Late Dawns and Early Sunsets - Comments

I got here through comment swap and I was surprised to see that this was a Frerard fic. Though, I'm not a fan of this pairing, I liked reading your fic. There are no grammar or spelling mistakes and you have a nice plot flow. The characters are real and I love Mikey. This is really interesting, so keep on writing!

Wow, Frankie's a bit rude, isn't he? That aside, I must say I absolutely adore Mikey- he's adorable and hilarious. This is very well written, and it has amazing potential to become, well... amazing! Keep up the good work! I'm not usually a fan of Frerard stories, but this one is definitely keeping my attention :)

Hello! I'm here from the comment swap. I'm not a big MCR fan--I like their music but have never gotten involved with the band members in fan fiction--but I was pleasantly surprised. This is a great story full of potential. I agree with everyone when I say that the story is amazing. Keep writing!

FRERARD! I love you <3 And the comment swap <3 And your story <3 and Frerard <3 Also your writing style is awesome, but Frank is a dick :( I'm going to subscribe to this because I'm really hyperly excited about this and The storyline is awesome. The layout is beautiful and Your grammar and spelling are nice :D

Oh my god, this is amazing! Pleasepleaseplease update it right now, I need to learn why my Frankie is being such a dick! :P

really like the story though

really like the story though

holy shit fuck frank is a douche

Okay, so to be honest when the comment swap sent me to an MCR story I was slightly bummed because I am not the biggest fan, the layout is really nice and so is the summary, but I was still not too stoked about having to read an MCR story, well I was completely fucking surprised by this and am really happy I had to read it. You're a really good writer and I like how this is developing.

PS, it was really great to see another mcr fan. Those are getting hard to find nowadays, no? Maybe its just me. hah.

Oh. My. Fucking. Guhh. Dude. My brain cannot even comprehend my level of shining starry mood right now. Hah. I have been waiting the whole entire time for comment swap to send me a mcr story (cause mcr is like. all i like to write and read xD.) and this is the first time I've gotten one. I spazzed when I read the title. I grinned so hard I probably looked crazy when I read the summary. And I danced in my seat through the first chapter. Im not big on Frerards. But I loved this. It was written beautifully and it made me giggle and smile. You made one random reader very happy. Great job. xoxo[:

Just sayin', an epilogue goes at the end ;)

dude..... i seriously love this story

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I LOVE THIS STORY! your a talented writer! I'm not the one for frerard stories but I think this story turned me on to them (no pun intened)

update this lots. and keep up the good work! I hoped this comment insprises you to keep writing

It's nice to see an active story here! First, maybe along with finding a beta you could find someone to do a really cool layout with a banner! Those always add to the story.

I've noticed, in the MCR stories I've read, it always starts off with some kind of move. Pretty cliche, so maybe remember that for the next story you do. The way it starts is nice, & one could tell you have some experience in writing because it isn't written in an annoyingly basic way. It's got the perfect amount of description.

“And for God’s sake, don’t burst Mikey’s bubble. He’s so excited, he doesn’t need your high school horror stories!” I can't pinpoint what element this adds to the story, but I loved how it was just something that fit well. It was humorous.

I'm not really into these kinds of stories, especially about band members getting together, so I'm stopping here on the first chapter. There's nothing wrong that I've discovered, spelling or anything. It's got a good plotline so far, and I know there's loads of people who enjoy reading things like this. Keep up the good work~

Hm. So looks like I'm the first comment. Haha yay! But anyways, even though I don't like My Chemical Romance, or even know much about them, I'm fond of this story. And it doesn't seem like I have to know a lot about MCR to adore this story. I hope you update soon :) <3