very good and started off with suspension in the prologue; which was good! Anyways, goodluck and keep wriitng <3 xox yazoo,
    July 17th, 2012 at 10:22am
  • HellzxAngelx13

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    I am literally so excited that Skylar is from Michigan. I am also from Michigan and it is very rare that I read stories where the characters are from here. I also adore how she can shoot lasers from her eyes and hands and I can still find her relatable.

    I really enjoy your writing style and find myself really getting into what the characters are feeling. I feel so bad for Steve, do I sense some serious love?

    I love it! This is one story I will definitely be subscribing too!
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:17am
  • Gold Dust Woman

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    I'm from comment swap. I've never seen The Avengers, but I plan on watching it. This story is well written and has very few grammatical errors. That makes the story a lot better, and easier to read. I plan to continue reading this story because it's good. Continue writing and updating. Recommended! :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • cadleigh96

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    I have to admit, I was sent here by comment swap, and I haven't seen The Avengers yet, but I can tell you that upon reading this I can't wait to watch it! This is a really well written story though, and very enticing. Keep up the good work!
    July 17th, 2012 at 04:58am
  • Total Nightmare

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    Hey, there! Comment swap sent me here!
    I haven't seen The Avengers yet (yeah, I know, sad...) but I know some little stuff about each member. Reading this only made me want to watch the movie more than I already did.
    Oh, and I loved Thor so far, as well as Skylar :3
    Great job, so far! Keep writing, please!
    July 16th, 2012 at 03:59pm
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    This has to be the best Avengers fan fic I have ever read :D
    July 16th, 2012 at 08:09am
  • SleeplessLetter's

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    *Comment Swap* Alright, first of all, the movie was awesome! So I am sure the originals are as well. I am no super hero- fan fiction fan, but this is one I will definetly continue to stalk! So, with that, please do continue to write this, you have a AMAZING gift!
    July 16th, 2012 at 06:57am
  • anchored-wanderer

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    Here from Comment Swap. Not a fan of reading Super Hero stories. I did see the movie and it was good. I skimmed through the prologue and it does sound interesting. But yeah, I like The Avengers. And i like the picture you put for the story..
    July 16th, 2012 at 06:44am
  • EdgeOfReality

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    You are a very talented writer! I’ve never watched The Avengers but this makes me want too! I’m new to super-hero fiction but I absolutely adore this. I’m subscribing so I can keep up because I need to know what happens next. I also love Skylar’s character so much. I also adore Thor!
    July 16th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • it'llalwaysbeyou

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    I'm here through comment swap and this is my first super hero story I've read and I'm pleasantly surprised by how much I liked it! It's kinda lucky how I got this story since I just watched The Avengers last night! I like Skylar's attitude as a whole and I think her weapons are awesome. It seems like you've put a lot of thought into how this story is gonna go! Keep it up, it's brilliant so far! :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 05:53am
  • gnarly.

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    I'm here from comment swap, and I'll be honest, I'm not really into super hero stories, and though I'm aware of the avengers, I never got to see the movie, heh.

    But I still read the prologue, and I found it very well-written, good description, and few errors heres and there, but those are fixable.

    I hope you don't find my comment discouraging, and continue to write. You have a lot of potential!
    Keep it up!
    :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 05:04am
  • reinventlove54

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    I was surprised at how well this was written, because I'm not much of a fan of Super Hero stories. Although, I must commend you on following through with it. It really is a great plot and it super creative as well. I thought you did a nice job with descriptions and the opener was really well done too. Good luck! And I will for sure come back and check it out sometime! :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 02:31am