In a Lawless Love - Comments

Omg im so soooo sorry It took me so long to read this babe. I feel awful. I'm a horrible friend. :( but this was a really good chapter. I love the beginning. That was really good. And I liked the part with Matt in the kitchen with the cook. That was cute and it kind of humanized him.

I'm sorry again that it took me so long to read! I love you.

I liked the beginning very much. Jason and Charlotte are so tortured. This was a good chapter, it was a little slow, but still good. Excited to see what next chapter brings. More soon!

Great update:) things between Jason and Charlotte have really grown but unfortunately they can't be together. I'm also curious if Matt will able change I mean he claims that he loves her but he still hurts her when she doesn't do thing his way. I can't wait for the next update :)

@ XtremeFairy
Thank you so much for your comment! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

I'm really enjoying this story do far. I wish yhst charlotte and jason can be together but with things are it seem impossible to escape from matts view. I can't wait for the next update. :)

Well I thought it was better than you did, obviously. I quite enjoyed it. I thought the parts with Matt's mom were interesting. How he treats her and stuff. And the stuff with Charlotte and Jadon was good as always. More soon?

At the beginning when matts mom was yelling at her, I was like bitch please. She's obviously crazy and cold, just like her son. Seriously, yikes.

And I'm liking the Jason/Charlotte romance. Its getting steamy.

More soon!

@dirtylittlerocker29
No problem! I definetely will! I really need to know what happens next!! Keep up the good work!! :)

@ nch3
Thank you for your beautiful comment that really made my day!! I will be working on it and should probably have an update for it with in a week or two. please be sure to subscribe so you'll know when i have updated :)

I really, really, love this story! At times when Matt is kind to Charlotte I actually like him, but when I see what he is really capable of... I just feel so sorry for Charlotte and that she can't seem to get pregnant. I really like Jason, though! He sounds so handsome and he can relate to Charlotte on many things. I know you just updated this story not too long ago, but can you please update this story again and as soon as possible?? I really want to know what will happen with Charlotte and Jason as well as Charlotte and Matt!

Yay, Jason to the rescue! Matt is a dickhole. He needs to get a grip. Maybe there is.something wrong with him, did he ever think of that? That its not her fault that she's not pregnant already? Grrrr! Lol.

Good chapter. More soon?

Matt needs to be hung from a tree by his balls. What a bastard. I feel bad for Charlotte. She's such a victim. Jason needs to be a white knight and take her away. Well written chapter. Good job.

This was a nice chapter. You learned more about Matt and Charlotte. I agree with what Morgan said, that if Matt actually came from a genuine place in wanting to get closer to Charlotte, rather than just wanting her have babies. But, I liked learning more about Matt. I can understand why he is the way he is a little more.

This chapter was interesting. I don't know about Matt. Sometimes he's just a dick. Most times actually. But here he was actually decent. But there is just always a motivation behind what he does. I mean, maybe if he went at their relationship like this he would get somewhere. Treat it like a real relationship and not just like she is his personal baby factory.

Everyone is just so closed off in this story. They're all so locked up within themselves, it's kind of funny. Like, Charlotte has observations, but no emotions. Same with Amber and Jason, etc.

But this was interesting. Keep at it. :)

This chapter was interesting. I don't know about Matt. Sometimes he's just a dick. Most times actually. But here he was actually decent. But there is just always a motivation behind what he does. I mean, maybe if he went at their relationship like this he would get somewhere. Treat it like a real relationship and not just like she is his personal baby factory.

Everyone is just so closed off in this story. They're all so locked up within themselves, it's kind of funny. Like, Charlotte has observations, but no emotions. Same with Amber and Jason, etc.

But this was interesting. Keep at it. :)

This chapter was interesting. I don't know about Matt. Sometimes he's just a dick. Most times actually. But here he was actually decent. But there is just always a motivation behind what he does. I mean, maybe if he went at their relationship like this he would get somewhere. Treat it like a real relationship and not just like she is his personal baby factory.

Everyone is just so closed off in this story. They're all so locked up within themselves, it's kind of funny. Like, Charlotte has observations, but no emotions. Same with Amber and Jason, etc.

But this was interesting. Keep at it. :)

Matt is just a dick. I'm sorry but he is. And I saw how at the end with Jason you were showing how Matt is a good guy or whatever for giving him a job when he was struggling. But the only reason he did that was to have a hold over him because he was struggling. And that doesn't make him a good person. Yes he has given these people these jobs, but it is only to have control over them and take advantage of them.

So the whole point there is, yes he does good things but only when it benefits him.

I felt for Jason. Charlotte should get with Jason. That would be juicy. A triangle. Especially if she gets pregnant. Lol.

Another very good chapter. It gave good insight to both Matt and Jason. With Jason you felt sympathy. With Matt, there was definetely entitlment and lots of anger. He's just not a good person. He has a lot to learn. I really just want Charlotte and Jason to fall in love and run away together. lol.

More soon!!

I like this story so far. Update soon!

It was very interesting. It gave a lot if insight into why things are the way they are. It is, like madison said very professionally written. Like reading a book or something. Maybe because its so different from anything else that I tread on mibba, you know? Bit its also because you're a very good writer. :)