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  • darkmystic_angel

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    awesome plot twist. love it.
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:11pm
  • DarkXRomance

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    Loved it. Can't wait to read what happens next. :)
    September 15th, 2013 at 10:48am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    Oh my. That is all. I have no words. It was brilliant.
    September 15th, 2013 at 07:23am
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    Okay, this is getting more psychotic and I don't even know what to think. It's really good so far and this chapter left me wanting more!
    September 15th, 2013 at 05:48am
  • gothique4

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    Damn, what an intense start to a story. I'm not really into the whole kidnapping thing but you've written this so well. I'm curious as to why Matt's calling himself Charles. I'm guessing that the little girl is his daughter, and for some reason he wants Nicole to be her mother. Maybe he's a bit unhinged because his wife died, or left him. Can't wait to read more and find out what other bits of psychoness are floating around in his brain.
    September 15th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I am already hooked on this story! Please update soon!
    September 15th, 2013 at 05:24am
  • CountSynula

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    @ BlackMorphine
    Hehe. >=)
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • CountSynula

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    @ shortygirl
    Yay! I'm glad it surprised you. Mr. Green
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • CountSynula

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    @ purple89
    Hahaha well I will say yes to that last part of your comment but....it won't be exactly what you think. Muwahaha! I'm enjoying this story. I may try and shoot to update it again tomorrow. Thanks for the comment doll. Cool
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • shortygirl

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    Didn't see that coming. Well this getting interesting..
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:39am
  • BlackMorphine

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    :O
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:27am
  • purple89

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    wow....honey this just keeps getting better and better!!! i dunno but i think i have an idea where this is going but i could be so very wrong. It's so dark and creepy and Charles seems like he's lost a couple screws in that pretty head of his....and clearly he's searching for something to replace someone with right?! RIGHT?!
    September 15th, 2013 at 04:25am
  • BlackMorphine

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    Hmmm, então Matt já vigiava Nicole? *stalker mode on*
    September 3rd, 2013 at 06:51pm
  • CountSynula

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    @ princess jasmine
    Aw, thank you deary. That means a lot to me! Thanks for suffering through the dark parts lol. I'm glad that how I envisioned things is coming through to the readers. Smile
    September 3rd, 2013 at 04:59am
  • nymph

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    You were absolutely right, this is a pretty dark story! But I'm a big girl and I handled it! Mr. Green

    I love your use of description. There's very little dialogue in the beginning, but you still manage to set up these great scenes and characters, and kind of cast a shadow over the entire thing that is enough to make the entire thing have this feeling of mysteriousness. This absolutely leaves the the reader cringing in a good way (if that's possible, and wanting more!

    Great job :D
    September 3rd, 2013 at 03:57am
  • shortygirl

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    Wow he really shoved a bar of soap in her mouth. At least she knows he follows through with his treats.
    September 3rd, 2013 at 03:25am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    All I have to say is... "Oh my..."

    MORE! PLEASE?! SOON!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 01:59am
  • CountSynula

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    @ RachTheBat
    Lmao you're welcome! Cool
    September 2nd, 2013 at 11:16pm
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    @ xMandiblesx
    I'm right there with you Weird
    I've been singing the song all day, it's stuck in my head.. thanks. Hahaha
    September 2nd, 2013 at 11:06pm
  • CountSynula

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    @ BeenDownThatRoad
    Hahaha they will all be answered in good time my dear. *goes "muwahahaha" in an evil voice*
    September 2nd, 2013 at 10:57pm
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