Ruthless and Mockingbird - Comments

This is the first Avengers fanfic ive ever read! Very original! Well done! :) Well i like the variety of the words. I really dont know how to describe it, but it keeps me very intrigued....... Yeah, i guess thats the word. I love your writing, so........ keep up the great work! :) <3 xx.

This is the first Avengers fanfic I've come across. You've obviously seen the movie, because as I was reading that, I thought "Yeah, that sounds just like Tony Stark." I really like the dialouge between the characters, it's very believable. I think the pace is very nice, and the story is well-detailed. The story is well-writtened and I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future. Well done and good luck!

I like this, although I haven't seen the movie. I didn't know people wrote Avengers fanfics. Hahahaha. Silly me. I like your variety of vocabulary. It makes the story interesting. This story made me feel like I was a part of it. Keep on writing and keep up the good work! :D

I saw this movie in theater's not too long ago and it was amazing. I don't write too many fanfics, nor do I read them often but I enjoyed this. You have a great sense of the story and you capture the feel of the characters well. I also like the fact that you're not just a child posting a story about it, you use a broad variety of vocabulary and make the reader feel like they're a part of it. Keep up the god work.

First of all, I LOVE the fact that this is an Avengers fanfic! I'm not so much a part of that community, so I don't really get to see too much of that! So, props to Comment Swap for helping me find something like this.
Second, this is great. I love the dynamics between Ruth and the other characters, especially Tony. I also think you really captured the personalities of the characters who were not created by you and made them work perfectly with your own character.
I can't wait to see what happens next! You're great, now just keep it going!

The only thing I felt...off...about was that everything here is evenly spaced. So while I'm reading it, it feels like it's all happening the span of one moment. The only problem is, the scene keeps changing, and I have to use context clues to know when time has passed.

I'd suggested perhaps putting an extra space in between paragraphs that separate scenes.

Other than that, though, I love this. You definitely have my subscription. I look forward to more. You had me giggling quite a few times-- which is quite the accomplishment!

You've captured the characters really well, though I wish you'd even out the 'screentime' you give them all. Putting in the Hulk in there felt more like you just added him to indicate he was there. He didn't serve much purpose to the scene, other than to say that all the Avengers are together.

It's okay to focus on one idea at a time.

So I don't know too much about the Avengers, but I have to say that I really do love this story! Its very easy for me to follow and it's very well written. I'm definitely going to subscribe and reccomend this story! It's awesome! I can't wait to read more!! :)

This story is amazing! I'm a huge fan of the Avengers, but I've never read a fan fiction based on them before. This is a really amazing story so far, it has a good balance between a canon storyline intertwined with your original character. Your character already has so much personality and depth after only 2 chapters. It's a really good start and I'm definitely going to continue reading.

I'm so happy that Comment Swap send me here. :D

This story is amazing! I've found very few Avengers stories that are good, this one is one of my favourite. I'm glad comment swap sent me here. I like Ruth's sarcasm, it's great. I love how it seems like she's so comfortable with everyone already. I'm definitely subscribing to, and recommending this story. I can't wait for an update c:

I absolutely love this! I have so far not really found an Avengers story that I found piqued my interest, but voila! here I am!! I am super excited for the next chapter. The character of Ruth is so interesting, and her reactions to things around her are well done!

Ah, drama. Not much to say since I said it all before. I love that the genius billionaire playboy philanthropist quote was incorporated.

I'd say this is the first Avengers fic that's managed to catch and hold my attention. I'm really liking Ruth's character so far and the interaction she has with everyone doesn't feel forced, so I really like it. I think I may subscribe.

I just noticed, in the summary you have Captain American rather than America.

I didn't know that stuff like this could actually be good. I usually only read fanfiction of like singers but this is really good :)

So comment swap bought me here and personally this isn't really my thing i mean i have watched all the movies Avengers, Captain America, Thor. just not into reading about it.
but i will admit this surprised me that i even got through the first chapter...i kinda really like it...i might even subscribe to see if i keep liking it...nice job :)