Ruthless and Mockingbird - Comments

  • I love how Bobbi is riling Clint up, atta girl, Hawkeye is intimated by a girl, who would have thought. Unexpected spouses popping up from the woodwork's, how interesting. Although what a predicament. Just for the record, Bruce' s joke was totally funny, I'd laugh.
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:46pm
  • I love this :)
    I too came from comment swap, but I am officially subscribing to this story because it is completely and utterly awesome.
    It's brilliantly written, it has good humor and I love that it's not boring, even if we're only two chapters in :)
    I hope you keep writing!
    July 16th, 2012 at 04:03pm
  • Hey, I'm here through comment swap and you have an amazing story line going. I don't really like anything to do with the avengers due to my brothers "need" to turn the tv up so loud you can't understand it while he watches but I rarely saw any grammar or spelling issues . Anyway keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more:)
    July 16th, 2012 at 02:51pm
  • Comment swap brought me here, I'm glad it did! I'm not a big fan of the avengers, but I saw Captain America a while back, so I like how she has to reteach him everything! There was little to no grammar or spelling errors either. I liked your layout to, simple but pretty! And the the colours were simple yet maybe you could add some blue? For captain america? Just a thought. Definitely Subscribing! :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 01:15pm
  • Comment swap brought me here, I'm glad it did! I'm not a big fan of the avengers, but I saw Captain America a while back, so I like how she has to reteach him everything! There was little to no grammar or spelling errors either. I liked your layout to, simple but pretty! And the the colours were simple yet maybe you could add some blue? For captain america? Just a thought. Definitely Subscribing! :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 01:15pm
  • Comment swap also sent me here. I think this story has some great potential. :] I really like the Avengers, but I haven't seen the movie yet.... Anyways, the writing is great and I enjoyed reading it. :]
    July 16th, 2012 at 10:06am
  • Comment Swap Bought Me Here I Havent Seen The Avengers So It Was Hard To Follow But I Asked My Friend For The Jist Of The Story.Great Start Keep It Up!
    July 16th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • Hey, I'm here through comment swap! This is the second Avengers fic I've had through comment swap and I think it's great. I watched The Avengers last night so I'm sorta familiar with the characters haha. I've gotta say I love Loki. The summary leaves you waiting to read more and the two chapters you've posted are great so far. Update soon and good luck with the red of the story! :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • Comment Swap.

    I'm not too familiar with the Avengers (other than the movies), but I really dig this story :) Keep up the great work!
    July 16th, 2012 at 12:17am
  • Comment Swap.

    I'm not too familiar with the Avengers (other than the movies), but I really dig this story :) Keep up the great work!
    July 16th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • Comment swap :)
    I'm not sure if I can get into this because I'm not a fan of marvel or anything fan-fiction related about it, obviously, you don't need my comment to tell you other wise. It's a good story, from what I've read and you should keep it up :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 09:32pm
  • ~comment swap~
    I'm glad to see an Avengers-related fic on here! You have no idea how happy that makes me. Anyway, as of right now, this is one of my favorites already. It was flawlessly written, which was a bonus. Can't wait to see what happens next!
    July 14th, 2012 at 07:44am
  • Woot! This is so awesome! I'm so glad the comment swap sent me to this story! I love the idea and your writing style. I am more of a Loki fan myself, but Tony has to be my favorite character aside from Loki. I love his personality, and I think you are doing a great job with it! I'm for sure subscribing and I can not wait for the next chapter! Also I'm excited to see who she ends up with! I feel a love triangle coming!!! (I'm probably wrong though)
    July 14th, 2012 at 03:54am
  • from the comment swap! i honestly don't like Marvel, I only liked Thor, but your story was nice to read and definitely different from the ones I usually read/write. Continue on with this story and I shall read more! As the words from Thor in a different manner;
    This story, I like it. Another chapter!
    July 13th, 2012 at 09:28am
  • Comment swap sent me here.
    I have no idea what this story is about honestly, because I'm really not into the Avengers and all that, so basically I can't really give you a good comment. I do like your writing though. It's nice, fluent, it flows, y'know. I really don't have any idea what this story is about other than its characters are Avengers and all that. I'm sorry I couldn't post a better comment!
    July 13th, 2012 at 03:14am
  • So comment swap sent me on here again and I read it all over haha I still adore the title so much and I love the introduction to an unhealthy degree. I looked for any grammatical or spelling errors this time and I couldn't find any whatsoever. I like how all the characters tie together even though there's a lot of them.
    July 13th, 2012 at 03:01am
  • My iPod won't let me edit my comment do you get two comments! You are very good at writing dialogue and while The Avengers/Super Heros in general aren't my thing I still like your writing style. Definately going to check out your other pieces of writing(:
    July 13th, 2012 at 12:32am
  • -From Comment Swap-
    I really liked it despite the fact that I've never seen the Avengers and I don't know anything about them. It made me laugh quite a few times. There wasn't any grammatical or spelling errors which made me enjoy it even more. You're a very good writer! Keep writing!(:
    July 13th, 2012 at 12:22am
  • Even though I have yet to see Avengers, Iron Man, and Captain America (I want to just haven't found time!), I really enjoyed reading this! I was easily pulled into the story and the storyline seems interesting. And even though there are so many characters, you bring them in in a way that doesn't feel overwhelming. I wish you luck with this story; I'm sure it will do well! Cute
    July 13th, 2012 at 12:21am
  • First thing, the title really caught my eye. Ruthless and Mockingbird. It sorta makes you wonder whats gonna happen next! I think i will subscribe if i get to like this more.. but right now i just want to see where this is going. keep up the good work:)
    *commet swap*
    July 12th, 2012 at 11:37pm