Ruthless and Mockingbird - Comments

To be honest I wasn't too sure I'd like this at first, I haven't seen the Avengers and have no clue what it's about. But you're a good writer, despite the fact the text can be slightly off putting, and I found this easier to read than I thought. Good work :D

This is really a fantastic story! I was a bit skeptical at first, because most Avengers fics I've seen have been totally undeveloped and just an excuse for pointless smut with Steve/Tony/Loki/Thor/Bruce/Clint (I tried to make a list of the attractive ones, and then I realised they were all attractive x3) Anyway, I really did enjoy this! Please update soon! It's such a delight to read!

When are you gonna write some more!??????!!! I really wanna know whats gonna happen next!x

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I have to admit; I was a little hesitant to read this, but I’ve not found myself at the bottom of the 4th (and latest) chapter and wanting more! :) Aside from perhaps distancing the text when changing scenes and time in the story, I’ve loved everything about this one! :) Your characters are fun to read and relate well to each other. And they/re interchangeable with each other too, but don’t get too hasty with that idea just yet - changing between characters too much can make the story hard to follow and can lead reading into loosing interest altogether. :) Just remember that this place is for your enjoyment first and foremost, and the enjoyment for others secondly :)

keep up the good work! x

Even though I haven't read avengers I cab relate to your story I like the characters and some if the lines are great like really ironic I like how your mind works that's a really nice story you've got there keep up the good work !!!

It's great what else is there to say?

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I seriously love this story and the relationships between the characters. Thor is my favorite Avenger,s o I can't wait to see more of him in your story. Also, I love how well you got Stark's personality, haha. Honestly, I haven't read the graphic novels, and my knowledge of the Avengers stems solely from the sets of movies that've been realized recently.

Anyway, keep up the great work :)

Loved the update :)

Before I can say anything, I just have to....

Before Tony could comment, an arrow whizzed by them and lodged itself into the painting, right between Stark's legs.

"CLINT!" shouted Tony. "We talked about this!"

That made me laugh so damn hard I couldn't breath for a second. Even though comment swap brought me here, I can just say that that sentence made my horrible night so thank you for writing a brilliant Avenger's story. <3 End of discussion. Marry me and we shall rampage the Earth with our Marvel love ^__^ Good day

Naomi:-

LOLWUT. I don't really follow *cough* know *cough* anything relating to marvel. After all, I'm a bit of a DC fangirl, but that's beside the point.

Brilliant writing! Interesting, amusing, and full-out perfect. Excellent grammar, excellent character development (already!), and excellent idea.

Keep going, because if you've gotten a DC fangirl into Marvel, you've done your job more than adequately. ^_^

I have decided that you and I have a very similar sense of humor because this story had me chuckling out loud. I have to say that I'm not a fan of superhero movies, except anything with Robert Downey Junior because he is one handsome son-of-a-gun, but this story really piqued my interest.

(comment swap) I must say I'm not too into Marvel so I guess I'm a newbie to this type of fanfic. Therefore I don't know how right or wrong it is for me to comment on the content of the story; however it does seem interesting to me. I really appreciate that you writing lacked grammatical/mechanical mistakes; it's a huge pet peeve of mine on Mibba. So anyway, keep on keeping on and it looks like a lot of people are into this story, so good luck! :)

I came to this completely new, as I had never heard of the avengers before, but your writing style is really good, as it kept me interested and I wanted to keep on reading. The story was easy to read, was funny in some places, and overall I did enjoy reading it :)

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Like Sing Song Sung, this is the first Avengers/Tony Stark fanfic that I have ever read. I think you have a writing style that is very compelling, and it just makes you want to keep reading. The story's plot is also very interesting, (in, of course, a good way) and I really enjoyed your story!

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Like Sing Song Sung, this is the first Avengers/Tony Stark fanfic that I have ever read. I think you have a writing style that is very compelling, and it just makes you want to keep reading. The story's plot is also very interesting, (in, of course, a good way) and I really enjoyed your story!

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This is the first Avengers fanfic ive ever read! Very original! Well done! :) Well i like the variety of the words. I really dont know how to describe it, but it keeps me very intrigued....... Yeah, i guess thats the word. I love your writing, so........ keep up the great work! :) <3 xx. Now im just gonna babble cuz comment swap keeps sending me back :P lol anyways, KEEP WRITTING!!!!!! :DDDD <3

Ah, Ruth's poor sensitive eyes! I love how Steve is slightly afraid, it's so cute. Update soon.

I came here from Comment Swap and I'm glad you included MockingBird, there aren't many that do include MockingBird and I'm glad you included romance with Hawk-eye who is in fact my favourite Marvel superhero! I think has a great plot and even though I found some mistakes(spelling and grammar) I still really like it, so feel special because even one spelling mistake can make me hate a Fanfiction! I'm obsessing over Marvel at the moment so I really enjoyed this and can't wait for an update.

This story is brilliant. I absolutely love how you have written this. It goes well along with the Avengers :) I saw one or two misspellings, but other than that, there were no mistakes. Ruth is a very intense character, I would love to see more from her. Please update. This is so amazing :)

Loved the update :)