In a Lawless Love - Comments

At first I was afraid that matt was going to kill jason and the baby when he found out the truth but surprisly he let them go.
I'm glad that charlotte and jason will be able to get their happy ending and be a family with their son. :)
As of matt he really needs to find some help in controling his anger but the things he did to charlottle were horrible.
Great ending.

This comment is going to be qui k because my phone is dying.

It was so intense! And the ending was so different than what I thought. I cant believe she thanked Matt though. I was like, seriously? Dont thank him! Lol. I loved it though. You took a lot of risks with this story and it was really good.

Oh my, how dramatic. I couldn't tear my eyes away from it. The ending was a bit different than I was thinking you were going to go, but it was good. And obviously I'm nota Phantom fan, so that part was lost on me. But the whole thing was good.i loved Amber standing up to Matt. That was my favorite.

You did really good on this babe. Good job.

@ CaliCupcakeMonster
Aww thank you! Im glad u liked it. :-) i am about to end my other active story "the poison in your blood" if u want to check it out. Im working on another original fiction to be coming this summer :-)

Im sooooooo grateful for that ending. Im pretty sure I was hyperventilating ending it and I was moving until I knew all that happened. Great story and look forward to read other masterpieces by you lol

This was a pretty good ending. I live that Matt set her free and now Jason and her can live together in peace as a family.
How did Matt find out though? And would he really kill a baby?
This has been a pretty good story and I enjoyed reading it!

This was actually one of my favorite chapters of this ina while. So much was happening. Poor little Amber. Sweet girl. Matt was just kind of coming around too. Damn him.
And I really enjoyed the ending with his mother. It was like a real come to Jesus moment. I hope Charlotte takes her advice. And now the baby will be coming. More drama rama. Lol

Good chapter baby. Sorry it took me so long to read it... But what else is new? Lol. Love you

For a second I though that matt was getting a heart and than he does something hortible by hurting amber. D <
I hope that charlotte takes tge advice of matts mom and leave with jason before matt hurts them when he find out the truth about the baby. I was shocking to find that matts mom was in the same situation as her but she lost her two children and love of her life.
Great update can't wait for more soon. :)

She has to leave with Jason. Especially after Matts mom saying all that. It just needs to happen. Poor Amber too. That is just awful. Matt needs to die. Maybe Jason can kill him. Lol. This comment just escalated quickly. More soon!

@ CaliCupcakeMonster
i guess we will just have to wait and see what happens ;D

Now I say she should run because even if Matt were to hunt her down death would be better then being with that man, if you can call him that

@ CaliCupcakeMonster
We'll have to. Find out together. I have two versions of tge end in my head. Its ending soon.

Now I am truly afraid, I do hope for the best but this evil man truly wants this child. So glad you updated cant wait for more

Well this new law is an interesting development. Maybe everything will work out after all. It does suck that her and Jason are fighting though. This was a good comeback chapter, good job.

Well this new law is an interesting development. Maybe everything will work out after all. It does suck that her and Jason are fighting though. This was a good comeback chapter, good job.

Shits about to go down. Lol. I just want to get this secret out there. I'm ready for some scandal and baby drama

This wasa good chapter. I liked the ending the best.

Charlotte, how dramatic going into Matt's office like that. Lol. I could just picture it though. I was sure the next scene was going to be her standing outside of the office snickering while Mildred was being fired. A job well done, indeed.

She had really turned into a siren. Going off on everyone all the time.

Good job, babe. More soon?

Now I know why she didn't want to get pregnant, she’s becoming a completely different person. But this story is addictive

Uh oh, is Matt really going to melt his frozen heart? I really hope that he might do that because lord knows that they would be hilarious to see both sober and completely aware of the problems they would face.

This is such a soap opera, lol. Charlotte was such a bitch to Mildred, and then Matt... Poor old lady. But I liked the chapter, it was really good. Update soon!