Death Reports - Comments

Kerplunk Girl:

Me too.

I hate stories that have like, ipods in the 80's...It's not really realistic. :x

LMAO (:

Yeah, I totally agree :D And they're listening to Green Day in '82 *rolls eyes* Some Nostradamus like kids LMAO.

Me too.

I hate stories that have like, ipods in the 80's...It's not really realistic. :x

Thank you, Die (:

I like life like stories more than science fiction and all that jazz (:
I like stories that can actually relate to real life :D

This chapter shows intense emotion, I feel sorry for Sean, even though he doesn't really exist. It's probably 'cause you write very life like. :D

Your story is great!

Bastard Son.:

I think this was my favorite chapter so far. Don't ask me why. It was just so... Wow.

And yes to all. I find this more than interesting, the plot is unpredictable and I'm really, really intrigued.

So, naturally I can't wait for more. ;)

Oh... WOW *is amazed*

I actually thought people wouldn't like this chapter 'cause of a lack of action (: I mean, Sean is at the precinct, writing down his thoughts and stuff (:

But frankly, I like this chapter, too (:

AND THANK YOU, MY DEAR READER <3

(:

I think this was my favorite chapter so far. Don't ask me why. It was just so... Wow.

And yes to all. I find this more than interesting, the plot is unpredictable and I'm really, really intrigued.

So, naturally I can't wait for more. ;)

Great story! Update soon, please!

People, I've been thinking... Yeah, RLY (.

I want to ask you if you find this story interesting, if you find the plot interesting, if you really want to know what happened to Sean's wife, who killed her, who killed the other Sarah? I mean, can you imagine things as you read the story... Somehow, I like an interesting plot better than the writing itself *shifty*

I've been thinking about that and then Michelle answered my questions (: Merci.

Other people who read my story can answer, too (:

I'm curious, orly.

played in stereo.:

Josipa:

Jolly McJollyson:

Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.

I thought people might be interested in a pool party at my house LOL

dujo in a bathing suit? ~~

:shifty: k sorry

We'd be in a pool house nearby. With the doors locked (:

Josipa:

Jolly McJollyson:

Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.

I thought people might be interested in a pool party at my house LOL

dujo in a bathing suit? ~~

:shifty: k sorry

sampalletband:

Okay....
I have often said I like stories that almost make me have a running 'movie' in my head about the story. Where I see in my mind's eye the story play out. Your writing did that to me; played a movie in my head. It must be the descriptive style without overly being descriptive to the extent that there is nothing left to the imagination; that appeals to me.

I second that motion.8)
All say I.

"I!"

:D

Okay....

Just read Chap 1-3 and I will admit I'm hooked.

As others before have said; it really is a different style not seen much on Mibba. The choppy sentences were hard to read in the beginning but as I read further it was obvious that they aided rather than hindered the story along.

The plot of the story itself is very original and it pulls the reader in without them knowing it. I started out on the first chapter and literally don't even remember clicking the links to go to the next chapter until I couldn't click a link. I LOVE stories like that... where I get so engrossed that I click/turn a page without even knowing it.

I have often said I like stories that almost make me have a running 'movie' in my head about the story. Where I see in my mind's eye the story play out. Your writing did that to me; played a movie in my head. It must be the descriptive style without overly being descriptive to the extent that there is nothing left to the imagination; that appeals to me.

*wipes brow*

I don't think I've ever given such a detailed comment about a story on a comment thread... on the editing page maybe but not the comment thread. :tehe:

“Honey, I will stay a bit longer at the office. My boss is molesting me with all this work”
*giggles to self like a school girl* :tehe:
That bit made me laugh, them liars.

I agree with basturd son.We can just sit back, and let a pro write. 8)

Sean should of kept the green rock! He could get killed without it *shakes fist*, I know I would of kept it, it's lucky.

Can't wait for more!

Bastard Son.:

Josipaaaa... Stop making me jealous. xD You're doing an awesome job here. I'm just gonna sit back and enjoy the excellent read. I love being lazy for a change.

Jealous? Of me? You're nuts (: I just commented on your Nice and Blue. And it wasn't nice and blue, it was and it IS Wonderful and Beautiful (:

You have got the skill, ladeh!

Josipaaaa... Stop making me jealous. xD You're doing an awesome job here. I'm just gonna sit back and enjoy the excellent read. I love being lazy for a change.

Jolly McJollyson:

By the way, how long have you been speaking English? I noticed you're from Croatia, but your English is excellent (better than many of the Americans on the site, in fact, haha).

And Mike Chilludo's coming *shifty*

Speaking of English.. In the 3rd grade, I think. Meaning, I've been speaking it for like 12-13 years... But I'm always scared when I express myself in English. I guess it's normal considering the fact that it isn't my first language.

And thanx (:

By the way, how long have you been speaking English? I noticed you're from Croatia, but your English is excellent (better than many of the Americans on the site, in fact, haha).

Josipa:

Jolly McJollyson:

Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.

I thought people might be interested in a pool party at my house LOL

YYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!

AND THERE'S GONNA BE FOOD, AND GIRLS, AND MORE FOOD!

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Jolly McJollyson:

Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.

I thought people might be interested in a pool party at my house LOL

Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.