Love Comes In Many Dangerous Forms - Comments

TAKE OUT THE SECOND GUESS ACTUALLY AND SORRY CAPS

ok first guess is Tristian, Second is Michael, Third is the werewolf King, fourth is the Demon King LOVE THIS STORY SO FLIPPING MUCH!!!!!!!!!

So good! I'm only on chapter fourteen right now, and this story line is well thought out. There's so much information; I love it! Actually, I was wondering it you could try reading my story "the box", and tell me what you think. You only have to read the first chapter.

just read your story and it's pretty good. but, um, why was he so interested in her to begin with? cant wait to read more!!

I've been at camp since June and then my English bf was visiting. He just left so I got some free time now. I'm glad I had more than 1 update to read.

This story is so exciting. I can't wait to know what happens next!

P.S. Shane and Cassiel are heating up!! >.< Love it!!!!

Better end fucking happy with bunnies and rainbows and color ful shit

So she's a reincarnation?!?
0.o

omg first off i really like this story and 2nd, your chapters are scaring me! it's like 2 something in the morning and I have to keep looking behind me while reading your story. it's so scary but good :) hahas

Blake...
Blake.....
Hmmm.
Where have I heard that?
Uhhhh damn...

I knew that it was him when you said that the person was a king a of a creature because in the otherother chapters you mentioned that in the council meeting you mentioned every king accept the demon king and you said that he had a twin demon and was related to jimmy. Yay i was right, but I could guess cuz I found this story yesterday, and I finished today!!! also Im a Zach fan but it seems to me that you want cassiel to end up with shane but you are the auther :)

.........After this I think I might actually be too shocked from the ending of this chapter to leave you a proper comment. I mean I'm like HOW???WHY??WOW???lol. I look at my "she needs some happiness already" line above and it's just feels so ironic now =/ After that horrifying birthday I feel like I was such a b*tch when i was all depressed about mine lol -.- And at first there was all this sweet sweet atmosphere between her and Shane, my little lovebirds xD, so i was kinda relaxed and then everything just had to be destroyed like always haha -.-' You really love being a party pooper, don't you? =P
So..yeah, besides the fact that Audrey's cool, and Hillary remained the biggest bitch ever till the end, I don't really have anything more to say. As for the death of her family, saying i felt sorry would be such a lie, as mean that might make me seem. I DID feel kinda sad about Colton though (yeah i know, such a surprise isn't it?xD) He died as he lived, a character who had no control of his life and was doomed to exist to serve others' purposes.WHAT I'M ANXIOUS TO KNOW AT THE MOMENT IS WHETHER JIMMY, SHANE'S PARENTS, AND ALL OF CASSIEL'S TRUE FRIENDS ARE DEAD TOO, 'cause if that's the case i'm gonna be effing depressed =(

News flash: Colton has gone back to a*shole land.And Athen was waiting there for him, along with the other new arrival, the guest star you could say, Zach. So all three of them are being douchebags and mean to Cassie now.Woohoo great lol. At least she's got her brother now and Jimmy.. And tomorrow's her birthday, some more horror coming...UGH LOL! SHE NEEDS SOME HAPPINESS ALREADY!
Such a terrible life she's had T^T Nothing more to say..waiting for "HIS" arrival =D

Bites nails....
Oh my shnap...
Well...
^_^
I still love Shane.
And well i think his dad's a douche.

First of all, I LOVE THE CHAPTER TITLE LOL! Especially the scenes where they're all like, "you knew about this?why didn't you tell me?" =P

~I sighed and started humming my lullaby, hoping that he would recognize it.
And he did, and I smiled as recognition spread across his face, “How do you know that?”
“You use to sing it to me when I was little,” I told him. “Whenever I was upset or I couldn’t sleep, you would sing it to Hillary too.”
“Hillary…” he spoke our sister’s name and he blinked.
“I also know that when I was born you gave up your humanity and your life so that I could live. And the tattoo on your back is ‘2245’. And the reason why we have our eye color is because of a genetic defect that was passed down to us from our grandmother. Your full name is Tristan Isaac Brooklyn. The last time I saw you was when we were working in the kitchen, cleaning the floors and the guards took you away from me, I was five years old and you were nine, and the last thing you said to me was that you loved me,” I continued.~ sooooooo sweeeet ^ - ^ <3

Did I mention that Shane's dad is an assh*le?-.-

Woooooo, the suspense about the whole thing with Cassie's Death Eyes is killing me lol T^T
I wasn't planning on saying this, but I keep having this bad feeling that Cassiel will either surrender to the bad guy and leave with him to save everybody else or let him kill her for the same reason..that is sooooo like her -.-' So basically, no matter how I look at it, I don't expect a happy ending.

Are they gonna make her immortal so she can keep living...
Cause I really think shane is falling for her hard...

Tristan Isaac Brooklyn better not eat his sister as a snack.
Dx t's all I'm sayin

"I leaned over just enough to see the few buildings that surrounded the bottom of the hole. They looked similar to the houses in the village – they were made out of old materials, metal, bricks, wood, and they were tiny.
I knew where we were. The humans, when they just found out that immortals existed, they went to hiding so they wouldn’t become food or a slave. They hid anywhere they could, separated into colonies, and they did anything to keep the human race alive. My grandmother and grandfather – when he was alive – were in one of those colonies."
For some strange reason I loved that part, I have a soft spot for old cities, houses, items and so on, it sounds adventurous and exciting wandering there.

“You’re so funny Mr. I’m-A-Full-Immortal-And-I-Can-Do-Whatever-The-Hell-I-Want,” I grumbled, climbing sluggishly up the wall, and Shane kept pace with me holding the torch so I could see where I was supposed to place my footing" XP

'Um,' Zach frowned.
'Please tell me you didn’t think that we were just going to walk in there and take them,' I sighed.
They said nothing.
I groaned, “How about we go in, explain, and if Blaine’s brother is there, we just take them and run like hell?”
'Sounds good to me,' Shane agreed.
LOL!Talk about careful planning =P

"The walls looked like more like tinfoil than steel, claw markings and dents decorated the room. Red and black blood coated everything; the immortal blood dissolved the metal like acid. But the one thing that stuck out the most was the two pairs of blazing red eyes glaring at us through blood lust."
Wonderful description!

The part where Cassiel almost get killed was very exciting as well, and got me nervous and thrilled at the same time.The ending of the chapter was awesome as well, “He wants her, dead or alive, but he wouldn’t kill her unless there was no other option. He wants her soul one way or another.”

Overall, great job as always. I'm curious to see what happens between Cassie and her brother =)

Ohh
and I see lots more people like's Shane...
Team Shane

I'm going to look at chapters past.
See if I can find the name...

You're welcome!! P.S. I <3 Shane!!!! Update soon!