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  • Sofers

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    OH MY GOD THANKS, YOU'RE THE BEST OKAY, ITS THE FIRST TIME SOMEOME DEDICATES A CHAPTER TO ME HAHA YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL
    August 2nd, 2013 at 03:13am
  • sunshinensarcasm

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    So beautiful!!!...but so short :/ MORE PLEASE!!
    June 10th, 2013 at 11:39am
  • pawnsinplay

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    YOU GET HIM, GIRL! Oh man. I can't help but wonder what Chris is going to do when he finds out. Not that he has the right to do anything, he hasn't made a move and he's with someone else, but still. He's interested in Grace, she's crushing on him, and now she's going on a date with another guy - lost your chance, Evans, you gorgeous putz! Thank you for the update. Please update soon! <3
    June 10th, 2013 at 03:01am
  • gipsy danger.

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    Tara and Grace, they are such great best friends. I love them. And I am super excited to see what Tara has up her sleeve in the way of plans to help Grace.

    And Melody, she seems innocent enough. FOR NOW. I still don't trust her.

    I love this story so freaking much, you have no idea. The humor and the ease, and laid back quality of it all, I just oh goodness. And it's written amazingly, just like all of your stuff <33

    and this
    What I should have done is to stop being such a pussy and shot Chris an email all casual like, 'So, I met your girlfriend the other day, she's smokin' bro.'
    - That's how a friend would react right?

    I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THAT.
    That is so bro I don't even know

    I love it!
    May 22nd, 2013 at 06:38pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Just how real these two friends are is amazing to me. Then, Tara has this brilliant ass plan to get Grace's attention off Chris. Definitely a fire starter for me to read the next chapter immediately.
    May 17th, 2013 at 10:01am
  • sunshinensarcasm

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    this Melody chick needs to go. She seems like she's going to be a pain in the ass.
    May 17th, 2013 at 05:48am
  • pawnsinplay

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    Tara.

    Tara is the coolest friend. Can she be mine, too? :P EXCELLENT CHAPTER. Can't wait for more of Chris! <3
    May 16th, 2013 at 04:36am
  • hearts;

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    So I'm kind of obssessed with this story & it's feeding my crush on Chris. I'm with you on the whole had-a-crush-on-him-since-four-years-ago thing. I've probably been smitten since I saw him in The Perfect Score. ^-^
    May 15th, 2013 at 04:49pm
  • sunshinensarcasm

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    i think its hilarious that when i found this story, i was watching What's Your Number...and that's where all the gifs are from. that just tickled me a little bit, but i absolutely love this story so far. i can really relate to Grace's personality, which freaks me out a bit, but i'd greatly appreciate it if you updated soon
    May 14th, 2013 at 12:22pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Waking up drunk/tipsy is the worst, but a little amusing.
    Tehehe Robert Smith's blonde doppelganger and the dark look due to smeared make up. It's nice imagery.

    "huge man beast" O.o

    So him and this Melody are a thing. We shall see how long it lasts.
    And that smile in the gif? Too precious.
    May 2nd, 2013 at 10:55am
  • pawnsinplay

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    A pirate hat. Oh my God. The image of that in my head is just too friggen' funny. I was surprised that Tara didn't believe her about Chris...well, maybe not that surprised but still. They're best friends. ANYWAY. Tara's reaction to Chris standing there was priceless. I probably would have peed my pants if that had happened to me. And that boy is way too smart (and pretty) for his own damn good! Calling her on avoiding him. Well played, Evans. AND NOW I WANNA SLAP HIM AND TELL HIM WHAT KIND OF JERK HE IS. He should have told Grace about that hobag he's dating. Friends tell friends when they're dating someone, right? Right. Regardless of the fact that she clearly wants to be more than his friend. Poor Grace.

    CHRIS EVANS, YOU SCUMBUCKET.

    Also, this:
    "Careful! I'm a delicate lade and you're some sort of huge man beast."
    I choked on my Kool Aid. Not nice. Okay.
    May 2nd, 2013 at 06:27am
  • vonhejibergen

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    I love your writing stile, and I love this story. It's absolutely fantastic and I love the main character, she is so sarcastic, witty and funny. I can not wait for the next update :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    "...hard-earned tequila money." This girl is after my own heart, I swear. TEQUILA MONEY. TEQUILA. MONEY. The most wonderful and most awful of all things lol

    Filler's are not lame. Fillers are a necessary evil. I can not wait to read about the girls getting drunk, and what Miss Tara has to say about the whole Chris situation. Thanks for the update! <3
    April 26th, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Okay. Wow. I love everything about this. Brilliant dialogue. Smooth narration. And lovely Chris gifs in the authors note. What's not to like?
    April 26th, 2013 at 11:38am
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    No one on this God forsaken planet should be allowed to wear itty, bitty, tight, blue printed shorts. Except Chris Evans. HOLY MOTHER.

    Poor, poor Grace! I don't blame her for being hurt, I would be too. Sure, he didn't exactly lead her on but even as friends, you'd think he would have mentioned at least once that he had a girlfriend. But maybe he doesn't. Maybe this Melody chick is a ratard and is painting a false picture. BECAUSE WAIT. Didn't he ignore a call from her in the last chapter? Wuh-oh. Things just got way more interesting. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE <3
    April 19th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • SupaJocy17

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    I love ur story! Keep it going lol n also u have provided me a new screen saver Mmm Chris y u so delicious haha
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:55am
  • pawnsinplay

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    WHY.

    WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME. AGAIN, I FORGOT MY COMMENT BECAUSE OF THAT GIF AND OH MY GOD HE'S SO PRETTY. He is so pretty. That body. Those eyes. I just wanna touch him. Can I has?!

    Also, my favorite line: Bad suggestion Grace, you have a fear of creepy ghost children. Amen, sister! I do too. I saw the ring when it first came out and pretty sure I jumped so high I almost hit the ceiling. I did recently watch it and couldn't believe how lame it was, and how lame I was back then for being so scared, but that's another story. Excellent chapter, as always! I hope Tara comes to visit soon, I bet her reaction to who Grace's 'friendship' will be hilarious. Can't wait for the next update!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:52am
  • Manbear-n'-Me!

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    Gah...my feels... I just love this story!!
    He is just awesome, and I don't know the guy personally but I feel like this laid back personality is very believable. It makes it very hard for me to dislike him in any way...not that I wanted to, just saying that he is very attractive and charming...

    Gosh, I ramble a lot. I should stop. XD
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • Manbear-n'-Me!

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    Gah...my feels... I just love this story!!
    He is just awesome, and I don't know the guy personally but I feel like this laid back personality is very believable. It makes it very hard for me to dislike him in any way...not that I wanted to, just saying that he is very attractive and charming...

    Gosh, I ramble a lot. I should stop. XD
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • Manbear-n'-Me!

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    Aww...this is so charming! I've never read a Chris Evans fanfic before... I don't even think I've seen another one anywhere else. Anywho...I love this!

    I kinda want to know more about Grace...she seems to have quite a history. I want to see how Chris is going to manage breaking down those walls also...XD
    April 11th, 2013 at 12:41am