Pretty Bird - Comments

Woah, that was quite intense! xD I hope Blake hears em out and goes to rehab...

Yesh! 5-10 more chapters! :D haha

OH!! There's 10 stars already! Congrats :)

Bloody hell was that intense. You could really feel the emotion in that intervention. Hell, in the whole story you got going there. You're able to take the reader on an emotional whirlwind and manipulate our feelings to feel the same.
You got me hooked, I read People Got A Lotta Nerve and to what you have up on Pretty Bird already in a day.
And I really have to say, I like how you're able to give focus on all these relationships at once. I thought it was really clever and enthralling to see the whole 'six degrees of seperation' thing going on almost, except it's kind of how this girl plays roles in all these peoples lives and changes them, whether they know it or not (particularily and most obviously Oliver and Blake) and also her looking into people's relationships (like Blake and Alena or Holly and Curtis).
I mean, even if I didn't particulary like Christian when she smashed Emma's face in, and I don't think she deserved it (I'm a lover not a fighter?) I still loved her. Ye know? I suppose I'm trying to say you drew this emotional connection to Christian that I could only imagine Oliver is feeling in this story tenfold, but it's still so strong. And not only with Christian, but Blake and Holly and Keane and Lee and Tom and everyone.
What I'm trying to say is that I think you've done an amazing job and I'm completely and utterely drilling at the bit to read more.

(And I particularily love the name choice. By fate, you picked my favorite name for a girl ever. For a boy, it's Ezra but that's not the point in case, I guess.)
(Ah, and I'm glad he's coming to Wales. That's were all the proper girlies are.)

you know what sucks? i used to read these updates before they were posted.
and it made me feel special. but now, i'm just like everyone else D:

BUT EITHER WAAAAAAAAAAY.
you're an amazing writer & allll your updates are fuggin' magical.
i loved it. loved it loved it loved it.

AND YAY FOR GETTING TEN STARS, CHICKA! <3

update sooooooooooon!

Aww!!
Can't wait to see what blake says

That was amazing

I'm up to date with all the chapters now, yay!
I loved the whole idea of an intervention and I loved that Christian just flipped for once,
I didn't expect it tbh.

Such an amazing story and I've subscribed to Pin Your Wings

= )

FIGHT IT BLAKE!!! FIGHT IT!!!!! *peace sign*

Stupid parents and Caroline.. Poor Tom and unborn child...

I just thought of the song Birthday Sex xD hahaah and it never occured to me while reading xD

and I vote YAY to threequel :D haha

Ahhh. Surprise birthday party. Looks like they had some fun in the bathroom... Ahahha.

Poor Tom. He has a narcissistic bitch for a girlfriend. D: How horrible.

But, it's going great. And I totally can't wait to read more, as always.

her parents suck!!!
Fucking pricks

It's not shitty

And I liked that chapter, don't like her parents but the direction you decided to go in made your story one of those that isn't all cliche.

And that's really good,
And I don't want this story to end, it's too goood

:D

Such a great chapter. It was nice to see Oliver standing up for Christian like that. It may have actually made my heart warm there. :]
But I think it's going quite well, and not shitty in the least!

And why, a threequel sounds quite nice :D I love this story too much to see it end sooner than later.

You know what would be cool?
A threequel about how the deal with being... PARENTS.
Yes.
How they deal with their kid.
:D Bahah

Great chapter can't wait for another one :D
and yesssss threequeal sound samazzzzzzzingggggggggg (:
keep up the good work

Aww I feel so bad for her!!
I love this story! I don't think it's bad at all!!

Wow.

Her parents are so fucked up, it's not even funny.

Just, wow.

I love this story, though. I'm a new subscriber. I just caught up.

Man, they're ratty bitches!! :P
And I would LOVE a threequel!! <3

so i guesss i should stop saying that i read the chapters before anyone else
because i read every chapter before anyone else. and it's starting to get old to people who forced to read my comments on this story. :P

BUT gah, this chapter is so goood.
cute & sad & amazzzing. :]

i'm making you update again soon.
just so you know. :D

mibbba's crazy, i posted this last night when you posted the fifteenth chapter the first time. but then you said you were going to delete it and repost it later.
so i came back to delete it & it wasn't there.
but now i got the notification for this chapter again,
and i came to recomment,
and look! here's my comment.
freaaaaaaaakaye.

Just read both Prequel and Sequel in about 5 hours :D

Your a pretty good writer, and the plots are unique in some ways :)

Oooh. It's getting seriously heated now!
I can't wait to see what Tom's going to do, especially once he leaves for Germany with Oliver and Christian. Oh, and I'm happy it's a girl, at least. Too bad her mom is crazy...
And now with Blake... Aye. It'll be scary to see what's going to happen next with him. I don't like Alena one bit. And I hope that Curtis will be able to help with all of it.

I hate Alena, what a bitch. I don't really know if I want Tom to stay with Caroline, especially if they keep not getting along and baby Tom's miserable. But Oli seems to be happy to be an uncle.