Late Dawns and Early Sunsets - Comments

@ Insomniatic Nimrod
Thank you, that means so much! By the way, I updated a few hours ago so it will be a little while before I update again.

@ WeHaveAHulk
I didn't mean to sound rude, it was just that you posted the exact same comment and I hate spam. Thank you, and it's okay. It's just I hate to see spam on this website.

This isn't spam don't worry. I re-read through the whole thing because I would rather you not go and report me. I thought it was kinda rude but I'm willing to let that pass as I was being rather rude by just repeating everything I get sent here from Comment Swap. I do honestly think you are a good writer and if you made this theme then your really good at making themes. Sorry if I caused you any offence.

I was directed from comment swap to read this, and this is WAY better than I had expected. I just spent the past two hours reading this, and I LOVE it!! It's so different and unique!
I'm glad that I found this, because I needed a story like this to show me not all fanfics are the same.
I'm definately subscribing and recommending this!
Update soon please!!! :D

@ ashadowedchazly
They start off short, and there is one extremely short chapter somewhere around 10, but after chapter 3 they range from 2000-3500+ words. I'm experiencing some writer's block right now, so that's why I haven't posted in a week or so.
In my opinion, Gerard is not your typical Gerard and Mikey is not your typical Mikey. Usually Gerard is a dickhead type of character and Mikey is the goofy younger brother, but I've made Gerard into the nicer guy and you will see that Mikey is a lot more mature in some of the chapters I have on backlog. Also, Frank is most definitely not your typical Frank. I worked especially hard making Frank different.
Thank you for recommending, I hope you enjoy the story!

Comment swap brought me here.
Layout: i love it, I think its nice, simple and clean looking, the font is easy to read, which is a good thing.
Chapters: I think they're a little short, though I am only on chapter 2 right now. I think you should make them longer, and post them like once of twice a week, then that would give you more time for ideas and what not.
Character flow: Right now its good, Gerard is typical Gerard, Mikey looks like typical Mikey. The mom is like how I picture her to be. And the school right now sounds okay, and the people in it.
Well done, I shall recommend this so you get more readers and such because it a nice fic so far to read.
Update soon. Love C.P xx

'll be completely honest, when Comment Swap sent me here I was a bit disapointed because I ain't that big of a fan of these type of Fanfictions. But, I still gave a chance and read the first chapter, from that I saw your writing flows really were and I don't believe I found that many spelling and grammar errors so it's pretty good.

Keep writing and good luck

@ LunaNomea
thank you! My main aim is for this story to reach out to MCR fans, but it means a lot that people who aren't a fan of the band can still enjoy this.

I agree with marriedt0themusic's words on how this is very well written. I honestly have no idea who any of these people are, so I read it as if it was a regular story and I admit that it was good! The writing is descriptive just enough to get the picture in your mind.

@ marriedt0themusic
spoiler alert: i doubt there will be any more than the frerard kiss in this story, i'm considering killing gerard and having the rest of the story frank's mourning. but that's just a thought, i might not go with that idea. if i don't, there will be no frerard for a good while yet.

(your username is brilliant, btw)

(comment swap comment) story line is great.. as a mcr fan i can't get into the whole frerard thing so i unfortunately didn't read much of it. from what i saw, the writing and descriptive parts are fabulously wrote. keep up the good writing.

@ sowrongit'sSHANICE
Thank you so much!

@ fading-and-falling
Thank you for your advice, I know that some of my early chapters are kind of awkwardly written but I'm afraid to change them in case I miss something that I need for the plot to flow.

@ Frankiiestein
Thank you! I was aiming for something totally different with this story, it's great that people actually like how different it is :)

@ bhawk_cyclone @ WeHaveAHulk
I know the whole Frerard thing is love/hate, so it means a lot that people who don't like Frerard can still take something from the story!

'll be completely honest, when Comment Swap sent me here I was a bit disapointed because I ain't that big of a fan of these type of Fanfictions. But, I still gave a chance and read the first chapter, from that I saw your writing flows really were and I don't believe I found that many spelling and grammar errors so it's pretty good.

Keep writing and good luck

I'll be completely honest, when Comment Swap sent me here I was a bit disapointed because I ain't that big of a fan of these type of Fanfictions. But, I still gave a chance and read the first chapter, from that I saw your writing flows really were and I don't believe I found that many spelling and grammar errors so it's pretty good.

Keep writing and good luck

I come to you via comment swap!! That being said, I don't usually read stories like this, so it wasn't exactly my cup of tea. But that's not to take anything away from this story. I actually enjoyed reading it. I thought it was very well-written and descriptive. You're doing a great job; keep up the good work! :D

This story is amazing. I don't know why I didn't hear of it before but I'm glad I have now. It's nice to read different type of Ferard.

I thought that when Frank said 'I like to get high' I thought he would fly not climb a tree! xD

I hope you update soon!

Comment Swapper on your first chapter! (: - My first suggestion is to read your story out loud to yourself or have a friend do the same so you can catch small grammar and wording mistakes. The paragraph where you're talking about them moving seems really rushed.. Try adding some transition words so that it can flow smoother. Other than that, I think it's really well written! I don't read MCR fics, but you did good at explaining things!

Comment swapper here, but boy, am I glad I got led to this story! I really enjoy MCR fanfiction, especially Gerard and Frank based so this was great from the get go! but I have to say I truly love what you've wrote so far, you're such an incredible writer and I love how descriptive you are and it's clear to see how much work you put into your writing, all I have to say is I really hope you update soon as I'll be sticking with this story until the end! :)

Awesome!!!! Please update soon <3

Ya yay love it

Here from comment swap.

Okay, so I don't enjoy reading slash, particularly Frerards. But, I must admire your writing style and your language techniques. You've made a Frerard not only bearable but enjoyable.