Fixed in the Shadows - Comments

So, I'm sorry that comment swap sent me and I took SOOOO long to comment.

;-; It's just, I've commented on a LOT of stories these passed few days and I was getting sort of comment-tired. I needed a short break.

So the not-commenting was NOT a reflection on your story. Which is, in fact, quite good. The first thing I think I noticed, however, in the first chapter was an abundance of dialogue. You have a lot of dialogue, and hardly enough description to balance it out. I'd work on showing more and telling less.

Otherwise, :3 Really, really good. <3<3

I admit. I've never seen The Avengers so I wasn't the best person to receive this comment swap. With this being said, I feel as though you could explain things better about what exactly is going on, since reading the first two chapters I felt completely lost. But really that’s the only thing I felt like you could improve on. The story is written wonderfully. I like the way things are described and the way that the sentences are different lengths making the flow interesting and not choppy. I can’t really find anything majorly wrong, so keep up the good work! :)

****Reposted*****This is actually pretty good (: I didn't think it was going to be that great, since I'm not really a fan of super heros much, but I gave it a shot and I was suprised!<3 Keep it coming! One thing, however that I did not like was the fact that she was just like Black Widow. Maybe not JUST just her, but she was just very advanced at what she did, as in, kick-boxing, weapons, etc. Are you going to come up with your own villains or use Marvel villains?

This is actually pretty good (: I didn't think it was going to be that great, since I'm not really a fan of super heros much, but I gave it a shot and I was suprised!<3 Keep it coming!

Nice chapter. Please update soon :D

(from the comment swap) super heros aren't really my think and I've never seen The Avengers so it was hard for me to get into the story though. I liked your layout and I didn't find many grammatical or spelling errors in your story. You're a very good writer though so I hope you continue even though I won't be reading because it's just not my thing

This is great, and the intensity of characters!

I kinda liked this, even though I'm not a big fan of the super heroes and all that stuff, this was well written and honestly, I don't think I will be coming back :| it's not something I'm interested in, since it's the super-hero thing, but it is nice so keep going :D

Yayy! An update! :)

So I really think that Captain America needs to tell her how he feels so they can be together. I really and truly can not wait to read more so please update soon! I think that everyone should give this story a chance because it really deserves it, and it will take you far especially with how much effort you are putting into it! From writer to writer keep up the good work, because it's amazing!

I love love love it!!! =D

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Although I don't read so much of super hero kind of stories I have got say that I found your story really good. I thought it was really well written and I can see that you've put a lot of effort into it. I'm deffinetely giving this a chance and hopefully you update soon :D

Oh MY GOSH! the fact that you've mentioned me in your story is absolutely AMAAAAZING! It came as a complete surprise<3

So, I watched the Avengers today and now I truly am allowed to grasp what's going on in your story. It's great the way you've blended Skylar into the group, it's wonderful:D

Comment swap sent me here. Honestly, I've never really been into the whole superheroes and Avengers type of stuff, so I'm not really educated. However, I do like the plot of this. Slylar's got a cool power, computer hacking. I never really thought of hacking as being able to save the world. And I really like how her and the Black Widow don't like each other. There's conflict already. Anyway, though I'm not an Avengers fan, I encourage you to keep writing because this is very good.

I like it. :)

The title is what drew me to this story and I never even knew Avengers fan-fiction insisted. And its normally not my style of story with all the superheros and stuff but I have got to admit you do a good job of bringing a whole new aspect to the whole superhero situation. The whole attention to detail also is very good :)

The title is what drew me to this story and I never even knew Avengers fan-fiction insisted. And its normally not my style of story with all the superheros and stuff but I have got to admit you do a good job of bringing a whole new aspect to the whole superhero situation. The whole attention to detail also is very good :)

The title is what drew me to this story and I never even knew Avengers fan-fiction insisted. And its normally not my style of story with all the superheros and stuff but I have got to admit you do a good job of bringing a whole new aspect to the whole superhero situation. The whole attention to detail also is very good :)

I was also directed here from the comment swap. I have to say, your writing is very good indeed (in my opinion). It's not really the sort of fiction I read, but it's well written, and as I very recently went to see the Avengers, it was interesting to read this as a sort of 'different take' on the story. Also, I love all the characters so it was really cool to read about them, with another extra character too, of course!

from the comment swap! i honestly don't like Marvel, I only liked Thor, but your story was nice to read and definitely different from the ones I usually read/write. Continue on with this story and I shall read more! As the words from Thor in a different manner;
This story, I like it. Another chapter!