It Was a Transparent World - Comments

@ maudaah
Oh God, Thank you! You're such a kind girl! Thank you so much. OMG... I'm so happy!

@ Tipsy Returns
you are so welcome dear! Like I said, your writing skills are amazing :)!

@ maudaah
Oh My God, that's such an amazing comment! Thank you!
You just made my day! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Thanks again!!

At first, the title really caught my attention! Then, I started reading the first chapters and I was captivated. Your writing skills are amazing. I love the plot, the characters...everything! I was sad when I reached the last chapter, I wanted more! I'm happy to say that I will keep reading this after posting this comment. I love how you switch point of views! We get to know the psychological sides of the characters, mostly Myra and her brother! It is well done, we don't get mixed up while reading your story. Your story is original, I have never read anything like that before!I'm a girl who doesn't get into stories easily, but you girl made me get into your story. The chapters are not too long and not too short, the characters are original and well writte . Keep it up, it is amazing! You're a fantastic writer :)

@ Ne0nAbyss
Woah! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one :D And I'm so glad you found the layout nice haha. And thanks again for subb'ing and staying! Thank you! :D:D

When I first clicked the story I expected to only read a couple chapters so I could get a nice feel for the story to leave a decent comment but I was interested from the second chapter. I ended up on the 20th chapter before I realized it and I must say that I really like this. I like it enough that I'm going to keep reading after this comment and subscribe. But any-who, the layout is beautiful, the grammar (from what i can tell) flawless, and overall this is something I can really read and get into.

@ Goddess of Muse
Thank you! I hope I can stop getting stuck already. Romance is my biggest nightmare, and I'm doing it for NaNo haha
And good luck with yours too! I hope you'll finish it up!

Nah, I'm not doing NaNo this year. I considered it for a while, because I have this idea for a story I could write, but in the end I decided against it. I've had so much on my plate this month that there's no way I could try and write 50,000 words on top of that.

I'll probably still end up writing that story, just maybe not for a while. My goal for this month is to finish a story that I've been writing on and off for about a year now. But good luck with NaNo! I'm sure you'll do great!

@ Goddess of Muse
Don't worry about it. All my friends always give me two
Yayy! That would be a relief. I'm counting on you then! Are you doing NaNo as well?

Crap, just realised I gave you two notifications with that last reply.

And I'm sure it's not as bad as you're making out! I'll give you constructive criticism if I have any.

@ Goddess of Muse
Nope, don't worry. You wouldn't get hooked I'm giving romance a try, and I really suck at it. One reason why I wanna hear from you haha

@ Tipsy Returns
You're welcome! And yeah, I'll check out your other story! I noticed when I was looking at the details that the word count is larger than this story, so I might not have time to read all of it, unfortunately. You never know though! If I get hooked on it like I did with this story, then I'll probably read to the end. It all depends on how much time I have really.

@ Goddess of Muse
Yayy! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! And I knew Night would win! haha
And if you could let me know about that one too, it'd be great since it's my NaNo work and it's driving me almost mental (do I sound greedy? Sorry! XD) Thanks again! (:

Sorry that it's taken me a while to comment. I said I was going to be busy in my blog about a week back, and that it might take me a while to comment on everyone's. You linked two stories in your comment - would you like me to comment on that one too?

This is such a great story you have here! It took me a while to read the full thing, but I did it anyway because it was so gripping! The best thing about this story is your characterisation - each character has a distinct and unique personality that's really easy to relate to. My favourite character, by far, is Night. He just seems so eccentric and mysterious in the way he acts, and he really intrigues me as a character.

I like the way you switch between first and third person. I've not read that's ever done a good job with that, but you really pulled it off! It gives away lots about the natures of Adam and Myra, and it keeps the reader on their toes. It's great!

But yeah, what a great story you have here! Definitely recommending!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I'm just so happy that Myra is loved so much by you! Thank you! And really, I'm so glad you weren't weirded out by my NaNo work too haha
Um... you're so kind, thank you!!

SEE!?!?!? I knew she had strength in her! Look at this! She feels that justice doesn't exist and yet, she still states that she wouldn't give up. I'm so proud of her!!!!!!!

Awe, thank you for dedicating this to me! I did check out your NaNo story, and I'm about to go finish reading what is posted. Lol. You're just an amazing author, all the way around. Thank you for sharing what goes on in your head! Love you!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
It will it will And I'm glad you think it's awesome, because the half-half concept made me wonder if everyone reading would think I've finally lost my brain and leave me

@ castiel's vessel
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this! Sorry for the delay in replying... looks like I'm a pro at delaying as well haaha Thanks again!

Half-human and half-ghost???? Whoa! That's pretty awesome. I'm interested to see what she will tell Adam, what advice or lesson Night wanted him to learn. I also hope that this leads to a meeting with Myra...at least eventually. I really want them to speak again, one more time.