Ruthless and Mockingbird - Comments

Comment swap brought me here and I was sooo excited to see a Marvel story because I love everything marvel! I was getting so into it and I realized you haven't updated in a super long time lol. Just my luck. It sucks because I wanted to see what happens between all the characters! I love love love the Bobbi/Clint thing going on! Wish we could get an update though.

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again Just finished this...such a shame you guys haven't updated in a while I was getting so into it. I'm dying to know what happens with cap/Ruth. And as for bobbi and Hawk!!! They're so awesome together, he's the calm in her storm and I love that. I don't know if you guys still use Mibba/get notifications from it. But if you do pleaaaaaase come back ❤️

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On chapter five so far and absolutely loving this. Loving the Bobbi/clint relationship too. Can't wait to see where it goes!!! And what bobbi's secret is

I'm a massive marvel fan but hadn't really thought of looking up any fanfic of it if I'm honest, this was a great find! So major thanks to comment swap for putting it my way lol.

Excited to see where this leads! Great work to the author(s).

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Honestly, I couldn't believe my luck when comment swap brought me here as I'm such a big fan of everything Marvel :) Your OC is really interesting and fits into the story really well. Good use of humour too, really makes both the stories and the characters interesting and believable. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more.

Im a huge fan of the Avegers and this story was just something amazing to read. I want more >:D but yeah keep up the incredible details and plot!

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I've got to say, I've never really been into this the Avengers or comics... But this was good. I really enjoyed reading it. It was easy to read and you didn't have to have an extensive knowledge on Marvel to follow along with the story - which is always good. Your theme is nice and the overall layout of the story is good. It's nicely spaced and your formatting, grammar and spelling are all great. No complaints at all! I really enjoyed reading this, hope to see some more good stuff!

I love the Avegers and I never get to read any fanfics about it. Oh, and, this is a comment swap, so yeah. I love the names of the chapters and the way it's set up. But, since I'm on my iPad, some words are cut off.

Really like this story so far, have to admit I'm only on the second chapter :P I've Never read the comics wish I could, but I'm a huge Avengers lover, Tony Stark is my favorite love how you keep them in character especially Tony people tend to not do a good job of that... it had me laughing when they were talking about the walls and him being constipated in the painting can't wait to get reading farther into the story, will probably be up the rest of the night reading it like a nerd, glad I found this story never really been into the avenger fanfics cuz of my walking dead obsession but I think I'm gonna start :D Love love love

Love the avengers keep up the good work :)

This story is definitely not like the others i've read! The plot is intriguing and definitely something I haven't seen before. I didn't even realize it but I became quickly engrossed in the whole plot line and I definitely don't want it to end. This story has sparked my fascination for the Avengers which I will be pursing as soon as I finisht this comment!

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So I only read the first four chapters and I have to say the story was interesting. It wasn't difficult to read, the plot was intriguing. Your dialogue was on point most of the time, and it wasn't overbearing. One thing I'd tell you about the dialogue is to use "said" less. It's the only thing distracting about the story. There are a few grammatical errors, but that's okay. Good job. :)

Hi, I'm from comment swap. I will admit, I am not an Avengers fan at all, but I put my hatred for that to the side and focused on your writing.

Layout: Everything is good except the background. It may just be me, I don't know, but the background kinda distracts me from the writing every once and a while.

Plot: I only read the first few chapters, and wow. It all just ran so smoothly. Great job!

Dialog: You're dialog was on point the whole time. It's just amazing.

Overall, you did a great job. Though I don't like The Avengers, I will admit that you did an amazing job on the writing part. 4/5. :)

I actually really enjoy this story. I feel like the language is really funny and realistic. I'm not a huge Avengers fan, but after this, and a good amount of research you have changed my view. It's a great story and I hope you continue, you have skill!

Hi I'm here from comment swap woo! This story is so interesting and unique and your description is wonderful, it's really accurate and draws readers attention to the story.your dialogue is really realistic, it siunds just like two people talking to each other. Great writing skills!

Comment Swap here. :) I love this. I'm an Avengers fan, but I don't usually read stories about them because I can't find GOOD ones. But this story is obviously great!! :) It's so interesting and everything else along those lines. It's a really good story and I hope you keep writing this because obviously I'm not the only one who likes it! :) I know you guys just updated this, but I really hope that you guys update this very soon! <3

I really like what you have going on here! I'm a huge fan of Marvel and I /really/ love Bobbi and Clint. Not everyone recognizes them in the Marvel world. It's great you're putting it out there! I don't see very many interesting Avengers/ S.H.I.E.L.D stories around, but i think you've really got something going here :)

Awe I wanna see some flirting with the Cap.
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I have to say that I just never got into the whole avengers thing, so although I couldn't really stay interested in the story just because of personal preferences I read the first few chapters and wow. Your dialogue. It's awesome! I mean it flows and sounds like actual conversations!! Not like a robot or a captive. Your skills to make me laugh even with something I don't particularly feel for is something I appreciate since I've been told that myself I always look for a good comedy/comedic relief. You're a great writer, keep it up!

found this through the comment swap. I've never seen/read the avengers, but i have to say your writing is great! it flows very well and i love the comedy you're able to create (that's one of the hardest things for me, personally). Your dialogue doesn't seem forced or robotic, it's all very believable; keep up the great work!