In a Lawless Love - Comments

This was a very insightful chapter. It gave more backstory to both the main characters and the world they live in. The whole time I was reading I was just marveling at how talented you are. It felt like I was reading something professionally written.

Very good chapter. More soon.

I can't believe that this is your first original fiction ever. That is shocking to me.

What era is this story taking place? Because some parts seem very old fashioned while others are more modern, so I wasn't sure.

It was interesting. Obviously this is just the first chapter so it's hard to judge what the story is going to be like. But it was interesting, and I'm looking forward to how you continue with this.

Yay, first comment!

I was very interesting. Its going to take a minute for me to adjust to this being... idk how to describe it, but a fictional world, where everything that is happening is supposedly normal. But its really good, I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing where it goes. More soon!