My Calamity - Comments

I know this is drama, but there's a very peaceful air about your work, probably because of the layout. They are awesome by the way.
The beginning really explains pretty much her personality.
The common mistake seems to be dialogue tags as Gyllenhaal. had mentioned above. Also when it is the end of a character's voice, there isn't a comma, use a period.
Ex: "Here we go." not "Here we go,"
Also I think you might want to capitalize Mom, a direct address.

I like it.

One word, Amazing! Haha. Update! :D

I LOVE IT!
UPDATE SOON.

This is just an amazing story so far! <3
Love it!
Well done. :D
Your descriptions are very good and your writing style is simple, yet unique.
Lovely!
I have subscribed. :3
<3

I love it.

The layout is awesome.

I like the way this is written.
It's very smooth and you make it seem simple, yet intense.
Which I love, it's a very pleasant read so far and I'm only half way through the chapter.

I did notice one thing though.
When some speaks for example:

"You should dye your hair." Lexie says turning - it should actually be a comma after the word hair, because you have Lexie says. If it's an action then yes it would be a period.

Does that make sense?

Great job of this and the description is wonderful.

I like this. I love the little images you have.
And your character biographies.

Oh, just as a reminder, please credit me for the graphic I made you.

I really like this.
It's pretty good description-wise and the complexity of the characters is great.
:D

Wow, this is really good. I love the characters, and I love how the sisters act. I like that Penelope is happy in her own skin, and I loved the last line. I really want to see where this goes, and I can't wait to meet Patrick!

So, this is really wonderful.
Everything flows really well, and you have the perfect amount of description.

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo185/rosiegal16/tumblr_l45vud5Q3W1qag73jo1_500_l-1.jpg

Just made that really quickly

This is absoultely amazing so far.
I love the details. I can really feel what she feels.
Excellent job.
*subscribes*