Let's See What You're Not - Comments

Oooh something big. I'm excited!

Oh Marky, he's such a strange guy. In a good way.
Just talk to him dude!

Poor Shim. I can picture that spare kit. Ew. Burn it! Don't touch it! Burn it!

Yes, you updated! And because of me? AWESOME! :)
The whole smiling widely, people noticing, weird stares thing happened again though. But i don't care,.. because you updated! :D
I like this chapter, it seemed kinda fillerish but i like that we can see how he's affected by everything. I can guess what happened with his aunt, but i definitely don't want to be right. I just want everyone to get along and love each other and live happily ever after! Is that too much to ask?! Well, i can wait because i don't with this to end. But that better be how it ends okay! ;)
I shall stop rambling and wait (im)patiently for your next update!

OHHHHH SHANKKKYOUUUU!!!!! ^-^
your soo nice :)
and AWESOME UPDATE!
you need to do more of those often (UPDATES I MEAN NOT THE GOOD PART YOUR AMAZING)
soo yeah get to it!!

Awww they accepted him :')
I had a massive smilebon my face when i saw this updated. People looked at me funny. It should happen more often? ;)
I can't wait to see what happens!

this is great i love sick puppies and cant wait to read the rest

I like it so far
and well My World literally is the theme song to my life

Please write more!I'm loving it!:)

I like this, it's different to anything i've read before.
Keep up the good work!

I like this so far. I've only read the first chapter, but it's off to a really great start! I feel so bad for Shim with his rough home life :( I kinda like Emma, she's not that bad. I'm excited for Mark to show up, so I'll probably go read the rest of the chapters! Great job so far :D

IS THAT SUIT GUY MARK'S DAD?
WHEN HE WAS TALKING TO MARK ABOUT STREET MUSICIANS,
WAS HE TALKING ABOUT SHIM!?

I'm a good detective.
I think.
xD

SHIM IS A STREET MUSICIAN.
O____________o

Aww, I jus wanna hug him. Squeeze him tight. =] I'm lovin' this story.

You know, I don't even listen to Sick Puppies. But I don't really care. XD

... For a girl!?
What's that supposed to mean? D<

... An awesome butt?
Ew. XD

This is cute so far. Is it weird that I was listening to the Sick Puppies just before I read this? I remember seeing them live in '07; it was 11 am and they were trying to get everyone to rock out and people were like "... no way man."
Poor Mark ):
I noticed one mistake in chapter two, though. I sort of like settling dept.
It should be I sort of like settling debt.
:)
Good job so far!

I love it! You've really grown as a writer- and it shows beautifully. I can't wait to see this tale unfold. =] made me a bit more better. Your stories seem to do that

Not because I have some weird connection with the toilets or anything.<--- I lol'd so hard. XD

Aweeeee. Poor Mark.
Shim is such a butt :(

Aww... I just love Shimon. I love bad boys so yeah. I can't wait for this Mark guy to show up though. Emma is just awesome! I love this story. You got me hooked and it's just the first chapter!