Late Dawns and Early Sunsets - Comments

  • Fandango

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    Sorry BB :D I just sent you the chapter :O
    July 2nd, 2012 at 07:30am
  • firearnok

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    MIKEY AND ALICIA IS A PERFECT COUPLE THAT NEEDS TO BE IN EVERY FRERARD.

    And oh my god he came out to his mom :3 It went pretty good heh, I feared her reaction but then with the hug thing I was like oh well ok that's perfect :B

    YOU DEDICATE IT TO ME? RAYLLY? (see what I did there) ASDFGK I FEEL SPECIAL.
    Fuck, Frank you so much! (I need to stop with the pun alraydy. Oh was that another pun? Never mind..)
    I love you this stor(a)y (STOP IT, ME) is pretty fucking awesome and I can't wait for the next bit! :3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:40am
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    MIKEY AND ALICIA IS A PERFECT COUPLE THAT NEEDS TO BE IN EVERY FRERARD.

    And oh my god he came out to his mom :3 It went pretty good heh, I feared her reaction but then with the hug thing I was like oh well ok that's perfect :B

    YOU DEDICATE IT TO ME? RAYLLY? (see what I did there) ASDFGK I FEEL SPECIAL.
    Fuck, Frank you so much! (I need to stop with the pun alraydy. Oh was that another pun? Never mind..)
    I love you this stor(a)y (STOP IT, ME) is pretty fucking awesome and I can't wait for the next bit! :3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:40am
  • firearnok

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    -scrEAMS- Oh god alright I'm reading this now.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:27am
  • firearnok

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    Aw, Mikey's so nice for covering Gerard up c:

    HE PAINTED FRANK. -smirks- That's it Gerard, just start crushing on him.

    “Want me to give you milk and cookies, tuck you up and read it to you, bitch?”
    Well, fuck you? Yeah. :c

    Wait..... what? I can't figure Frank out ok. He's all like being mean, and then he's teasing and kissing and w h a t.
    Me is confused.
    Me is also sad because there's no more chapters and I subscribed and recommended because amazing amount of awesomness.
    Update soon? Please? Please? Pleaaaaaaaaaaase? :c I'm so caught up in the story..... :/
    It's past midnight, almost 1am, and I still would have read it all if there were 40 other chapters.
    I love your writing, the atmosphere and e v e r y t h i n g.
    Update fucking soon pretty please c:
    July 2nd, 2012 at 12:41am
  • firearnok

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    So I usually amn't into anything hetERO BUT WHEN GERARD IS COUNTING IT AND TELLING HOW HE FEELS GOOD I'M ALL LIKE: GO GIRL! SUCK THE HELL OUT OFF HIM!

    revealing perfect breasts and a perfect… something else.
    Why can't I so picture him thinking this ? xD Mostly the 'something else' part.

    I didn’t feel an urge to stick my dick into her.
    Here Gerard, we're slowly getting there. You'll realize you're gayer than what you thought soon enough, don't worry.

    Oh god, I’m gay.
    Oh. Oooh, faster than what I thought. Good. (Seee this is a live comment xD)

    BAHAHAH THE WHOLE 'I'm gay' between every sentence xD
    “I know,” he whispered. What? Mikey knew? Like, he noticed? I hadn't seen that coming. -claps-

    Through the open door of the kitchen, a dark haired boy stood with a glass of water in his hand and a twinkle in his hazel eyes.

    “Gay,” he said, liking the taste of the word on his tongue.

    He moved towards the door of the kitchen and walked through the hall and up the stairs. He paused outside the door of Mikey’s room, taking a sip from his glass of water, lip ring clinking on the glass.

    “Join the club,” he whispered, and pushed his way through the door with a smile.

    WAS IT FRANKIE? I LOVED IT OH MY GOOODDDDD. BEST CHAPTER OK. Not for the sex. Not only. BUT THE COMING OUT AND THE JOIN THE CLUB THING. Sigh, you're killing me.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 12:23am
  • firearnok

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    Hahahaha Mikey being all like 'more coffe' omg I love you (yes you, and Mikey too, but you).

    and accepting of the fact that you had to go to school.
    THANK GOD you know the difference between accept/except. Yes, I'm being serious. People write 'You need to except it!' sigh. Or that 'I should of told you' thing. It's have, or 've, not of, thank you. But I'm trailing off right here, erm.

    oh mY GOD MRS WILLIAMS IS HAYLEY RIGHT? I mean, red hair, duh.

    HAHAHahaha let me shoot Frank somewhere with a penisgun please. (whatisapenisgun)
    Y U MEAN TO GERD, FRONK :c

    JoSh AnD tAyLoR fRoM pArAmOrE (woah it takes way too much time to write like this, never again.) omg, yes. But(t) RAY BABY I'M GLAD YOU'RE HERE TOO LET ME LOVE YOU.

    HAYLEY AS THE ART TEACHER (oh my god so much screaming) HELL YAHHH!

    AGHAGAH Gerard is geelous. (god that was laaame.) But Frank might want to talk to Gerard before I end his life haha. Seriously though.

    Chapter fouuuuuur.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 12:07am
  • firearnok

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    despite not being emo or a fag.
    Come on Gerard, let me show you Frank's universe (=penis, I don't know if you saw Frank's tweet?) and we'll see what you're tempted to do to it. Fag.

    You’d swear he was being offered a unicorn on a stick.
    On a stick, eh? -wink wink nudge nudge-

    And I love how Gerard's not a smiling person but smiles at Mikey's excitement, ans at his mom's smile. It made me smile too. Ok pretty much everything in your story gets me smiling but shh.
    I really liked the bit where he drew? I don't know, it just.. got me :B
    Chapter threeeeeeee!
    July 1st, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • firearnok

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    comforted only by the fact that somewhere in the truck was our coffee machine.
    I don't know I liked the line x')

    It didn't take long, I was good with my hands.
    Now we will let Frank judge that skill of yours Gerard, won't we.

    and the girls I could get
    I BELIEVE THERE IS A MISTAKE RIGHT HERE. Come on, I assure you, I'm practically sure you meant boys.
    Oh you didn't? -points a gun at you- Now tell me you didn't.
    HAhaha ok no. This is good so far and I'm going to start the chapter two now. Even though it's 11:30pm and I should be studying or sleeping.
    July 1st, 2012 at 11:36pm
  • firearnok

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    Comment swap aND OH MY GOD HALLELUJAH FRERARD. I PRAY FOR FRERARD EVERYTIME I CLICK ON THE LINK COMMENT SWAP GIVE ME AND THERE, I SEE THEIR PERFECT FACES, STARING AT EACH OTHER. SHARING A LOVE LOOK. DESPERATLY NEEDING TO FUCK EACH OTHER SENSELESSLY. They seriously need to come out. I mean it's pretty obvious our little Gee Sassy Way is gay, and it's pretty obvious Frank needs Gerard in his fucking life, so why can't they fuck on stage already?
    Alright, I'm staring the story and I will try and comment after every chapters! :D
    (AH HOW I LOVE HIGHSCHOOL AU. AND BAND SLASH. AND F R E R A R D.)
    July 1st, 2012 at 11:27pm
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    By the way, what I wondered about for quite some time now: Is mrs. Williams Hayley from Paramore and are Josh and Taylor Josh Farro and Taylor York? Because if yes, I love you.
    June 30th, 2012 at 11:16am
  • XxshadowsraynexX

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    I love this story so far! It's really well written, I can see everything playing out. I'm kinda in love with Gerard too, he's adorable! [even tho he wouldn't be into me haha] I can't wait to see more of Frank, I really wanna know why he is the why he is. The story is pretty awesome so far, can't wait to read more!
    June 30th, 2012 at 10:39am
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    I decided to give it one last try but I think it gets annoying... this is fucking weird! I could rant about the comment swap now, but somehow it's funny, too xD I think I'll do something less annoying now xD
    June 30th, 2012 at 10:04am
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    Hi. I'm basically laughing my ass off right now :D Well, I'll keep my promise and send you a friend request and I think I'll leave you alone then xD (Means: Not use comment swap o.O I used it 4 times today and it always sent me your story....) It seems to like your story :D
    June 30th, 2012 at 10:01am
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    SERIOUSLY?!?!?!?! .................................................................................................................... That's the third time in a row now... I run out of things to say! The next time my comment swaps sends me here I'll send you a friend request <3
    June 30th, 2012 at 09:59am
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    Comment swap seems to like sending me this story o.O
    Like, seriously? 2 ti't complain cause I love it xD well, I dunno what else to tell you... I need to get 200 characters, so... FANGIRLING! waqyexsrvbfgzmnji <3 <3 <3
    June 30th, 2012 at 09:55am
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    I'm baaaaaaaack <3 Coment swap sent me here AGAIN! I dunno really what else to say apart from I really love your story and how awesome it is and that you have to keep it up and update as often as you can and I'm basically fangirling about it asdfghjklkjhgfds <3
    June 30th, 2012 at 09:52am
  • xFar-From-Lonelyx

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    I was very impressed with the layout, I think it was very beautifully made. However, I noticed a few spelling errors and would like you to just keep an eye out, they sneak in on everyone! The Gerard/Frank pairing used to be one of my favorites when I first started writing eons ago, but I fear I have outgrown it a bit, so I won't be keeping with this story. But I wish you the best of luck!
    June 30th, 2012 at 09:49am
  • hidans_hoe

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    Comment swap!
    I don't listen to My Chemical Romance but this was pretty good. I have a Tumblr so I know about MCR. You got the teenager thing down perfectly. "Coffee, the only thing worth living for." I loved that. Keep up the great work! :D
    June 30th, 2012 at 08:25am
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    This was my first ever MCR fanfic and I really actually enjoyed. I loved seeing Mickey come to terms with his sexuality and I thought that was done really nicely. I also thought the layout worked really well for the story and I adore the banner. Great job with this so far!
    June 29th, 2012 at 07:35am