Pretty Bird - Comments

Caroline is very sketchy there musts isn't something right about her.....
I can't wait for the intervention!!

I can't believe she said what if I die in my sleep. She get's ponts for amusing me.

& Poor Blake =(
>.< grr lmao Amazing as always <3

eeeep! i read this beforehand, but sheeeesh.
i love this chapter, it's so good.
pooor baby sykes <3

update soon chicky booo. :D

Daaaang. I didn't know Blake was gonna go that bad!!!
Update soon!!
And help out lil Tommy!!!! <333

Baby Sykes.
I feel so bad for him, he's too sweet for this! DD:

But on a better note, I love this story very much. :] It's easily my favorite story on mibba. I was very excited to see it updated, I squeaked! XDD
Updated soon, plz!<3

Sooo you should make another update tonight.
Because i can't get enough of this storyyyy :D

holllydarling:

O.o blake's fucking scary.
christian can't find one good best friend, can she?! D:

aghh, poor tom. D:
i feeeel so bad for him.
stupid caroline, efffing bitch.

update soon, yeah? :D

AND OH. look! sabrina quoted that line you were feeling awkward about!
and apparently, she got teary eyed. so you had no reason to be like "D:" about it.

I'm trying to understand why you would feel awkward about that part. I'll never understand you. haha

Anyway. Is Caroline going to even let Tom go? D:
I sense drama. O.O
You should update soon, like right now soon ( :

sometimes i can't help but realllly hate mibba.
but aw, this chapter was so cute!
it was amusing imagining oliver picking out flowers. :P

hahahaha, peach. i can't believe you added that in there.
eeeeeeep, update soon, deary!

"Puzzle pieces are supposed to not bend, they are supposed to stay rigid in their shape and fit perfectly with their counterparts, creating a beautiful picture. Lives, like I always say, are puzzles, and going through life, you collect all the different pieces that will in the end make up that beautiful picture."

I just had to quote that, 'cause I'm seriously in love with how it sounded. Just started the sequel now, but I had to comment that! I'm horribly excited now to read the rest of what's posted tonight, ahah. Back to reading!
(And, I just subscribed!)

Great Story!
I love it soo much, same with the prequel part too :D
Great job (:

Wow, that was my favorite chapter so far!
:)

O.o blake's fucking scary.
christian can't find one good best friend, can she?! D:

aghh, poor tom. D:
i feeeel so bad for him.
stupid caroline, efffing bitch.

update soon, yeah? :D

AND OH. look! sabrina quoted that line you were feeling awkward about!
and apparently, she got teary eyed. so you had no reason to be like "D:" about it.

"That..." I opened my eyes, staring at Oliver with worried eyes. "Was the beginning of the end. That baby will never have a stable home life."

:/ I got teary eyed.
Poor unborn child, poor Tom and damn his babies mama.

& Blake is seriously freaking me out.

Ughh can Caroline just go away?

Caroline is the biggest bitch ever, i'd like to cuntpunch her in the mouth. And the way I read it she got pregnant on purpose and wanted Carol's ring to herself right? If i'm not please tell me, but gahh I don't like her one bit.

Woo

Caroline got told
I officially love Christian even more for that, haha
And i loved the when Tom came in, started to shout and then ended up just slagging her off, ha

I get more addicted to this story every time you post a chapter.

= )

i totally read this before you posted it. yes ma'am. :B

god, caroline's a whore. i wanna shove my foot up her butt.
& christian needs to know wtf is going on with blake.

D: i'm so addicted to this story, update sooon!

So that's where he was! haha

& Everytime I thought I was done awing I'd end up awing again. D:
Also, I adored the article thing for AP Magazine <3

AWWWWW

I love this so much.
I loved the speech, it was so well written.
I was smiling through pretty much all of that chapter.
And I actually said "Awww" really loud at one point and got some weird stares of people.
But oh well I don't care and that's because your writing is amazing (honestly).

And I can't believe she's pregnant, I still don't like her very much though, ha.
And Tom as a daddy = woah!

Hehe

Sorry for not commenting recently, but I've been very busy

= )

cute, cute, cute. oli is cute.