Baby Doll - Comments

@ little bird;
Hahaha aw! I'm so happy that you're diggin it. Makes me grin like a nerdy school girl bahaha. Yes....I bet people are anxious to see which guy the new guy is.

@ QuothRaven
Yay! I'm glad that you like it.

RachTheBat:

He's still a sandwich or two short of a picnic.. but..I

LOL that part made me laugh out loud for real. Yeah....he's definitely off his rocker just a teensie bit haha! And by the way....I added that "Shut your god damn mouth before I cut your tongue from your head," par in there on purpose because of the song. Hahaha for some reason the thought of Matt cutting someone's tongue off made me hot LOL. I am insane. Thanks so much for the comment though hun. It really made me smile this morning. You're awesome!

Just found this and now I can't wait for the next chapter!

"Shut your god damn mouth before I cut your tongue from your head," You had me singing Hail to the King in my head for most of this chapter haha. I was expecting him to violate her in some way in the shower, and my crazy little mind may have made up my own little scenario when he washed her lady parts..yes, I'm weird. XD

Knowing a little about why he chooses his victims, I kinda feel a little bad for him ya know? He's still a sandwich or two short of a picnic.. but..I don't know, I feel for him. I'm glad too he doesn't get a sexual thrill from it, that would just make him go down so much in my estimations and I really like the character so please don't make him all sick and twisted like that hahaha.

I like that he follows through with his threats, he did tell her to watch her mouth. I've had my own mouth washed out with soap and water, it's gross.

I love Nicole, her sass is awesome! I'm glad she's not painted as some poor defenceless little lady. She fights back :D

I'm thinking the other man in the room is Brian? If so, you slipped up there dumb ass. Eventually her subconscious will cough up why she finds the name so familiar and boom, games up!

Really enjoying this story, looking forward to the next instalment!

OH SHIT, here comes the rest of the boys. I'm now officially freaking out about seeing where this goes. I didn't expect any of the guys to come into the picture.
But honestly, I was really... hot and bothered by Charles/Shads when he was bathing her and all that. I'm weird don't judge me okay.
And your OC's snappy attitude towards him is so adorable. I love her.
You have me hooked, girl.

I am so freaking curious about this story now!!! I need more. I have so many questions!!

@ BlackMorphine
Então, você gosta dele, então certo? Haha eu tive que usar um tradutor para ler o seu comentário.

@ HaleyStillYDGn
Aw thanks! Glad you like it.

I really love this story a lot so far! :D

Eu tenho uma queda seriamente doente (em busca de tratamento especializado. profissionais da área psiquiátrica, pm) por personagens que são imorais - quando digo isso é relativo a falta de moralidade social, etc.
E, bem, Charles me atingiu em cheio com este hobby desfuncional que é acumular mulheres que lhe lembram uma "fonte" de inspiração. Com certeza Nicole é mais uma de muitas, o que me faz pensar...
... Como ela vai se destacar entre as demais?

E a primeira cena do capítulo dois é relativamente semelhante a Saw I :D

Uh, wow! 'Charles' is scary stuff. And he calls her Baby Doll? I love it. It was so creepy, but fantastic all at the same time!! I have a feeling he plans to break this Doll. I seriously can't wait for more. This is really good:)

This was amazing, lady.

@ xMandiblesx
Thanks babe,so are you I'm glad that I still make you smile and inspire you. Also, I'm glad you ovrcame your feeligs ad posted itand I'm sure everyone else is too. You're welcome grl. I always tell you that I'm here for you a
and I meant it. NOOO I LOVE YOU MORE!!!! LOL. And yes, any side of Matt is sexy as hell. Now ge towork on the next chapter or else lol jk.

absolutely loving this so far!!!

OH MY GOD. Does he have a doll fetish? I'm scared. Dolls freak me out. xD
Great job with the pace though. The plot is flowing perfectly.

@ shortygirl
Thank you kindly! Means a lot.

This is really good. Loving it so far.

@ lilxladyx143
Awww! Thanks so much, darling. Your comment made me smile my dang face off nearly lol. Twisted Shadows is pretty hot.

@ Mrs. Shadows
Aw girl...you are just so awesome! Your support and kind words always inspire me and make me smile. I'm glad I decided to push through my "bleh" feelings with the chapter and post it now. Thanks for always being there. I love you more muwahahaha! >=) Btw...any side of Matt is hot.