Too Blind to See It! - Comments

ROFL I so agree with the comment above me about soccer players! But I want to add: I can't believe Jenna would go from a man's man to a little boy that chose a sport where he didn't have face big, burly REAL men 'cause he was probably afraid to mess his hair or break a nail. From a hockey player to a soccer player? I guess everyone has to slum sometimes....

Okay, I know everyone is really pissed off with Zach, and while I can't agree with him pushing his luck with trying to get laid and I can't condone that he was an offhanded asshole, I also can't stand Jenna. I don't know how many more goddamn boundaries someone can have when you're okay with jerking someone off and letting them do their business on your naked body and you're not against having their junk shoved in your face while yours is shoved in theirs. I think that pretty well blows boundaries right out the window. That's intimacy in a raw fashion. What she's doing is being a total cock tease. I'm all for a woman holding onto their morals and their beliefs, but when you're okay with a 69 and you're alright with a guy going down on you, lighten the f^&! up when he wants to have sex. Don't you think you've been giving him signals that if you're okay with all of that you're also going to be okay with sex? What I can't stand the most about her (and for people like her in REAL LIFE) is their holier than thou, I'm going to heaven and you're going to hell bullshit that they pull when someone doesn't live up to their expectations or live their live the way she (and many others do). I respect their beliefs, but what I don't respect is someone sticking their nose up in the air and ridiculing anyone that chooses to lives THEIR live in a different way. No one has the right to call you a slut or even think that about you because you have sex. You believe in no sex before marriage? That's fine. But just because someone else doesn't believe in doesn't make them a bad person. So shove your condescending, preachy bullcrap where the sun doesn't shine. There's also a part in the bible about 'do onto others as you want done onto you". Loosely translated, just 'cause you're pure and perfect in YOUR eyes, keep your gate shut and let people do what they want. It's not harming you so shut your pie hole. That's the kind of person Jenna is. Everyone else is below her. Including Zach because he's behaving like a normal, red blooded male. He could have any woman he wants yet he puts up with her whiny, frigid shit. She needs to thank her lucky stars someone like an NHL (who has women at his beck and call) sticks around. In real life, he would have been out the door a long time ago.

And when people are under tremendous pressure and they're hurt and frustrated and disappointed, they say shit and hurt the people they love the most 'cause those are the people that are around them at the time they need to vent. Does no one else realize what this man has been through? I'm Canadian and I'm still ecstatic my boys won, but the American team fought so hard and ended up losing in the most heartbreaking way possible! Nothing is worse than losing a championship in overtime!!!!! And then to have to lose on national television in front of millions of people? And feel like you let your entire country down? That's public humiliation right there. But maybe it takes someone older and a little more mature to realize that. To realize that these guys go through horrendous stress and pressure. Normal people freak on others for less things. We always hurt the people we love the most. So why is Zach any different? Get over it, peeps. He isn't perfect. And neither is life. And real, true love is able to accept someone AS IS. Not just accept a perfect ideal we build up in our minds.

Anyhow, although Jenna grates on my nerves, I still love this story. And I'm glad to see Zach finally behaving like a human being.

Looking forward to more!

What the hell woman?
Soccer players are hockey players who couldn't take the heat...just sayin.
More soon! :)

holy crap!!!
Zach is such a douche!!
A soccer player, huh? I love that. hahaha
I think you did amazing job!!
Can't wait for more!!!!!

uh, i don't really like the soccer player! and i don't think her plan is going to work. but i'm glad she said no!

ooooh man!!! don't tell me she's playing 'make the ex jelous!'!!

NOOOOOOO, NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!
Why did Zach have to be so stupid?! Grrrr
I loved the update though, just like always :)

Wahhh.
Rip my heart out all over again, Phoebe!
That was such a heartbreaking ending to Team USA's journey.
And Zach [in this] is an ASSHOLE.
Maybe this new dude will knock some sense into him.
But don't keep Aiden or whatever the hell his name is around for too long, please.
Oh & I legit laughed out loud when she said fuck.
More soon. <3

okay.. break my heart with the banner.. seriously.. i want to keel over with him.. :( that was legit one of the saddest days ever

My Boyfriend Plays for Team USA. 
can i have one?? even though i don't really have a boyfriend who plays for them...?? i think we could make it work

the Devils couldn’t seem to get past round two in the playoffs to make a real run for the cup.
ugggghhhh so true. funny thing is.. i'm wearing my zach shirt right now.. just realized that.

But the disappointment we felt as citizens of a nation defeated was nothing compared to the utter devastation I saw on Zach’s face, and the face of his teammates displayed for the whole world to see. 
shit.. this is so hard to read without not crying.. :/ like my heart still breaks and i get a bad taste in my mouth when i think about this.

Zach and his team proved them all wrong, but it would be little consolation to a group of guys who knew they could do it despite their critics.
amen but at least they weren't like "sliver sucks" like the women's team

Somehow I didn’t think Zach would look at it that way. He didn’t.
heart breaks

His touch wasn’t soft and loving like I had grown accustom to. He was rough and moved so fast, walking me backward toward my bedroom and savagely tearing at my clothes.
oh no.. oh no.. oh no.. this isn't going to end well..

His whole body tensed up and he froze over top of me. He looked hurt, dejected. I wanted to explain.
even though I want them to bang and all that, she did the right thing. it shouldn't be like that.. zach isn't himself and i think not only her but also him would have regretted it.

"You win the gold. You win the bronze. You lose for silver. We lost. My team lost. Silver is a fucking consolation prize."
I never realized that... and i never thought of it like that.. and even though it is sad.. that isn't the way it should be looked at zachary.. at least you got something.. other teams got nothing but embarrassment. you didn't embarrass this country. you made it proud.

"What are you sorry for Jenna? That my team fucked up the chance of a lifetime or that at the time I needed you most you said no."
I'm going to hit him. DON'T BE MEAN TO HER LIKE THAT ZACH! JUST BECAUSE YOU'RE PISSED DOESN'T MEAN YOU TAKE IT OUT ON HER YOU LITTLE SHIT! ohmygod. idk if i want to keep reading..

"That's not what I'm suggesting at all. I'm suggesting that you buy some sexy lingerie and walk around in it, let him know what he's not going to be able to touch cuz he's such a fucking douche bag."
HAHAHAHA! HILARIOUS! DO IT! that would teach him :D

"You said Fuck." We laughed still in our tight embrace and I knew at least I had Phoebe.
hahahahahah true :D

yes! i want zach's POV so that I don't hate him so much anymore. i know he is hurting, i get it. I was hurting after the game and I didn't even play, but that doesn't mean you turn your back on the people you love

Stuck between my pride and making things right with a woman that I'm madly in love with.
swallow it before it is too late. i swear to god zach. don't spend the rest of your life a bitter old man because your pride got in the way.

I'd keep the soccer ball and hand it to Jenna telling her that her soccer player left the building, but I was still here.
hahahahahahha. this is funny :D i love that picture. but wtf is she doing with a field fairy?

PHOEBE!
HALF THE TIME I FINISH THESE CHAPTERS AND I AM PISSED! COME ON!!!!!!!!!
STOP DOING THIS TO ME! *WAILS* MAKE THINGS RIGHT! YES HE WAS AN ASSHOLE! BUT THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER! FAJHJGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.... no words.. i don't have anything left to say.
this was amazing. but it is breaking my heart to read. :'(
im seriously upset.
update. makeitright.
:(

Poor Jenna!! I wish Zach wouldn't have treated her like he did. Hope they can work things out, can't wait to see what is up with her visitor!!

So Zach was a jerk in this chapter.
Whose Aiden? He needs to be just a friend. Nothing more.
Loved it! (:
Update soon?

thank you for this phoebe <3

By now we all know how overtime went.--unfortunately. damn canadians! must admit, totally wish real life replicated this story at that time though.

This Zach was new to me, so forceful and rough, but I trusted him. I completely trusted Zach. My one fear…this is not how I wanted to lose my virginity.--what a wake up call. now his desires are shining through...but its HER (my...whatever) virginity. she should get to decide how she wants to lose it...and being guilted into it isn't fair.

I don't know if I would have known my own name at that moment, the same moment when Zach had stripped down and crawled on top of me. I don't know how long he'd been talking, pleading, but I finally began to focus, not because of his words, but feeling Zach hard between my legs. "Please Jenna. Please," he said as things became more clear. "I need you Jenna, I need to be inside you.- not right zachy boy. you can't respect the boundaries when it's convenient then beg for it when its not.

"No Jenna, it wasn't sex. It wasn't. It's what we do instead of sex because you don't trust me." I was breaking down right in front of him. I couldn't keep it together. But he pulled no punches. "This…I can't do this!" he said pointing to me and my tears. "I have too much to deal with, too much!" He ran his hand through his hair. "I need a break Jenna. I need space." He walked through the door without looking back, closing it behind him.- ooooo i'm so mad at him for saying those things. way to be a dick and try to manipulate your girl into doing something she isn't ready for. maybe if he would have acted like he was actually in love with her..me...whatever...she would have given him what he wanted. he deserved to be told no. and i'm proud of her for sticking to her guns.

Somehow my Zach left for Vancouver, and someone else returned. *sad face*

I was a nasty fuck and I fought with her… about sex of all things. I pushed her to do it, something I promised I'd never do, then I did my best to make her feel bad that she'd said no.--very powerful line. so glad he realizes that he did everything he promised he'd never do to her. he's got a lot to make up for.

i liked it switching to zachs pov. i wanted to get inside his head...and i'm glad he's being tortured by how he treated her. the guy in the hallway? fabulous. he deserves to be punished for what he did...and the fact that he hasn't so much as text her in two weeks! what does he expect? now, i'm doubting that the kid is there for romantic...or sexual...reasons--at least on Jenna's end, but nonetheless it's still gonna be driving Zach crazy. lets see how he handles it :)

i can't wait for more!! i love my story! hehe. and i love you! :)

God! That's such bullshit. This Aiden character better just be a friend of hers. Haha
zach is waaaay better!

Who the freaking hell is Aiden?????? What the hell????? What the hell??????? That's all I have to say. I still love it ;) :) :) :D :D: D :P :P :P

Awe I feel so bad for Jenna!! I think this guy is just out to make trouble or Phebs had something to do with this.

haha you know what I think?
Aidan is one of Phoebe's ideas... or maybe Jenna-who-took-Phoebe's-advice's...
or something else is up, they're long lost friends or whatever

I'm pushing all negative, evil, bad suggestions and explanations far from my mind, if you haven't noticed :P

Ugh Zach was such a jerk for acting like that!
I'm not sure what to think of the soccer player
But I hope Jenna && Zach work stuff out
They are too cute when they are together!
More sooooon =)

I loooove this story!!! Update soon please, can't wait to read more!!!

i love your story! they are so cute together and i really hope you can update this one soon. it's one of my favorites!!!!!

What an awesome birthday plan! I should be so lucky... I wish. OK, maybe not for the Brazilian, but still! I feel her pain....

And then you bring in the whole Zach rushing home, looking for her and then finding her in his bed... awww....

Totally loving this chapter - BUT - big question... was the new underwear or not and is she referring to the other birthday present LOL?! Ace chapter - not so long for the next one...?

great chapter! so glad Zack could make it back...even if he was a little late! lol
can't wait for the next one!