Pretty Bird - Comments

oops, double. :oops:

(: i feel really superior having read this prior to ir being posted.
ahem. anyways.

AHMYGOD, dayyummm.
they're engaged. oh my crap.
they're such a cute couple.
and oliver is so weird. GP? hahaha.
i started laughing out loud at that part.

and yaay our story! :D
curtis ward for the win. <3

UPDATE SOON.
:D soon soon soon.

soon.

Baby Sykes' Mini Sykes?
My head hurts when I even think about saying that. D:

& I can now say that I hate Caroline. I seriously want to give Tom a hug, because that girl makes my stomach churn.

You are thinking so much I can almost hear it.
I adored that line for some reason.

& Holy snap crackle pop! I’m going to go crazy wondering if he just wanted to let her know he plans on spending his life with her or if he’s going to pop the question.

brb shatting my pants :)

HES GUNA ASK HER TO MARRY HIM!
she cant predict the future but I sure can =] lol

It would be bad if it wasn't toms baby and she was just using him :/
although Caroline is a bitch and Tom does deserve better :)

Is oli gonna propose?!?

This chapter seriously made my whole life.

And I was thinking for a millisecond earlier, its as much as I could do for it being summer, and Christian really has come far since the first story began. Now it's just hard to imagine that she was ever awkward around them.

And this Caroline chick, I still don't know about that one.

i "aww"ed when oliver told christian that she was thinking so much, he could practically hear it.
i giggled when curtis called himself a weirdo.
i smiled when christian called oliver sykes and he called her serra.
yup, this was absolutely magical. (:

i think i'm just about everyone's favorite person because i get you to update so much, actuallly. :P they should be thankful!

ahhh, thank you for whoring my story bythewayyy.
i laughed when i read "holly's oli story" because it rhymed.
and i laughed even more at the "It's Proper Mint" comment. :P

and if i update in the later-day, you best believe you're updating by tomorrow. (:
because i will make youi. because i'll be that annoying person i become when i want an update. haha.

by the way, i'm still blind, so if there are any mistakes in this comment, give me a break.

O.o i didn't see that coming.
like,...whoa.

agh, i hated caroline so muuch!
now she's permanite. :p

this was fantastic. (:
update sooon, chicka.

phew, so glad it's caroline that's pregnant and not some whore by oli. i didn't think he would, but it's possible this also explains why he's been going places with tom/caroline like to lee's etc, yay. they're all getting baby fever so weird.

this chapter was like perfect. so funny too.
except now I suppose we can't give caroline the boot.....
darn. :( haha.

DUDE! That was my second guess!
Woah. I’m a genius.

Why are you ignoring me because Caroline has some new found pickle obsession?!
I’ve never laughed so damn hard lmao

Tom......Tom had sex!?
Surprised me to. haha

God everyone is getting knocked up it seems. Who’s next? D:

Epic update once again <3

The first thing that came to mind when I read pickles was pregnant for some reason. I just associate the two I suppose….

But that’s not possible, Oliver is a man, he can’t be pregnant. & there’s no woman that could be, right?

Can we say wacked imagination on my end?

My mind is going into over mode trying to figure out what’s up with him so I’m getting these insane ideas. If I don’t find out what’s going on with him soon I’m going to have a mental break down D:

& I’m worried about Blake & Curtis. Curtis should stay away from him and everyone should stay away from that nut Blake is with :/

Anyway, epic update as always! You never fail to amaze me. & Thank you for the mention you’re awesome pimp <3 haha

how about you update soon so we can all figure out where the hell oli is and what he's doing.

eeeeeeeep!
that was really intense.
blake is kinda scary now.
alena bugs me. like, aghhh.

:D aaah, i smiled at the parts with curtis.
so cute. although, i wouldn't be caught dead touching a chicken. vegetarian.
but eeek, i'm so scared to see what happens with blake & curtis. D:
christian has like all these worries, how is she going to deal with them?!

oh! and thanks for whoring my story. very shweet. :]
update soon, girlfrienddd. :3 !

Wow I am a super idiot!!
When you said Tom and Caroline I thought Tom was there with his mom, cause her name is Carol.... Then I just figured out what you are talking about haha

Grrr!
I wanna know what Oli was doing! Or who he was doing?

Oliver better not be up to no good when he’s away. I’m starting to worry.

Anyway, Matt and the baby were too cute and I loved how he basically said I need more alcohol and just left.

So, whose the one with baby fever now?" I whispered, smiling wide for Aubrey. He didn't answer, just kept his eyes on Aubrey, her joyful cries filling up the room.

Oh boy D:
I think Oliver wants a baby. Hm. I think he’d make a good dad. & I was literally awing the whole time he was holding Aubrey.

& Tom's gf needs to go go go. For some reason I really dislike her a lot.

:] i see my character has been mentioned. awwwh :D
curtis <3 eeeep.

ANYWAYYYYS.
oh my gosh, this story is so dannng good.
i'm addicted. and awwh, babies are so cute !
update soon, chicka !

Who's the one with baby fever noww Oli :) yay. Even though his absences are weird I hope he's planning something good and not galivanting around. I can also totally imagine Matt Nicholls with a baby, you described him very well with the bit about his voice and the way he acts being a little over the top. :)