Hemorrhage. - Comments

Holy crapola. You've done it again Kaylie.
I love that we get the inner workings of Emelie's mind. It's fascinating and has a lot of depth to it.
The fact that this is so realistic, it's brilliant. Yours and Melanie's writing inspire me since it has this element that's like BAM! In your face x]
I should have know it was John. Though he may be angry at her with the look he gave her, he should know he has a part in what's going on with her too.
Hopefully he acknowledges what a douche he was when he was younger and try to make up for his stupid mistakes.
Can't wait to read more of this. It's amazing (as usual).
Love you lots.
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I love this story so far. Please continue! And fast! =)

I think I like this just as much - if not more than - Hey, Darling.

I've never seen an idea quite like this before. I've seen the ones with eating disorders, nut never a story where the girl is doing to becausenof a boy that's supposedlynher friend.

I think it was really low of John to say that Emilie didn't need those french fries. So what? If she's healthy, who cares? At least Jared stood up for her.

Part of the reason that John stopped talking to Em, in my opinion, isn't because he didn't care, but because he saw a change in her weight and knew it was kinda his fault.

Oh, is mystery boy at the end of 3 John, by any chance?? He better see a change by now!

Update :]

I definitely like this story already (:

Wow, this is pretty intense
the writing = fantastic by the way

Okay, I was thinking about it, and here's what I've decided should happen, dear Kaylie.
It should be John that sees her, and then he can be like "OMG WTF WHY WAS I SUCH A DICKFACE TO YOU?!" and feel guilty.
And sad.
And then feel so horrendously awful for what he did, that he has no choice other than to spend the rest of the time she's back in Arizona with him, and he can try to make up for his douche-ness by being adorably cute (psh, like that's quite the feat anyway).
And she'll be like 'oh wow, i love him, look how much he cares about me'.

Or he could be totally clueless and be like "OMG WHY?!" and try to help her and thus have to be with her all the time.
But then she can be a bit bitter and be like "EFF YOU JOHNOHHH, it's your fault anyway!!!"
And he'll then feel like shit and feel sad and thus want to make it up to her and get her better because he loooooooooves her.
(wow, run-on sentences much? oh well)
Yes'r. So, you should go ahead and get that, okay? okay.
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You need to update this pronto.
I feel like every story you write you make the main guy look like a douche. haha:tehe:

AH! Cliffhangerrr. :]. I loved this chapter.

You m'dear are not dead to the world. Too amazing to be so<3
Your update left me amazed. Your writing is raw, edgy, and no fluff whatsoever.
Have I told you I'm jelly of your writing skills?
Because I am and this story exhibits them to the fullest extent.
You get into the workings of a girl who suffers from a eating disorder better than anything else I've read from the bookstore. Usually I stay away from books that focus on that subject since they either fluff things up or just overlook the essentials.
Plus, HOLY CRAPOLA!
If it's John who she saw in her driveway I'm going to flip. Some intense scene is going down, I can feel it. I sense some scolding and anger to be let loose, but I could be wrong.
Looking forward to reading more, girlie. I heart you lots.
<33

Dude, I'm really addicted to this.
I'm curious as how that 'boy' is going to react. I just hope it's John. :)
I feel bad for her, because she's obviously not fat at all.
Keep up the good work! :)

I don't like her mother, she may have great intentions in all but still i really don't like her she should be there for her.
I really can't wait to see who it is that saw her! This is getting so intresting!

this is written astoundingly well. ;)

I'm really looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds. It's also extremely well written, as mentioned before.

loved this chapter.
can't wait for more.
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this is EXTREMELY well written.
update soon :)

1) You are not dead to the world. At least I hope not.
2) IS THAT JOHN THAT SEES HER??!!?!??!
Oh boy do I hope so.
I'm so happy you updated this. I totally love love love love love this, in case you never noticed. I think you need to get one of the Maine boys to see her and then knock some sense into her.
The descriptions you use in this still astound me. Everything's so realistic and you do'nt sugarcoat any of her issues.
Please update again! You're amazing <3

I'm very excited to see where this story goes, the start is brilliant, wrote wonderfully!! Thankyou. haha.

oh god, uneasy feeling
cant wait for more though

so i am absolutely in loveee with this story.
no joke.
udate soon please?