Let's See What You're Not - Comments

Lol. Nice to know your tactics. Nice update and I want some Shark scenarios. Keep it going

Well, now that you've started don't stop writing and updating! :D
This was a great Christmas present tho, I do really like this story :3
So yeah, Merry Christmas and have a great new year in case I don't manage to tell you later on!

Eeehhh I don't know how to feel! I feel like Shim won't react the way I want him to, and he might be overwhelmed by the people and gahhh don't know how to feel. Still hate Casper. THANKS FOR UPDATING! AND MERRY CHRISTMAS!

So after listening to like three Sick Puppies songs, I decided to reread this story. And for some reason, I still exclaimed "OH DEAR GOD I'VE REACHED THE END AGAIN" when I realized you hadn't updated in forever and there was no link to the next chapter.

Holy fuck that was a long comment.

Holy fuck that was a long comment.

When Marie was like "I'm glad Mark has a friend other than Emma now" to Casper, it actually hurt me and I hate her now. And I hate Casper too. And Nick fucking ruined everything and now Shim's scared to trust Mark and I hate it. They're all bitches. (Sorry that was rude). Anyway, HOLY FUCK YOU UPDATED. I COULD CRY. I kinda did tear up cause it's like "Nooo stop isolating Shim it's not his fault he's broken!" And then I laughed because Shim didn't realize Mark was gay, and I kinda figured he didn't get it yet even though Mark kissed him, so I was just waiting for that revelation, but then you made me sad again. Don't disappear again please. I'm all sad because another story I like just ended and nobody updates and I can't force myself to update because I wrote myself into a weird corner and don't know how to write myself out. Normally when I get writer's block I just have the characters spontaneously go to a party, but currently, one story is stuck in a fight, another has them being bullied by some old dude with thugs, and in the last one a character just had a suicide attempt... it's dark times and a party doesn't fit, so I'm screwed. Long story short, DON'T EVER LEAVE ME AGAIN.

Cute make-up sequence and innocence. Mark is so in love with Shim and just being a nice guy with Casper. <3 this still

Yayyayayayayay! I'm grinning ear to ear at this update. Seriously, this is one of the few stories on Mibba I still follow and I'm just so happy you decided to continue it. I was reading the chapter and it made me all happy and whatnot because they finally made up!! And it looked like life was turning up for the two and I was just so happy and then Shim finds out Mark is gay and BAM happiness diminished. I just hope that Shim can find it in him to put aside his little homophobe thing, although I know he has good reason.
Casper gives me the heebie jeebies, I swear if I could kill him he would be dead right now. I HATE HIM SO MUCH. Really great character development though, because I don't usually get his perturbed with characters. I'm so psyched to find out what happens next!
Take your time updating, but please don't make us wait a year again :)

Hey wow sorry I didn't comment on that last chapter up until now but I guess we both disappeared for a while, eh? I really want to know what happens next, you left us on such a cliffhanger. I absolutely love these two characters and it would be sad if I never got to see them again. I know how hard it can be to pick a story back up again though. I hope you do decide to keep writing. Love ya :) xx

Are you ever gonna update?!

Oh my goodness! This storyy is so flippin' AMAZINGGG*!!!! Can't wait for more (:

Awesome chapter! I can't wait until they work all this out. Update soon yeah?

fuck yes. because this excites me when they have sex i'll dance shim better go see him or ill rp his eye balls out with a sharp thing

It was random key bashing at first - my excitement made it hard to function. But I'm just happy at the progress. And ohmygosh, Shim did come back to Mark! I wasn't expecting him to be at the game at all. Now I can't wait to see what happens next!
Ignore anything else that I say that doesn't make sense. (Nothing I say makes sense).

I am glad for the update! I have been looking forward to it! :) I can't wait for the next one. I don't understand Casper. He is one way with Mark and a totally different way with Shim. What he is doing to Shim is uncalled for though. I can't really like him. No matter how nice he is to Mark. Hopefully Mark finds out what he does with Shim and stops hanging with him. Idk whatever you do I know will be great! Keep up the good work lol

I am so happy you updated!!! It was like a long awaited surprise. After I read this chapter I was so excited that there was more I didn't want to stop reading and read the whole thing over from the start. Please write more. It made my day when I got home from classes and saw that this story was updated.

i will never forget this story no matter how long you take to update xD it's not like learning vocabulary where you forget the meaning of the word the next day. your stories just find themselves places in my mind and heart and nope, won't budge x3

oh fuck yes!!! >:D mark will be the prince in shining armor who beats the shit out of them and comes to save poor shim xD

I always end up rereading the previous chapter for a story, multiple times when trying to update my own stories because I want to pick up on things I left off on or even use details I mentioned in chapter one that haven't been used at all yet. I also find that I am totally driven to update stories after a reader comes out of nowhere and comments "Why did you stop updating?!" People pay attention to these things. So even if it took a year for you to update, I'd still be super excited to read it and pick back up on where we left off at.

I don't really have the answers. I don't have a problem finishing sentences. I have a problem writing too much at a time, or not being able to write anything at all. Writing is hard. But I can't imagine my life without doing so.

Oh and, OHMYGOSHSHIMISCHANGINGI'MSOPROUDOFHIM. RUNTOHIMSHIM. RUNTOMARKYOUNEEDEACHOTHER!!!!

I'm sorry if you can't read any of that. Just know that I'm picturing Shim and Mark slowly realizing that the other person is standing at the opposite end of the beach, and as the music swells, they slowly get closer and closer together until they fall in a heap of love and public indecency on the beach.

Yep. This is what I do with my writing skills. I spam stories with freaky comments.

YAY YOU ARE BACK!!! and that was a awesome chapter!