Baby Doll - Comments

@ RachTheBat
Exactly! Thanks doll!

Holy shit you're an amazing writer, everything was so detailed. Sounds corny but I felt like I was there the whole time with her lol...great update! Shadows is a sick fucker and I love every second of it hahah keep it up!! (:

Great update love :D

Again with the detail, I don't know how you do it. It must take a lot of time. I'm glad you decided to make this an M. Shadows fanfic because you know I love me some Shadows. I also like this dark, twisted side of him, it's so fucking hot. As I read it, I could picture the room she was in and just ick, gross lol. That poor girl, now dead. Nicole is going to be over her hammer by the time Matt finishes with her. Love your writing and like I said before it doesn't suck at all. Can't wait for the next update. I NEED more! Update soon my love. Love you <3

@ xMandiblesx
Lol, no worries! Me casa eh su casa, or.. something like that haha!
Yeah, you want her to appear like strong on the outside even if she's a scared mess on the inside haha.
You're doing a great job so far! :D

@ RachTheBat
Pshhh I love your ramblings lady...not that they were rambling. Yeah Nicole is definitely not a push over. It's so tough to write her like that because I want her to be strong...but she's still a female and they are going to be emotional at some point. Thanks for reading and listening to be prattle on about my story ideas lmao.

@ xMandiblesx
WOW! What a chapter! That ending..

I'm hooked on this already! Great detail, I felt like I was right there in the room with them. Matt is seriously one fucked up dude isn't he? Haha. Even though I already know why he cut her hair and dyed it, I still can't wait to find out what made him this way. Okay, now I know a little of what made him turn out like this haha, but I can't wait to read the ins and outs.

I'm so glad you made Nicole a little fucked up too, not some idiot girl who's a pussy or falls for Matt. I like that she has sass! :D

Okay, I'ma stop rambling now haha. Great update love, can't wait for more!!

@ RachTheBat
Thanks love! I can't wait to get home from work so that I can write more.

@ lilxladyx143
Yeah lol. Sigh. I always have trouble resisting writing about those guys haha. If I dropped that ice cream I'd bend down to get it. That stuff costs like $4.00 a pint and I ain't rich! Bashaha. Shadows can kidnap me any day if he wants. I'm going to try and update tonight! Thanks for commenting!

@ BeenDownThatRoad
lol! Well I originally was going to make it an Original since I didn't know if little bird was into Fan Fiction let alone M. Shadows...when I thought this story up I pictured him in my mind but a little...crazy. So she does like him so yeah lol! Yay! Shadows!

The whole time she was shopping I was just waiting for something to happen to her and then when the ice cream was under the car, in my head I was like, DON'T DO IT JUST LEAVE IT BEHIND!! But damn I can tell I'm gonna love this story!! After reading the other comments and seeing that the little description says you made it into a Shadows story..I'm really fucking happy about that hahah love him

Lol, OK I'm feeling like an ass now after reading other comments. Is this a M.Shadows fix? I just assumed from that sets ass banner that it was? Either way I can't wait for an update, I love twisted stories:D

OK, I love this! Matt as a bad ass...L O V E! For real. Also, that Banner of Matt....fuck yeah! That man makes my lady parts sing. Lol update soon!

I'm getting a real horror movie vibe here, something like the screamo types where there's a crazy psycho killer on the loose grabbing young girls, maybe that's just my warped mind haha!

Can't wait to read more! :D

@ little bird;
Okay cool lol. I love him...you have no idea. I always have a hard time choosing between him and Synyster. That's why most all of my stories are either Matt or Brian! Haha!

@ xMandiblesx
If you do, I would love it if it were an M. Shadows fic. He's just...

@ xMandiblesx

@ little bird;
If after a while it doesn't get as many reads...I may change it to Fan Fiction. Idk...do you like M. Shadows? lol

@ little bird;
You're welcome dear! lol I'm having a hard time not just making this into a Fan Fiction but...I didn't know if you were into certain fandoms. Plus I think when people imagine normal average people being killers in stories it makes it all the more interesting! The next chapter will be much more action packed so don't worry! I'm glad I could make you smile.

@ xMandiblesx

Can't wait hun!

Reading through this chapter made me paranoid of going shopping by myself at night, which is what I usually do. I love what you did with the pace in that first chapter, though. It's sort of cruising at a normal pace and then the end just grabs you by the neck. I want to see where this goes and find out what this kidnapper is like. I'm definitely going to subscribe to this.

By the way, naming your character after me has made me so happy--I can't even explain. It means so much and I really, really, really adore you for that. Thank you. <3

@ Liam Payne;
Thanks! The next chapter is where it will all get pretty interesting!