Late Dawns and Early Sunsets - Comments

Howdy, I'm from comment swap. So I'm only on chapter two, and I, my friend, am very impressed.

Very rarely do I find MCR fics that I like. This is one of very few. Bravo!

So for chapter one, I loved loved loved this sentence: "The sun filtered in through a large window on my left side, blinding me with its burning rays" I'm not sure why, but I do. This is awesome.

I'm going to keep reading and see where this goes. This is super awesome. Dude. Like I love this. I'm super picky and I absolutely adored this. Seriously?! I'm stoked I found this.

Hypocritical shmuck! So everything Frank thought about Legion has turned out to be a big stinking lie? If Jared can fall in love anybody can! So Frank has pretty much got a green light on that one, ha. Really loved the 'I like to get high' idea, I wasn't expecting climbing, that was a brilliant twist.

First of all, I love your layout. Second, I don't read many MCR stories, simply I don't come across them as often as I should, but you are doing a great job with this! The MCR stories that I DO read some how all being the same story with a different title, so I'm glad I came across this one. So keep it coming! I can't wait to see what happens next! Especially with Frank. I loves Frank. <3

Jared the freakin' hypocrite. At least Frank can live his life however he wants to. This is slowly becoming my favorite story of all time.

Hey der, what's up love. Little ol me coming here to tell you what I love.

SO! first things first. I love how you use your words, you have a wonderful way of pulling someone in.
And I love the way you put things too or describe stuff, it makes me feel as if I'm actually there.
Second! I like the way you kinda switched their roles a little (or personality I want to say) How Frank is the asshole instead of Gerard.

Keep up the good work and uhhh yeah.. I'll keep reading on. Promises! Promises! :]

Warning: this may be a really long comment.

I love how you named the secretary Flora. It's such a cute name. I love how you write so descritiveely (Doubt thats spelled write xD) It really makes me feel like im there and I can really feel the emotion.
I love the fact Frank is all special and stuff. I think it really suits him.
When you named Taylor, well, Taylor and you made him gay, it made me smile because my girlfriends friend is named taylor and hes gay. So that's awesome.
I also absolutly love how you described their kiss!!! It was so cute!!! I cant wait to read more!!! <3 oh! and the whole Frank being old and stuff from 1951 is epic. I think its so weird you made frank the dick and now gee! Normally its the other way around!! xD Over all, amazing job <3

And who is 'she'.
Man there ain't no killer going to kill my babies in this story, you hear me?
-calms down-
Lolz, I woz just kobra kidding.
But don't kill them ok ? Yeah ok c:
Love,
PENISGUN.

And who is 'she'.
Man there ain't no killer going to kill my babies in this story, you hear me?
-calms down-
Lolz, I woz just kobra kidding.
But don't kill them ok ? Yeah ok c:
Love,
PENISGUN.

And who is 'she'.
Man there ain't no killer going to kill my babies in this story, you hear me?
-calms down-
Lolz, I woz just kobra kidding.
But don't kill them ok ? Yeah ok c:
Love,
PENISGUN.

And who is 'she'.
Man there ain't no killer going to kill my babies in this story, you hear me?
-calms down-
Lolz, I woz just kobra kidding.
But don't kill them ok ? Yeah ok c:
Love,
PENISGUN.

Man what happened with Mikey and Alicia.

Man what happened with Mikey and Alicia.

I don't understand.

You know, I got that mail and I was like, BOW CHICKABOW WOW UPDATE.
So now I'm reading.

Did Alicia dump him or something?

Did Alicia dump him or something?

Why was Mikey crying?! And who the fuck is the girl who was observing? GAH I want to know.

HI! I haven't been commenting in so long and here's the reason: I was in Spain. With no fucking inter-fucking-net. :c Yeah, I know, how did I even survive... I almost shot myself with a penisgun. Sigh. But when I got back I saw all those updates anD YOU DEDICATED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO ME :') *drops the penisgun and hugs you tight*
THE DIRECTION YOUR FRERARD IS TAKING IS TOTALLY DELIGHTFUL MAN. I hadn't seen it coming. And it's amazeballs.
I love how Frank comes from the past, and how, in the last update, his behaviour toward Gerard is explained. (AND JARED LIKE JARED LETO? :'D Sigh, every time this man is in a fic, he has to be the bastard *laughs madly*. Anygay.)
I reaaaaally love it even more and please, (please for my fucking sake alright?) update soon!
Love c: x x
Penisgun.

Comment swap directed me this way. Got to say, pretty excited that I hit on another MCR fic today, I'm always a little biased, ha. It started off really well, it's written superbly (your description is wonderful), Gerard is a pretty interesting character, and I liked the fact that this plot isn't your average sort of Frerard, I mean, sci-fi 'I've got super powers' twist? Excellent! Keep up the good work, my dear.

Commen swap sent me here. The plot is not only interesting, but original. You're a very good writer and use imagery very well, however using too much detail can be a bad thing and the story won't have a good natural flow. Other than that it's a good story and I can't wait to read more. :)