Pretty Bird - Comments

So dinner was super cute, like ridiculously cheesy but i woul love to be on that date. Also, the whole 'There's a whole lot of perfection in the world, if you know the right places to look line was abso-freaking-lutely fantastic.

Aw. I love how you admitted the dinner was cheesy. It made it less cheesy haha

Unfortunately, 99% of the time, Oliver's hair did look better than mine.

It always looks better than mine, especially at this moment. I look like a hobo *cough*

Anyway! Epic update once again. I’m currently fuming with jealousy D:

& I’m not sure about Alena but I see Molly as a red head for some reason. Molly just sounds like the name a red head would have lmao

lee has a baby? awww. it's really sweet that Oli still took care of Cru=istiaan even though he wasn't to pleased with her and didn't act like a twat to her.

Wow this is intense!

SO I think that Blake and Tom should dump their dumb girlfriends because I don't like them.
and I think you should deliver curtis through my moniter so I can give him a hug.
and awwwh lee with a baaaaaaby. cuuuuuute.
and was it really an interview or is it was christian suspects?
and I have a hard time picturing a little tattooless oliver. but they wouldn't let a little kid have tattoos..... hah.

Ha! I beat you to updating *cough*

"He isn't going to be able to continue doing this much longer." Lee added. "I was working on guitar parts with him last night and he could barely hear me when I was more than 5 feet away from him."

I get really emotional when Curtis's' hearing is mentioned. I could use some confort food right now...

& aw! Lee's a daddy. Picturing him as one makes me giggle for some reason though haha

Epic update once again! Can I steal some of your talent? <3

I adored the first paragraph; you described Tom and Oliver’s similarities amazingly. Well the entire chapter was amazing of course but I favored that part <3

Dayum. Go Tom! I told you about him did I not? Lmao
I don’t care much for his girl friend though.
& I swear Oliver does have ADHD at times.

Oh, and Alena needs to go go go.

I love picturing Oli and Tom as babies. :3 So, Oli was kinda mean and it's weird that Curtis/Lee didn't know about the interview, and the meth :O Alena, is a very bad girl .

I love picturing Oli and Tom as babies. :3 So, Oli was kinda mean and it's weird that Curtis/Lee didn't know about the interview, and the meth :O Alena, is a very bad girl .

you. are. super. cool.
hope you know that. :D
noww, if we could just skip this whole "growing in different directions" crap? haha.

:D i lovelovelove this.
what i especially love is how you can be so humorous in your story, yet still maintain that proper writing skill so it doesn't come off trashy, you know?
gaaah, amazing.

update soon!

Awww Blake and Alena seem like a good couple
But still Oli and Christian for me

And Tesco was mentioned in it, hehe.
Very big store in England, I shop there when needed.
(Pointless little facts for you, ha)

Anyway I loved the update, and I'm happy you didn't split it because it gave me more to read!

= )

Hey! Do not insult Glassjaw! And they have God on their side, I am not going to piss off a van full of nuns. I am not going to give a big 'fuck you' to Jesus!
&
May the force be with you.

Were two of my favorite parts haha

& of course With me, he spoke slower, more sure to pronounce the ends and beginnings of his words.

That’s so sweet! Gah! You’re amazing & this story deserves an award <3
& I think I have some odd addiction to quoting parts of stories in comments D:

:) Blake and Alena seem to be a cute couple, obviously nothing on Oli and Chris but that's okay. Seems to me that they're doing great in England and it might just have been what she needed :), more soon I hope.

Double, sorry.

Also, I was happily shocked when I learned that Thomas, aka 'Baby Sykes', as I had affectionately nicknamed him, never tried to punch me, or take me on some sunset walk on a beach.
lmao Amazing!

Usually when I read an amazing story and it has a sequel, the first chapter and each chapter after is nothing but a hot mess. I seriously admire your writing <3

SEQUEL!!!

One of my favourites stories, and writers.
I can't wait to read more

= )

" and a few trips of me down there for me to actually consider him a friend."
lol that sounded dirty ! haha sorry, but I love it! It's amazing!

I love this, it's not like most sequels where everything starts out a total mess. It's a good change.

<3

So i actually thought at the beginning you were gonna say once Oliver left that day he left for good, and I'm really happy you didn't. Can't wait to read tehe rest.