It Was a Transparent World - Comments

This chick is seriously creepy. =) You write a good wacko.

Hey Tips! OMG the first two chapters I think I held my breath the whole time. I love your layout. I love the second to last and the very last lines in the second chapter. That's pure genius. Dark and depressing stories are great to read. Excited to continue, so I'll get on that now. xx

@ xiumin.
Thank you! Glad you liked this (:

I love the ominous aspects to this story so much...the short chapters hook you in so much. Your writing style is also so unique, I haven't read a story on here like this. I love the way you present Myra to the reader, you don't give much away except a hint of darkness and craziness...absolutely love it (:

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Yeah, I'll explain with the coming chapters. Sorry if this was lame.
Thanks Pheno! You're the best! Thank you for staying And I'm hoping you didn't read the previously posted chap or I'm gonna facepalm myself a hundred times hahaha

I'm SO happy you updated!!!!!!!!

I like it being from his point-of-view and the fact that we're getting some answers about this world that is unfolding before his very eyes. I'm interested for more to be explained, though. I hope you can work through your block and I hope that you know I'll be right here waiting every time you post.

@ Derek's Wolf Angel
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this!
And really, happy new year! :D

Everything about this story is compelling... it pulls you in and keeps your attention, and it holds a certain beauty in the words that are used... from the plot to the detail it is amazing to read, and the scenes each chapter creates evolves into something some what magical to me... I love it good job!

@ Elephant PJs
:O Thank you! I can't believe I got such a nice comment! OMG, thank you! Glad you liked this! :)

I really like this story. It's very easy to read the first chapters and get sucked in. I was at the end of what you have written before I knew it! Your chapter length really works for this story. I got the creeps a few times while reading this, so you've absolutely nailed the whole ghost thing. You've created this whole other world with its own rules, and it's really creative. Myra is an intriguing character and I like that she is a bit mad - though not in the way her parents thought. I also like the switching perspectives of Adam and Myra. It works quite well. I am really curious to see where this is going and couldn't guess for the life of me.

Great job and good luck in the contest!

@ maudaah
So cool! And my phone doesn't even let me login XD

@ Tipsy Returns
It's something on my phone haha :D

@ maudaah
WOah! And how do we do that heart? And you're welcome! ^_^

@ Tipsy Returns
Thanks for accepting my request ♡

@ maudaah
You're such a great person! Thank for the friend request too!

@ Tipsy Returns
No problem beautiful :)

@ maudaah
♥ Gosh, it works! Thank you! :D

@ Tipsy Returns
on your keybord, you press alt and 3(the one on the right) at the same time

@ maudaah
Thanks...
Um...how do we make that heart?

@ Tipsy Returns
you are so sweet ♥